RiShbala SS 'My Passion is... You!!' Prologue @pg 1 (27/10)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Before starting Some Important Suchna😆

Concept credit-- Seema
Title credit-- seema
Written by-- me

I heard the title song of Ae dil hai mushkil, and wanted to write a story on Rishbala But had no concept.. Sappy gave some initial idea & souwmiya suggested me talk to seema.. And Seema amazingly develop this concept. So, all credits of this story goes to seema.⭐️

Hope i will be able to justify the concept.
Dedicated to Seema, souwmiya, and Sapna. (s-friends)😆


My PassiOn iS... YOU !!
Prologue


"I askes u to stop" a man said sternly standing on a deserted street. The sky wearing the sheet of stars witnessing the happenings.
"And i dont wish to stop" a girl revert back in the same tone as that of the man, walking ahead of him.
"U cant talk to me like that" the man said coming forward, as the girl halts in her steps.
"Dont talk to me then" she said turning away from him.
"Listen to me" the man took long strides, grasping the girl's arm he made her turn to face him. The girl looks at him with hint of tears in her eyes & the man's face soften seeing her.
"U are over reacting" he said looking at her in her eyes.
"Yeah over reacting" the girl mumbled sarcastically & shoved his hands off her body "Whatever u think thats right.. Whatever u say thats truth.. And even if i react to ur truth, its becomes over reacting then !"
"U are taking it in a wrong way all over again" the man said frustrated.
"Just let it be then." The girl said dejectedly turning away. Neither she is gonna leave her ground nor he is gonna leave his ground.
"U're imagining things... There is nothing between me & her" he shouted making her halt in her steps.
"It dont feel so.. And stop lying to urself" she spoke softly looking at him & walk away with the Ache Of Betrayal in her heart, and the man looks on at her retreating figure with the Ache Of Distrust in his heart.
Mujhe aazmati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi


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SMASH !!
"Why did u do this ? Why did u do this to me ?" A man screamed falling on his knees in a confined space of four walls, in a Jail.
"Is our love this weak.. Or u are this weak.. Or i am not strong enough to hold u.." The man yelled, his voice not to be heard by anyone. It echoed & returned back to his ears. He throws an empty steel glass against a wall. He wants an answer, he wants to vent out his anger, pain, hurt but nothing is there, no one is there.
"Are ur promises were void ?...Is ur love fake..? U made me hate myself.. Now For whom will i fight for !!" He said as tears of hurt drop down his eyes.
"U taught this heart to love & u fill it with hate.." He looks up, his eyes blazing with various emotions broken trust, anger, hurt.
"HATE for you.. And hate for myself for loving u !" He said slowly but gravely.
Tune diya jo.. Wo Dard hi sahi..
Tujhse mila hai toh.. Inaam hai mera !


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In a beautiful decorated hall, people have gathered around enjoying themselves with drinks in hand. Admist them a handsome man descend down the stairs & all eyes moves to him.
"He is breath-takenly handsome" a girl whispered to another girl in the crowd.
"I know.. God took extra care to made him" the other girl said dreamingly.
The man walks to the center of the hall picking a guitar in his hand. His eyes moves around the hall as he starts playing a melodious tone, sitting on a tool, enchanting everyone. The lights got dimmed & feel some movements he looks at the stairs. Following his gaze other people too turn to see the object of his interest.
Elegantly a lady wearing a designer glamorous gown with open curls descends down the stairs looking stunning as ever. Some looks at her with admiration, while others looks at her, jealous of her beauty. She stops shading her eyes with her palm as a bright spot light falls on her. The man playing guitar continues to looks at her without removing his gaze from her. From behind another muscular man stepped down, standing beside her he tug her arms gently. The lady looks at him & he gave her a wide smile. Without responding The lady looks away from him, looking ahead no one at particular.
Holding her by her waist he starts walking downstairs. The man playing guitar clench his jaws looking at the duo, together being cozy. They stops at the corner of the hall & the lady's eyes falls on the guy playing guitar who is staring at her with unfathomable expression. she diverted her eyes from him & he changes the tune of guitar. He get the speaker close & starts singing lyrics matching to the tone gazing straight at the lady.
Tujhko me kitni Siddat se chahu..
Chahe toh rehna tu bekhabar..

How much ever she want she too cant take her eyes off his expressive eyes holding volumes. Meanwhile witnessing their eye lock the muscular man beside her dragged her to the dance floor.
Mohotaj maanzil ka toh nahi hai..
Ek Tarfa mera safar !

