An Omkara Drabble: Overpowered

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Adrenaline pumped through his veins as the monster entered his body once again.
Blood rushed through his body as it got what it urged what it needed.
Whenever he didn't pay heed the monster would summon him.
An escape that's what it was. An escape...
From the harsh reality of life...
With the monster he entered another dark world.
A world; where, nobody could find him.
A world; where, he could drown in his sorrows...
Alone...
With the monster...
Overpowered by the darkness within his own soul...
The darkness, which called to him...
He was a fighter...
Overpowered...

Hey guys this is the first time I have written anything with so much angst, I hope I have done justice to Om 😳 I really wanted to pen down how he may have felt; when, he was taking drugs 😳

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Thanks dear 😳
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Om-the addict! Well-written, Angel 👏
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woahhh short yet angst filled its amazing angel
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It was amazing ! The angst was correctly put. You will be an amazing writer when you grow up Angel 🤗
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Thank you so much dear 😳
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Originally posted by: twerping

Om-the addict! Well-written, Angel👏

Thank you so much Rikhiya 🤗 Your comment has truly motivated me to write more 😳
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Originally posted by: Toota_ShiSha

woahhh short yet angst filled its amazing angel

Thank you so much Jessi 🤗 Comments like yours make me break out in to a smile 😳
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Originally posted by: preity_d

It was amazing ! The angst was correctly put. You will be an amazing writer when you grow up Angel🤗

Preity!!!Thank you so much 🤗 This comment means a lot to me coming from one of the most amazing writers I know and the faith you have in me truly inspires me Thank you so much dear 😳 🤗

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