RiShbala SS 'My Passion is... You!!' Prologue @pg 1 (27/10)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Supervampire
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nyc + suspense full update
first two are love each other nd separate
next update will be clear something😊

thanks dear.. Yeah.. These are just filters..!!

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ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Aaniya congrats on the new story.

What a prologue, totally intriguing.

Waiting to read more.

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: ananya2010
Aaniya congrats on the new story.
What a prologue, totally intriguing.
Waiting to read more.

thanks ananya.. glad u like it..!! Thankyou..!!

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Awesome Aaniya...

First of all congratz for new story to you and Seema di...

But I became confused!!
That girl suspected Rk in the first part or that was not Rk?..And other part ..jail...did Rk land up in jail or not..
And last...who was the other guy?..Rk kissed Madhu...and she finally reciprocated too...great...from Rk's talks, it is clear that they were in love before..

Hopefully we will get answers in next update!! Loved it!!

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Anntempleton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Superb start.
But so many suspense!
At starting were the two people arguing rishbala? seems someone is reason for misunderstanding .
Who is that lady in party? Is it madhu with that ullu sullu? She is looking for rk while he sang song for her.Rk kissed the lady i hope she is madhu. But was that the flashback between RK and the lady or something else? Waiting eagerly for next part.
Update soon.

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

@Kaustavi
Yeah.. The prologue is in 3 parts from different time period.. And thank you so much kaustavi.. Glad we managed to maintain the suspense of the story😉. Thanks for coming..!!