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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hello there!
I am really glad you chose to write it...this forum has a dearth of fanfics.
I loved how Astika saved Pranali...that twist was really welcome.
And Uloopi!
You surely have some big bombs in your bag.
Well bring it on!
Will be eagerly waiting.

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Imp Note- Agar aisa hi chalta raha to age se har ek updates PM ke through bhejungi as others are not interested in this FF...



Chapter 1:

Noori is pacing back and forth in her room. In the haste of the moment just to keep her father's word she agreed to marry Rajveer but now she is having second thought. She should've talk to Arjun at least once. She picked up her cell phone and dialed Arjun's number but it came switched off. Then she tried his home number and it started ringing. After few rings a voice came floated in.

Voice: Hello? Aap koun bol rahe hai?

Noori: Hi. Main Arjun ki dost Noori. Arjun gharpe hai kya?

Voice: Ohh.. Arjun vaia gharpe nehi hai. Jabse Tina didi ayi hai tabse Arjun vaia gharpe rehte hi nehi.

Noori: Tina didi?

Chutki: Haan Tina didi. Arjun vaia ki best friend. Aaj dono puranewale Shiv mandi gye hai.

Noori: Accha. Thanks.

Voice: You are welcome.

After putting the receiver in the cradle Astika smirked and went to reclaim his place in the sofa. Few minutes later Yashodha came back with a glass full of water and gave it to Astika.

Astika: Shukria. Aab hame agya dijye. Haam chalet hai.

Yashodha: Are aise kaise ja sakte hai aap. Baithie. Arjun aa jyega. Woh Shiv mandir yaha se jyada dur nehi hai. Arjun aur Tina ko gye hue do ghante ho chuke hai. Aa jayenge thodi der mein.

Astika: Nehi behen. Hame kuch jaruri kam pe bhi jana hai. Kabhi aur aa jayenge.

Yashodha: Ji thik hai.

After Astika left Yashodha went back to work she was doing.

~*~

Noori parked her at the gates of that old Shiv Mandir and went inside to look for Arjun. She will have to talk to Arjun at any cost. She will have to clarify her actions to Arjun. Few days ago her father threw a party where even Arjun was invited. She was so happy. But her happiness was sort lived. At the middle of the party her father announced her desire to marry off Noori to Rajvir. Noori was very shocked but she couldn't do anything as it also the matter of her father's honor. She decided to talk to her father after the party but that plan also got foiled. Just after the party her father informed her that he have been a great task and will have to be out of Amroli for few days. So, she suppressed the matter for that time. But she will never be able to forget Arjun's face when Rajvir slid the ring in her finger.

Shaking the past memories she went inside but stopped at the door seeing the scenario before her.

Arjun was there with another girl. His hand was resting on top of hers.

Arjun: Main tumse wada karta hoom Tina. Chahe jo ho jaye. Main tumhara saath kabhi nehi chodunga. Haar kadam mein jab bhi tum peche mudke dekhogi to mujhe apne sath pavogi.

Then as if to prove his point he hugged her to his chest and rested his cheek in her forehead.

Noori felt as if someone had punched her in the stomach. She didn't bother to wait but ran for the car.

Flashback-

Arjun was sitting in a rock with Tina beside her and reminiscing their old days. But one thing he noticed that in this past few days Tina never mentioned her parents.

Arjun: Tina ek baat bata? Uncle aunty theek hai na? Jabse tu ayi hai tabse uncle aunty ke bade na koi baat ki. Nahi maine tuhe unse baat karte hue dekha.

Clouds gathered at the ever bubbly girl's face and she went to stand in front of the idol.

Tina: Main tab 9 saal kit hi jaab maine Amroli choda. Hamare yaha se jane ke baad hi mom ki death ho gyi. Phir dad apne kam mein busy ho gye aur main apni tarahse akeli badi hui. Par at least koi to tha jisse mein family keh sakoom. Kuch din pehle dad bhi chal base. Main akeli ho gyi Arjun ekdam akeli.

