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Trouble

@trouble_006

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

This was beautiful. I so wanted this to happen in the show but what we got was beautiful too. I could imagine it all when I read this OS. Sumo needed to realize her mistakes and understand the magnitude of its effect on Shravan. Teenage ShraMan scenes has always been my favorite. Loved the way you included them. Great OS! 😊

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sneha

@sneha_17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

This is beautiful yaar. You expressed a great version of Sumo.

Hats off 👏

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Its beautiful. .really liked the chote Shraman part

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

I love the fact that you used chota ShraMan as Sumo's conscience and I would have loved this in the show alas :(
Good job though ;P

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is really really nice. Shravan couldn't just hate his dad after all his misdeeds. He came to stay alone but again dil aur dimag ka fight.

Choti sumo's dialogues were emotional and loved it. She just accepted her mistakes along with pointing out those that of suman's.

Chota shravan feels that this new Shravan's love is greater than his. That's so adorable.

And i found it cute that younger shraman are only together even in dreams. Keep writing

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bindu356

@bindu356

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: memories_im
This was beautiful. I so wanted this to happen in the show but what we got was beautiful too. I could imagine it all when I read this OS. Sumo needed to realize her mistakes and understand the magnitude of its effect on Shravan. Teenage ShraMan scenes has always been my favorite. Loved the way you included them. Great OS! 😊

+ 1000000. Please continue the story... after marriage ...nok jhoks... Which we were dying to see in the show.

Edited by bindu356 - 9 years ago