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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: awesomepooja

Amazing story...

I loved the concept and every part of it...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Kathputli
Part. 6.

M. Geet I know all the day was very stressful for you (she lower her eyes and gulped her saliva remembering that time Maan can see all emotions which were playing on her face) come now have this food (saying this he took his clothes and went to wr and Geet was confused seeing his this behaviour as he didn't done anything wrong with her and he was polite with her also he was making her relax and comfortable and when he come back he saw she hadn't eaten anything then he asked her) Geet why you haven't eaten this do you need anything else (she was just looking at him but then she compose herself and then said slowly while looking down.

G. Jii who (she didn't know how to say but still she was shivering from inside then slowly she said him) Jii actually you also have tired day like me and I think you also haven't anything and it will not look good if I eat and you doesn't eat anything (Maan was just looking at her and he felt good that in this situation also when she had seen worst she show her care towards him and then smilingly at her he said.

M. Come we will have dinner (she slowly look at him and then they both sit and had their dinner quietly. Later they both were sleeping on the same bed but there was little gap between them as bed was small and thinking of today they don't know when the sleep took over both of them.

Next morning Geet was the first one who wake up look at them room and now she thought now this is my house and I have to take care of it thinking of this she went and get ready as she bring her clothes with her after getting ready she went down saw the house in which upstairs contain 2 room one which is there which contain wr and other is nothing, down there is one room also store and big lawn also there is one wr outside and there other side is small kitchen and she also notice that there was no proper time of light or say mostly light was not there. She went in kitchen there was no gas nothing there was firewood and with the help of that she try to make food it was difficult for her but she tried and while trying sometime she little burn her fingers but then she control herself and clear her tears and continue her work. She make simple breakfast for him like pharata, tea etc she finished her working she turn back and saw Maan was looking at her she immediately stand up and also lower her eyes also due to nervousness she hold the duppata in her hands.

Like always Maan woke up then go fresh up and after getting fresh he thought to make the breakfast for himself like always he do but when he saw a bag then he remembered the yesterday's event that he is no more single but he already married and then he thought that where is Geet he went down, he heard some voices from kitchen he move there and saw she has already made breakfast and he stay for few minutes, he also notice when she saw him she became nervous and then he try to remove her nervousness he said.

M. Geet why you did this (she look at him confusingly also she feared that she did something wrong and he become angry also she felt like crying. Seeing her expression he understood then he said) I mean why did you make breakfast alone you should have call me I would also help you (she become little relax listening to him)

G. Jii its Okk I did this (then while looking at him) Jii you should get ready till then I will get the breakfast ready (while looking at him Maan nodded his head then start to move their room but then Geet called him) Jii who (Maan turn when she call him it was first time she called him other wise he will ask her and then she will answer and then he was just looking at her) Jii who actually where will you have your breakfast. (Maan look at her and then said her

M. Geet where you want we can have breakfast together also you can do anything this is your house and you don't have to ask anything from me you can do anything what you want. (Saying this he left and Geet was just looking at him then continue her work and then took breakfast in their room where Maan was now reading file. Then they had breakfast after that he asked her) Geet I know you will missing your family members no if you want you can talk them and you will also feel better (listening about her family Geet closed her eyes and remember about her parents and also her bhai Bhabhi then taking deep breath she said.

G. Jii I don't have anyone now as my parents died few year back in accident now (she was unable to speak) now after yesterday incident bhai and Bhabhi disowned me as they think it was my mistake (Maan felt sorry for her and then he said her in usual hard voice which scared Geet.

M. Geet you shouldn't feel guilty as it was not your mistake but it was dev mistake and you don't worry we know the truth also from now we both are each other family (listening to him she look at him) and now Geet I am getting late for work now I am going and lock you the door (before he could say anything they hear the knock then they move down and before Maan could open the he turn towards Geet there he saw she had set her duppata in her neck then he didn't want someone say bad to her then move towards her, Geet was confused seeing him coming towards her also she feared as he come and stand in front of her. Seeing this she look down and then Maan slowly put dupatta on her forehead and said)

M. Geet remember that when you go out you should cover your head duppata other wise village people will never leave any chance to taunt you (she nodded her head and then Maan move to open the door there he saw few village ladies, his chachi and his friend Adi and his wife pinky had come. Maan was confused seeing them

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Edited by T.Peru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you friends who like & commented on previous update
Sorry for late update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

amazing part,cont soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
geet was relaxed with maan as he didn't do anything bad with her both ate dinner together and than slept
morning geer made bf and both have it and nowsome guest came to their house
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Posted: 8 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

geet was relaxed with maan as he didn't do anything bad with her both ate dinner together and than slept

morning geer made bf and both have it and nowsome guest came to their house


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Maan is so nice to geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Maan is so nice to geet
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! well written! Maan is nice to Geet! he assures her! update soon

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