By then fresh tears were rolling down from her eyes. Arjun couldn't bear the tears in his best friend's eyes. He went to her and took her hand on his. Before the ingenious Lord Shiva he made a promise without knowing that Noori saw them and could misinterpret the meaning.

Flashback ends..

Astika who was well hidden behind a big rock smiled.

Astika: Manna padega tumhe Uloopi. Pehle to Tina banke Arjun ke ghar pe ghus gye. Aur aab apni kahani pe Arjun ko apni taraf bhi kar liya. Guru Vasuki ke jane baad mujhe to laga tha ki tumhe sambhalna namumkin ho jyega. Par kehte hai ki badle ki aag sabse badi aag hoti hai jo murde ko bhi jivit kar deti hai. Aab yehi badle ki aag hi tumhe age ki rah dikhayegi.

Flashback

When Astika and Uloopi reached the spot there had been nothing left of Guru Vasuki. The Garud had totally destroyed his form. Uloopi sat at the ground and screamed and screamed. After she finished her screams Astika went to her and placed his hand on her shoulder.

Uloopi was the only daughter of Guru Vasuki and Nag rajkumari Chitrangana. When she came into Chitrangana's womb the great Nag Guru prophesied that the girl will the rebirth of Naga Princess Uloopi.

Naag Guru: Woh aa gyi hai wapas

Karne puri apni mohabbat ki adhuri dastan

Naaglok ki man shan banegi woh

Banegi trilok ki maha yoddha ki sabse badi hatiyar...

Also she will be the pride of not only Naglok but also Trilok. Mohini who has always been jealous of Chitrangana's beauty and popularity couldn't bear this. First Astika's human son and second Uloopi's rebirth broke the last straw of her patience. But as Chitrangana was the daughter of Nagraj Takshak, it was little tough for Mohoni to bestow any harm upon her or the child. But destiny gave her the chance. Just after Arjun's birth Vasuki got exiled from Naglok for helping out Pranali. But he always kept in touch with his little daughter whom Chitrangana named after her pre-birth, Uloopi. One day when Chitrangana secretly went to meet Guru Vasuki, Mohini caught the chance and brutally killed him. But before she could hurt the child Astika using his power hid the child. Though she never met Vasuki growing up, she held a strange love and respect for her father.

Astika: Hame pata hai tum kya chahte ho. Badla lena chahte ho na uss Garud se? Par haam uss Garud se nehi lad sakte.

Uloopi's head snapped at his direction. Her eyes have been slit revealing her snake form.

Uloopi: Uss Garud ke lye haam akele hi kaafi hai Mahabali Astika.

Astika: Pagal mat bano. Apni krodh pe kabu rakho. Kahi aisa na ho ki krodh mein andhi hokar tum apna badleka mouka bhi kho do.

Uloopi: Kya karna hoga hame?

Astika: Agar uss Garud se koi lad sakta hai to woh hamara manav putra Arjun hai. Tumhe Arjun ko trilok ke Nagarjun banana hai.

Uloopi: Thik hai phir. Main javunga ussk paas. Chaye ki tarah usske sath rahunga main. Aab usse Nagarjun bananeki jimmedari meri.

Flashback ends

Astika: Hame maaf kar dena Noori. Tumse hamari koi bhi biaktigat dushmani nehi hai. Likin tum mere putra ke Nagarjun banneke raste mein sabse badi bighna ban jati. Isslye tumhare sath yeh chota sa khel hame khelna pada. Vabishyabani ke mutabek Arjun ko agar koi Nagarjun mein rupantarit kar payega to woh sirf aur sirf Uloopi hai. Likin phikar mat karo. Main yeh bhi dhyan rakhunga ki tumhe Shankhachurna ki chungul se jald se jald nikaloom.

~*~

Uloopi: Ho sake to hame maaf kar dena Arjun. Dhoke se hame tumhare kareeb ana pad raha hai. Par haam bhi majbur hai. Apna badla pura karne ke lye haam kisi bhi had tak ja sakte hai. Kisi bhi had tak.

