TS: The Proof Chapter 1(upd@pg2)

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

love it so far! please update soon!

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shivani_agl

@shivani_agl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

AWESTRUCK!!😃
AMAZING😳

continue soon please :)❤️

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This is beautiful

Hope you are updatong it soon

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

How could u stop there??????

CONTINUE T_____T

P.s. And PM me your future works as well as works of previous if any.thanks 😊

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adyaa

@adyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is so good , u captured his emotions so well and her repantance .pls pm me ur future and last works
I couldn't send a buddy request

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wow , the 2 chapters are amazing. How did i miss them for so long. Yes, I love the sumo in your writing, she is apologizing for whatever she had done wrong in the past. We never saw a single proper sorry in the show (except that she wrote in a note to shravan). Being matured girl, who realized her mistakes and waiting for him for past 10 years need to show a proper redemption. Alas ! we missed that like many other things we missed. So reading this part now makes me feel better. Our innocent shravan had gone through many rejections in his teenage 😭.

It looks like you are to update another new chapter, can you please continue this asap. May be the chapter would be of about initial part of the story but we can still read it from there.

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

The title of the story suggests it to be most interesting!!! Your storyline is something unique👏 absolutely wonderful writing!!!!! Waiting for the next update!!!!!

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Woah...tht was amazing man 😃
beautifully penned❤️
really like the way u potrayed their predicaments..
Sumo is ❤️
looking forwrd for more plz update soonish.. 😳

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

amazing...
touching portrayal n beautifully written...
loved it...

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