ShraMan Shots|| Mini OS Morning Woes Pg 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was beautiful. I so wanted this to happen in the show but what we got was beautiful too. I could imagine it all when I read this OS. Sumo needed to realize her mistakes and understand the magnitude of its effect on Shravan. Teenage ShraMan scenes has always been my favorite. Loved the way you included them. Great OS! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is beautiful yaar. You expressed a great version of Sumo.

Hats off 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its beautiful. .really liked the chote Shraman part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the fact that you used chota ShraMan as Sumo's conscience and I would have loved this in the show alas :(
Good job though ;P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is really really nice. Shravan couldn't just hate his dad after all his misdeeds. He came to stay alone but again dil aur dimag ka fight.
Choti sumo's dialogues were emotional and loved it. She just accepted her mistakes along with pointing out those that of suman's.

Chota shravan feels that this new Shravan's love is greater than his. That's so adorable.

And i found it cute that younger shraman are only together even in dreams. Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: memories_im

This was beautiful. I so wanted this to happen in the show but what we got was beautiful too. I could imagine it all when I read this OS. Sumo needed to realize her mistakes and understand the magnitude of its effect on Shravan. Teenage ShraMan scenes has always been my favorite. Loved the way you included them. Great OS! 😊

+ 1000000. Please continue the story... after marriage ...nok jhoks... Which we were dying to see in the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was beautiful...choti sumo was too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a heart warming update...
I always have a thing for choti Sumo n chota Shravan...😃
loved it...very moving!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its amazing. merged younger and adults shraman are always treat to watch.

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