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Wow👏
This was brilliant.
I love how you are taking forth the storyline. So Tina is Uloopi and of course she and Arjun will paiir up for their Jodi was made during the Mahabharata Era.
And she is Vasuki's daughter! Top of that Vasuki is dead😭
I will miss him.
But have to give it to Astika. The most craftiest and manipulative player out there. And poor Arjun, a pawn in a game he has no idea of.
Loved it.

Thanks for the PM.

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Lovely keep it up and keep writing 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good updates so tina is ulopi and vasuki daughter. And mohini as jealous even in this story. Plse keep updating.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Please continue with this!
I don't like noorie opposite Arjun as well.
And now that Shankrachurn is manipulating her she will obviously start thinking bad of Arjun.
And I really like Abigail and her entry as Tina, Arjun's childhood friend really surprised me and I love this surprise a lot.

So please continue with this story, please!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Can I have this wow moment night!!??
I am literally speechless right now with all those twists in just the prologue and chapter #1
FM's of course I really need to sleep 😆
Will comment in the morning.

PS keep on updating such brilliant updates okay!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2

Arjun was playing ludo with Chutki and Tina while his parents were sitting nearby watching them lovingly.

Yashodha: Tina ke ane baad ghar ki rounak jaise dugni ho gyi hai. Aisa lagta hai ki dusri Chutki aa gyi hai.

Mr. Shastri: Sahi kaha aapne Yashodha ji. Chulbuli hai, sharati hai. Phir dekhiye Arjun ko dant bhi lagati hai. Mahadev hamari baccho ko hamesha aise hi khush rakhe. Unhe sari buri najar se dur rakhe.

Just the moment Noorie entered with few boxes of sweet in hand. Along with her entered Rajveer and Mohini. Noorie went to Mr. Shahtri and Yashodha and touched their feet. She handed Yashodha the boxes.

Noorie: Namaste uncle, namaste aunty.

Mr. Shastri: Namaste beta. Par yeh mithai aur aapke sathe yeh dono koun hai?

Noorie: Uncle meri shadi tay ho gyi hai. Yeh inspector Rajveer. Mere hone wale pati aur yeh inki mummy ji hai.

Mr. Shastri took the matter lightly while Yashodha watched her baffled. She knew about Arjun's feelings and she was pretty sure that Noorie felt the same way. She risked a glance towards Arjun and her heart broke. His face was tightly controlled and devoid of emotions. Yashodha's heart broke into tiny pieces. Suddenly she realized Tina was not there.

Yashodha: Badhai ho Noorie. Tumhari shadi shuda jindegi khushiyo se bhar jaye. Gharpe to tum sab ko janti hi ho. Kuch din pehle Arjun ki best friend ayi hai. Usse mila deti hom tumhe.. (looking here and there) .. Are Arjun yeh Tina kaha chali gyi?

Arjun broke his silence and noticed that Tina was not present in the room.

Arjun: Pata nehi Ma. Abhi to yehi thi. Kaha ja sakti hai?

Chutki: Maine dekha hai. Tina didi achanak apne kamre mein chale gye.

Yashodha: Beta jara jakar dekhna kya hua? Woh aise bina batye jane walo mein se nehi hai.

Arjun got up and dusted his hands.

Arjun: Main abhi check karta hoom.

He went to check on Tina and Yashodha sighed in relief.

Yashodha: Are aaplog khade kiyu hai? Baithe na please.

~*~

Arjun went to Tina's room and noticed her lying on the bed face down. He quickly went to her and sat beside her. He touched her back and patted a bit.

Arjun: Tina kya hua? Tu aise achanak yaha kiyu so gyi?

Tina: Arjun.. achanak se mera sar ghum gya aur vomiting bhi ho rahi thi. Isslye waha se chali ayi. Waise woh ladki koun thi?

Arjun: Koi khas nehi. Amroli ki police com. ki beti hai.

Tina: Ohh. Mujhe laga tumhari acchi pehchan rahi hogi. Tabhi to mithai dene gharpe ayi.