The lady was matching his moves unwillingly when the hall goes dark.
"Partner exchange" the DJ present there announced. Unwillingly he her go. Taking the chance the lady excused herself & moves away from the dance floor, away from everyone, she wants to be alone, just alone. She was moving when she was stopped by the same guy playing guitar earlier.
"Dance.." He offered huskily forwarding his hand. The lady gave him a hard glare & tries to walk past him. He smirk at her move & in nest moment he pull her to the nearest corner of the hall away from everyone's eyes. Ignoring her protest he pinned her to the wall holding her hands on either side of her head.
"what are u doing ?" The lady asked sternly wriggling in his hold.
"shh.." He shush her pressing his body against her leaning on her eyeing her lips. The lady closes her eyes taking a deep breath.
"Leave me.. RK !" She said feeling his warm breath on her lips.
"Neither anyone can order RK.. Nor anyone can ignore him" he said to her & place his lips on her luscious lips, sucking softly on her lower lip stunning her. Feeling him moving against her lips, she tries to push him off her with all her strength. In response RK grips her both hand on her back in his one firm hold, jerking her forward, crashing her body to his.
He bites on her lower lips hardly for entrance but she remains adamant being unresponsive to him. Rk smiled against her lips at her stubbornness & Sensuously roam his free hand on her curves at appropriate place making her gasp. Taking the chance he enters her mouth twisting his tongue with her, smouldering her, touching her sweet spot. Having his mouth on her her body was submitting to him unconscious & after few minutes she softly moves her lips against his letting him explore her mouth.
As she begins responding him, he pulls back & looks at her. She slowly opens her eyes & looks at him as he leave her. He smirks at her clearly indicating that he still have control over her body & her soul, how much ever she protest or denies.
She looks at him with unknown emotions in her eyes as he walks away leaving her alone in the corner.
Adhura hoke V, hai Ishq mera Kaamil
Tere Bina guzara Ae Dil Hai Mushkil !


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Prologue- above
Part-1 coming soon
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dharsii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First...
Unres..

Super start.
Lot of suspense.
At starting ,Why that two members fight with eachother?
Anyone in between them.
Is that boy RK?
Feel sad for that boy,He love her very much.
That's why he is crying for her.
She doesn't believe him.This hurts him more.
Who is that lady in party?
RK sang song for her.
She has eye on him.
Rk kissed lady.What is the flashback between RK and that lady?
Who is madhu ?Is that girl or lady.
I am eagerly waiting for ur update.
U wrote some song lyrics in between.
If u have time ,u will translate the lyrics in English.
Update soon...
Edited by dharsii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!
Unres..

Sorry for the extreme delay...
Exam is nearing.. So i hardly get time...

Okay.. Such a confusing start... Haha...
Seema's is the master minf behind this story nah? So it will be like this only... Nothing can be straight and simple in her stories... Everything so complicate and confusing... Haha... Its a compliment di...
Seema di & Aaniya pairing this time... Cool!
Aaniya u have written it so well... Seema di's thoughts and ur way for writing jells so well...

U have mentioned name only at the end... But just when i read guitar i knew it was Rk.. And the girl descending down the stairs was madhu... No doubt in that...
But what confuses me more was... The starting two paras... Even in those scenes... I could feel it was Rishbala... And Rk in the jail...
First... Rishbala's fight... Madhu mistaking Rk... And not giving him a chance to explain...
Then the man in the jail also so sounds like Rk... Bcos the words were so intense.. Like u taught me to love... I hate myself... And all... Only Rk can talk emotional scene with such intensity and feel... If u say its sultan or someone else in the end... I will so disappointed... But then I dont want Rk to be in jail too... Two conflicting thoughts... Haha... Guess... All the three scenes took place at different time period... Like... Rishbala misunderstanding each other and splits.. Then Rk does something crazy and ends up in jail... And when he comes out he finds madhu with another man... Haha... My imagination is running wild... U better post the updates and answer to my confusions...
Thanks...
Keep rocking my darling girls...
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story...aani &seema di !!!
and thanks for dedication...(aaj kal mujhe her story me milte hai.. 😛 ..and very happy for that )

title was amazing...
early waiting for this story ...dear. ..and u finally update...
full of suspens..
first boy and girl fight!!!
girl didn't trust him..
and boy love her lots...
& in party...
the guitar guy was rk..
and the girl is madhu..
only for madhu ...rk..passion was so high...!!
early waiting...update soon...
Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres
nyc + suspense full update
first two are love each other nd separate
next update will be clear something 😊
Edited by Supervampire - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aniya im just mesmerized wid d way u presented d prologue,well written will b an understatement..mesmerizingly mesmerizing..n d way u added suspense dats really out of dis world..im speechless..thank u so much fr penning it down..🤗
Edited by ...Seema... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glad to comment soon for this new story...should comment soon or my net would ditch me again

Congrats for the new story Aani and Seema di 😳
ANd yes the title is awesome. Thanks for the dedication to your S friends including me Aani 🤗

Interesting prologue...nice and meaningful song.
Seems that you wrote scenes from different time line...
Last part the guy with guitar is RK. And I guess the lady is Madhu...RK can have such passion only for her and no one else 😉

Nice portrayal of scenes! Are the characters in the first part Rishbala? Or some Sultan guy...? Curious to know the person in jail too...

Cont soon and thanks for the PM!
Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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prologue updated.. Pms later on with Nymphomania update in few days.. Enjoy..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue...curious to know the story😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinku2015

Interesting prologue...curious to know the story😛

thanks dear.. Glad to get a response from u..!!

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