important question: which asya story to write? lost love or first lov

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys,😃
Most of you don't know me as I have joined only very recently and have only one post which is the prologue of my story dear zindagi. But then my exams started early, so I couldn't come to the forum to update or reply. But now my school is about to close soon, so I am back but with another idea in my head. So now I am confused about which one to write first( yes, the second one will come after I finish the first one). So my dear readers tell my which one will you like to read first. Here are the options.

1. This one is dear zindagi. You can check out the prologue to know more about the plot and storyline. This is about the beautifully awful thing called first love which has knocked at all of our doorsteps at some point of time. In Zoya's life that was Asad, a stranger' whom she has known since 7th standard, read with him and competed fiercely with him all her life without the two ever even saying a simple hi. Now after six years, in New York City, the two come across each other again and this story is about this tale which never even began, get its ending. This is a more fun, cute and urban love story with fresh and realistic scenes and romance and told in the chick-lit style😳

2. Now comes the trickier and complicated one ( rubs my hands). The story starts from the muquaddar ka khel track where at the end Zoya's life-long belief about marriage, her confusion and her love for Asad but also her extreme guilt towards the SM people end asya's relation( Don't groan guys, I know your pain but the good part starts from here) now after three years, AWAY from all the family drama and clichs, asya meet in Paris and the story takes constant unexpected turns. It is an ABSOLUTE suspense thriller( not gudiya factory, relax) and very intense, passionate, aghasty, dark( hopefully hot too😳) romance. It is a total different from the original show😃


So two stories of two different flavours. Now tell me what is your pick? Spread the news guys and tell me your choice and help me to take the decision. Hurry up. I am planning to update soon after 18th of this month. Thank you 😃


PS. sorry for the trouble guys. I wanted to make a poll but due to some technical problem, am unable to do so. so had to make a post. please don't go without leaving your opinion. only have type the number of your choice. thanks again😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will go for both 😃😆
OK 1st one. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okk would definitely love to read both
But which story is in your head right now
Which story will give us frequent update
Without u having writer block,being stuck and brain freeze
So give us the one tht will flow likw water
And so we can read tht and then quickly move on to thw next
And maybe in between both u may get a third idea
Ur choice both sound great
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I go for 1.
Why will Zoya live wid SM people for 3 years in 2nd story n wat guilt?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Definitely first one.
Please please please please .
First one .
Update frequently
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Posted: 8 years ago
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For sure 1st one

Mujhe toh muqaadar ke name se bhi dar lagta hai ..jo bhi hua QH me uske baad se 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Okk would definitely love to read both

But which story is in your head right now
Which story will give us frequent update
Without u having writer block,being stuck and brain freeze
So give us the one tht will flow likw water
And so we can read tht and then quickly move on to thw next
And maybe in between both u may get a third idea
Ur choice both sound great
Waiting

first of all thanks a ton anopama for such a thoughtful and lovely comment. It means a lot 😃
For your answer, where the second story is roughly almost ready in my mind, the first story you can litteraly say is my own story. Every thing there is my exact life almost where I am at that point of leaving 'him' and though I dont know what will happen after six years, the story still comes naturally to me. So at the end I would love to know your preference too 😃 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I go for 1.

Why will Zoya live wid SM people for 3 years in 2nd story n wat guilt?

thanks for the reply juhi 😃 and have you read the prologue of dear zindagi? 😳

Now about your quarrels.
1. Zoya didn't live with SM people. She left the house soon after N's marriage and Zoyaan ( 🤢 ) ended too. She went too paris after that and is living there for three years 😃

2. This is inspired from that wreched hospital scene. The result of my frustration and annoyance over the whole thing. She is someone who believed she would never her 'marriage' no matter the circumstances. And she said that though she didn't but the 'world' believed that marriage and the constant nagging of SM people was making her feel guilty. So hence the guilt .

Actually this story comes from my anger over that track. But instead of solely bashing asad this story sheds light on some angels too and some different things too. Though this steams from that track but it actually has NOTHING to do with that track. It is also a urban style one but with dark romance.
I hope this plot is little more clear now. And you dont get angry on me for my different take on this. Actually I quite like to see things from unusual angels and really scared about it
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

Definitely first one.

Please please please please .
First one .
Update frequently

sure sure 😉 😆
Thanks for showing so much love🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: IGNITE

thanks for the reply juhi 😃 and have you read the prologue of dear zindagi? 😳

Now about your quarrels.
1. Zoya didn't live with SM people. She left the house soon after N's marriage and Zoyaan ( 🤢 ) ended too. She went too paris after that and is living there for three years 😃

2. This is inspired from that wreched hospital scene. The result of my frustration and annoyance over the whole thing. She is someone who believed she would never her 'marriage' no matter the circumstances. And she said that though she didn't but the 'world' believed that marriage and the constant nagging of SM people was making her feel guilty. So hence the guilt .

Actually this story comes from my anger over that track. But instead of solely bashing asad this story sheds light on some angels too and some different things too. Though this steams from that track but it actually has NOTHING to do with that track. It is also a urban style one but with dark romance.
I hope this plot is little more clear now. And you dont get angry on me for my different take on this. Actually I quite like to see things from unusual angels and really scared about it
😳


Ya a, I read it DZ prologue n loved it

I just asked 2 line question. Where I got angry wid u?

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