Guptachar aur sainik gaye teil lene!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know what happens when you praise the writers?Two days later they give "Babaji ka thullu".
See this gets me wondering if the same writers are part of this as well. Be it story telling or how the characters are advancing.

Character butchering officially started today btw! The minute consistency in the characters starts deteriorating,its our cue card for disaster!

Now Chandra going to Seth-sasur was still okay. What was not okay,is how he agreed at the end and how Durdhara just randomly begs him to marry her. The issue at hand was not convincing at all.

Also,though I didn't mind the pace so far,but I wanted Chandra's realisation of his true identity to be a bit longer. It isn't a switch you can just turn on! Just like there are 5 stages to grief,this needed some stages too. Ainvayi chala yalgaar ho bolne!

Now Nandini *facepalm* 😳

The Moora scene for starters. Just when I had started feeling that she is oblivious to her father's atrocities,because of which she is so defensive,she goes and does this 🥱 Didn't she even feel like asking Moora what she actually is referring to? AInvayi aa gayi bhaashan de kar jaane What i feared the most has now begun.

No matter what's one's designation is in this story,if you're an Ekta heroine,you will do practically everything under this sun.

My title "Guptachar aur sainik gaye teil lene" is for this naive and stubborn child.

Why is it that the soldiers and guards in this show are so useless? Practically invisible outside this madam's chambers everytime there is apparent danger (Even when Chandra entered,there were daasis waiting outside,god knows for what-probably to scream when a handsome prince comes 🥱),but no sign of soldiers. What kind of security is this for a princess?

And she just randomly goes out of her palace.

Why did she have to go snooping? If she was a even remotely smart,she would sent a spy (guptachar),but no,she had to go herself with zilch soldiers and a silk shawl wrapped around her.

And even these soldiers outside the tent,weren't even slightly suspicious of this person looking like a dacoit with that shawl?

*taaliyan*👏

Why can't they just concentrate a bit on character sketches and make these people look realistic? They gave us a Helena,who is the closest to sensible character sketch these so called writers have given us. Why can't they do it with all?


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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think they will potray Nandini's character as grey for some time in this show!!
but how did she know the exact location of Cgm.. 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
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GPS connection darling 🤪
I doubt these people are capable of writing a grey character. That needs some amount of finesse. This is just a lot of loose ends and half baked khichdi. Even if Nandini is supposed to be mean and selfish,there must be a convincing reason behind it. I thought I sensed it a while back,but I see none now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

No comments😳😳😳

why not😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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But when did this show have any kind of affinity for logic 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You always write everything that I want to say about the episode.
Now how can nandini go out alone, that too at night?? 😳
Not only that, she reached his place and witnessed his wedding too.🤓
When she is very sure of his father's and brothers power then what's the need to go out and spy on him?? Her father is a king.. don't he have brain to ask a spy to keep an eye on chandra and chanakya?? why she had to do that, for her family?? Because she's a girl and it is Ek's show. She has to act like mahaan and brave but nandini's character is irritating.

Chandra and durdhara scene was nice but how the hell durdhara knows that where chandra is staying?? OK If she knows then how can she too come out like this to him, at night when she has her faher at home??🥱
Because she too is Ek's heroine and here in 21st century. I can't go out alone after 8🤔

I like chandra denied to marry her at first because she's a friend and he knows what she wants but it's quite weird when he said, "Toh iss baat ko yaad rakhna hmesha ki kabhi patni hone ka hak nai jatoagi", something like that. He's taking money from her father and Suddenly, his tone was hoarse as if he's doing favour to her. 😲Thank god, there was no aah aah.. in background that dur was already in love with CGM so it's fine.😆

So far, I like helena's character only but wanted to see chandra and helena scenes before ch-dur's wedding.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sp108

But when did this show have any kind of affinity for logic 😳

Uhh Monday's episode? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty


You always write everything that I want to say about the episode.
Now how can nandini go out alone, that too at night?? 😳
Not only that, she reached his place and witnessed his wedding too.🤓

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When she is very sure of his father's and brothers power then what's the need to go out and spy on him?? Her father is a king.. don't he have brain to ask a spy to keep an eye on chandra and chanakya?? why she had to do that, for her family?? Because she's a girl and it is Ek's show. She has to act like mahaan and brave but nandini's character is irritating.

Chandra and durdhara scene was nice but how the hell durdhara knows that where chandra is staying?? OK If she knows then how can she too come out like this to him, at night when she has her faher at home??🥱
Because she too is Ek's heroine and here in 21st century. I can't go out alone after 8🤔

WORD!

I like chandra denied to marry her at first because she's a friend and he knows what she wants but it's quite weird when he said, "Toh iss baat ko yaad rakhna hmesha ki kabhi patni hone ka hak nai jatoagi", something like that. He's taking money from her father and Suddenly, his tone was hoarse as if he's doing favour to her. 😲

This! When he disagreed,I was like yeah makes sense,he cares about her. But then he says something so blatantly,it just implied what he,at first was denying. He is marrying her for money. And he is telling her don't expect anything from me,if he cared about her even a little,he would say no such thing. This is bad writing that's all. Its liek different scenes are being written by different people.

Thank god, there was no aah aah.. in background that dur was already in love with CGM so it's fine.😆

So far, I like helena's character only but wanted to see chandra and helena scenes before ch-dur's wedding.

Yeah,that would have been interesting. We don't know what she thinks of this.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Actually this going invisible with a cloak is a standard feature.
Two of CGM BBz are fond of that..
Remember Helena also knew the location of chandra she just wrapped a cloak went straight to chandrus cot and instead of sending messengers herself did the job..
Here nandini also does this
It means there will be many more night out I go..tadaaa I got it... in this serial
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Posted: 8 years ago
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They did the same in JA as well. They gave a very charming Jalal - Ruqaiya relationship with the Smiley Ruqaiya. And a heroine who is typically Ekta's with all her serial siddha adhikaars of bhaashangiri, i-am-always-right, naari shakti, nayi soch jagat maatas. Nandini too is just another blinkered miss-know-all. Helena is excellent so far. Soon they will make her screech, throw things around, plot and don the vamp mantle.😡

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