Characters sketch for Nibir's Ghotala story

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ok guys so on the nauc forum I gave intro of Bdsah characters and here I need to describe abt nibir & their story before I start my fiction!!
And also ghotala family ka chotu sa intro is here 😳

(I know its not needed but still likh di hu to dal diya😆)

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nisha a tomboyish , sensitive girl who loves her family lot and a boy who is a charming , cute , big flirt who else it can be than our kabiraa..

Nisha & Kabir:

What do I say about these two?
They are mad...
Equally crazy...
Ek pagal to dusra sarphira
They are cute , adorable and simply perfect!!
They share an amazing bonding
Understands eachother without saying a word
Love at first sight was not their case but they developed feeling for eachother with the passing time...
Staying together, knowing eachother they unknowingly fell in love...
Or u can say They meant to be together...
The two met in weirdest situation.. They fight , they argue , they unite to save a lil soul , they care for eachother , spend happy moments together , faced all the difficulties together and eventually started loving eachother...
This was their cute little love story...
They have always trusted & respected eachothers view even before they love eachother...

Ok this is now going too long bcz this is the biggest problem with me when I start describing nisha and kabir I can even write a book on them 🤣
still I m try to cut short it as much as possible !! I swear ... 🤔
Ok so ye to hua nibir ka character sketch but still there is need to describe some scenes also bcoz in my story ahead I will b writing abt them and nauc forum ppl will understand but may b Bdsah forum ppl won't !! so before we start I need tell aBT some scenes!!

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nibir life before entering in sunshine colony:
Nisha was heart broken when she met kabir first they fought on their first meet only
Then to take a break from her daily life she went on vocation alone to forget abt her past... there she again met kabir... they found a lil girl there and who was being kidnapped so they decided to save her and help her and take her back to her mother. In all this they entered in a samohik vivah center where they sat as bride and groom to hide from the kidnapper "Bhabiji"
and her goons but they never in life thought that they have sat there that long and unwontedly will get married there.

They saved the child and usko uski maa se milake they went on their ways... but destiny have planned something else for them...
so it bring him again in her life... he came in her house.. then the reality of their marriage came in front of everything however they tried to hide it so much but still it came oit and nisha's family again made them get married in front of everyone ...

they bought a new house and knowing kabir's nature everyone started loving him
but there was another son in law of house who was jealous of him bcoz everyone was giving him more attention ... his name was sumit & he was evil.. he planned a robbery in gangwal shop(Thus was nisha's family business) so sumit did the robbery and trapped kabir and made him culprit in everyone's eyes

Nisha & kabir understood wat might have happened so they again started keeping eye on sumit to get more proof and they got as sumit went to isolated place to sell those jewellery to someone that was a under construction building. Nisha followed him & even called kabir come there soon. she have recorded summit selling the jewellery to someone then went in front of them the buyer seeing nisha ran from there as she said wo usko jail karwadeGI chori Ke gehne kharidne k jurm me but suimit tried to snatch her phone in which the recording was.
sumit who was her elder sister's husband accidentally pushed her from a building but kabir came there in time saved her... actually no... she Fall from building but was taken to hospital and lot if drama happened there also.

There is one more person which I should mention is viraj (who was nisha's boss & her first crush , he was the one who broke her heart but then realised his mistake and tried to comeback in her life but till then nisha was already married to kabir and viraj have insulted her so many times thinking her to be wrong and wen he realised his mistake now he wanted to start a fresh with nisha but she denied and chose kabir over him but viraj didn't back off and was always around her) and when this matter came ... Kabir was now blamed that he pushed her. as he went in building to save nisha from falling but he stood there like a statue as he could not save her and she Fall the building... viraj don't know from where came there and saw this scene and thought that kabir pushed nisha from building and told this to everyone.

No one knows abt this recording of nisha . police cAME and arrested kabir in attempt to murder case.. but he ran away somehow. Nisha needs blood but there was not available in any blood bank. only sumit have the same blood group. kabir got that phone but sumit blaikmailed him saying if he wants him to give blood to nisha then give the phone to him and surrender saying he did it all and kabir having no option agreed to him.

Later when nisha got well the first thing she asked was kabir... and got to know that he is in jail.
she got a letter from kabir which he kept under her pillow before he surrendered to police.both nisha and kabir are now in love with each other. reading that letter which says "shayad hmara sath yahi tak tha"
nisha decided she will prove him innocent and take him out of jail and with help of her cousins she did that!! sumit gof arrested and kabir bailed. Dolly divorced sumit
but before things can get better and nibir confessed their feelings to each other here entered kabir's mother who was unaware of nibir marriage... she created troubles in nibir life coz she didn't wanted nisha as her bahu... but in end .. everything got sorted.

Knowing that it was all done by vasu(kabir's mom) nisha forgive her. that made vasu realise her mistakes..

nibir proposed each other and from then they are together!! 😊

Now its been two years to their marriage... They are now shifted to sunshine colony... let's see wat twist come in their lives coming here!!!!

