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Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Hi Kriti 🤗
Congrats on your very first fic here on IF and SR forum 😊I liked the themes of regret, remorse and forgiveness which you explored here. Though the story was tragic, the pathos itself had an earnest, genuine ring to it. I can see where you are coming from regarding Sanskaar's stance...it really would not be easy for him to forgive and forget the fact that Swara had walked out on their marriage.But she showed that her remorse was genuine, that her love for Sanskaar was indeed powerful and irrevocable. Alas, she could only do that by shielding his life with her own...If only, if only, she could have chosen better months back, this particular moment, tragic and heartrending ; need never have happened. 😭A nice start. Look forward to reading more from you.LoveViji
Dear Kirti,
A very commendable story for a first time effort. You have brought out Sanskaar's pain and inability to hurt Swara, very well. And the tragedy is that even while saving Sanskaar, Swara managed to hurt him. A very tragic tale but beautifully written.Looking forward for more stories from you.Best,Nyna