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Last but not least... the GHOTALA family 😈

There are five ghotala's here 😆

A husband n wife(Vasant & Varsha) , their two kids(Hemant & shishir) and husband's brother(sharad)

This family is totally diff... they r likes from some other world!! (u can subtract the 'Like' word from this line also 😈 )

Inki harkaten I can't describe 🤣

Still I try... ummm

Vasant:
Vasant is the head of the Ghotala Family.He is a loving and caring husband,brother and father.
Caring helpful innocent he is.
His superpowers comprise of lifting heavy things, turning into inanimate objects, swirling like a toranto & running in super sonic speed. He had a special power in his hands that opens a blackboard in air & he can write anything on it.He mostly use this blackboard to correct Hemant's mistakes may what the situation be.

Varsha:
Varsha is the wife of Vasant and mother of Hemant and Shishir. She is a mother figure to Sharad. She is too innocent like Hemant and too emotional like Sharad. She has flexibility superpower by which she can become too tall or too short & she can also strech her hands till far away. She is little biased towards Hemant and doesn't like when anyone corrects/scolds him. She gets irritated whenever Vasant corrects Hemant's hindi and calls him Professor Vasant Ghotala angrily.

Sharad:
He is Vasant's younger brother . He is a logical thinker & can shut anyones mouth with his logical answers. His other name is Logical Ghotala too. He has the superpower of mental telepathy, mind reading, hypnotism not only on humans but also on non humans. He can also transform & take any human's form. He loves Anna and starts 'Yaya-ing' Whenever he thinks of Anna or anybody mentions her name . He starts saying "yayayayayaya" everytime wen there is something about Anna.His brother vasant calls him banyan getting irked by his antics. He is very caring as well as sentimental.

Hemant :
He is innocent, pure hearted , caring & helpful but have a defective brain🤣
He loves his parents & family and consider Bhairvi as his Elder sister. Loves to give company to ppl & things. Always speaks wrong words or mixed of Hindi&English or other weird mixtures of words he do🤣& His father correct him always & calls him genda being irritated.Actually he has his own style of speaking.😆

Shishir:
The youngest ghotala. He chubby & cute but most intelligent among all.He uses his computer eyes to look for information or to view a place live.

The five ghotalas have came to earth to search for 2015(who is eldest son vasant&varsha) 2015 is his alein name actually they all have name is numbering only(like vasant is 9211 & varsha is 1721) but they changed their names in human names to live in human world. Finding their son is the only aim which bring them here.

The 3 families which I mentioned knows that ghotalas are aliens and they are different and doesn't know many things about human world but...

What will happen when a new Family(nibir) join them?
What will happen when someone came to live in the house next to ghotalas? How will they Hide their reality? To know more stay tuned 😉

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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There are 3 people in this family

A girl , her bother & brother's wife

Anna(The girl) : she is sweet n simple , most intelligent among her family , loves sharad ghotala and her fav dialogue is "OH MY GOD , I DON'T BELIEVE THIS!!"

Ronny dsuza(brother) : He is good at heart , has a helpful nature but he always get stuck between words while saying something than say weird things !! 🤣

His fav line is "Tum samjha na men!" 🤔 (u will understand his role when I write the story 😆 )

Liza(brother's wife) : a sweet lady , caring n loving. she is mostly at her maternal home🤣 so will rarely see her in this story!! her fav lines which she repeats are "seriously Ronny?" and "arre baitho .. baitho na men!!" she says n start telling them stories (gossip queen she is 😆 )

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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There are also 3 ppl

manav ojha , his father and his mother

son & mother need no description as they r normal but Mr. ojha urf OJHA UNCLE is unique piece 🤣

Murlidhar Ojha(Father) : His other name is rajhisthan express. he loves praising Rajasthan so much that har baat me wo rajisthan ko ghusa hi dete hain🤣

and he loves praising himself also saying "mhare jaisa mahan , gunkari etc etc etc " . he can start eating anywhere and everywhere and other fav dialogue is "to nikalo 501 rupee ka shagun" he is big ksnjoos never uses his things and always take others(like money or mobile to make call etc) 😆

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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A couple(bhadresh & bhairvi) , 2 kids(mitesh & pritesh) and head of family mother/MIL of couple Bhawana bhatt

Bhadresh: he is a aalsi raam. he never any work by himself. always dependent on others (his mom & wife specially)

He spent most of his time sleeping only. His fav line is "Tumhi kardo , same maja ayega" which says if someone ask him to do some work and mother n son have a dialogue n reply

when in any convo with anyone he says "ka ba" to a reply came in air from nowhere "ha baba"

bhavna bhatt: she loves his son knowing that his aalsi she never scolds him , She is a big pheku 🤣

she will say something impossible then dheere dheere reduce it till the possible things 🤣 (ye b dialogue ayege to zyada acha samjhega 😈

When she says "ka baba" in any ongoing convo with anyone always a reply came "ha ba" from air 🤣

(this is the funniest thing abt the mother son dou 😆)

Bhavna aunty and his bahu's bonding is also very interesting 😃

Her fav lines "phone rakhde Ben wrong number hai" which she says to her D.I.L She scolds her saying "Lohipini, dakan etc. etc.😆but loves her most

she is Gujarati so saying something in it n then start explaining it forgetting the situation around 🤣

Bhairvi : sweet n innocent girl . she do every work giving to her without any complains. take care of her husband always but there is only one problem with her she very very very innocent I tell u 🤣 (u will understand its meaBing soon🤣 )

her fav lines "Matlab bad me samjhane ka kya MATLAB" & "Toh barobar"

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