Arjun: Insaab cheezo pe dhyan mat de. Tu aram kar. Main yaha tere sath baith ta hoom.

Somehow the mere presence of this bubbly girl soothes his pain and makes him feel a lot better. Who knows why?

~*~

Noorie who went in search for water tumbled upon them and heard the whole conversation. Her heart wrenched.

Noorie: To main koi khas nehi hoom tumhare liye? Sirf isslye ki maine uss bhare party mein dad mana nehi kar payi? Arjun ekbar ake mujhse bat to kar lete.

She wiped her tears and turned only to found Rajveer standing behind him. He offered his handkerchief and without asking anything went back. As if in a trance she followed him back to drawing room.

~*~

At the sound of someone approaching Guru Vasuki opened his eyes and broke his meditation. It was none other than Astika. Guru Vasuki jumped on his feet with staff ready in hand.

Astika came and joined his palm in snake greetings.

Vasuki: Tumhe yaha aneka rasta kasie prapt hua? Tumhe kaise pata chala ki main yaha hoom?

Astika: Kamal hai Guru Vasuki? Aap hame itna murkh samajhti hai? Mahan Guru Vasuki ki mrityu ek sadharan Baajpret se? Vishwas karna thoda mushkil tha. Aur jab dekha ki lash sanakt karna mushkil ho raha hai tab woh shak aur pakka ho gya. Par manna padega. Uss naag toofan ne thode der ke liye hame gumrah karne mein safal raha. Par andh mein aapko dhund hi liya. Par hamein ek bat samajh mein nehi aya. Akhir aisi kounsi waja ho sakta hai ki aapne aapna moutka jhuta natak kiya.

Vasuki: Mere paas apne waja hai. Aab tum kya karne wale ho? Mujhe marna chahte ho? Ya phir Nagraj Takshak ke paas jake iss gumrah ka parda faas karna chahte ho?

Astika: Haam aisa kuch bhi nehi karenge. Aap nishchint rahye.

Guru Vasuki narrowed his eyes. Who knows what Astika does and why? He could never figure him out. But if he peers deep into his eyes, he still can find the mischievous sparks of the naughty boy he used to know.

Vasuki: To phir tum kya chahte ho Astika?

Astika's smile broadened. The mischievous sparks became more evident.

Astika: Kuch nehi. Aap shant se aapna dhyan sampanna kijye. Haam chalte hai. Agya dijye.

Guru Vasuki started at his retreating form for a few moments.

Vasuki: Astika haam tumhare Mamashri hai. Tum itni asani se hamare ankho mein dhul nehi jhok paoge. Tumhare dimag mein kuch na kuch to jarur chal raha hai. Par aab main bhi kuch kar sakta. Shatranj ki baji main chal chukka hoom. Aab bas hai intejar. Dekhte hai kya hota hai. Jay Mahadev.

~*~

Noorie was sleeping peacefully when a shadow crept towards her from the corner of the room. It was none other than Mohini. Her eyes was burning with raging fire. With a cruel smile she went closer to Noorie and was about to lunge at her when Shankhachurna entered the room. He took her mother by hand and dragged her out of the room.

Shankhchurna: Ma yeh aap kya karne ja rahi thi?

Mohini: Noorie ko khatam karke usski kahani yehi khatam karne ja rahi thi.

Shankhchurna's iris slit revealing his true from for a second.

Shankhchurna: Noorie ko koi hat bhi nehi lagyega. Ma aap bhi nehi.

Mohini: Akhir Noorie ko haam isslye mar rahe hai taki uss Arjun ko tabah kar sake. To intejar kis batki?

Shankhchurna: Ma hamne aapse kahana Noorie ko koi hat bhi nehi lagyega. Aur Noorie ko kuch bhi hua to haamse bura koi nehi hoga.

Just the moment his phone started buzzing. He looked once at his mother than went out to receive the call.

Mohini: Mere pyare putra. Kahi aapko uss Noorie se pyar to nehi ho gya? Haam aisa hargis nehi hone denge putra. Haam aap ke andar pyar, sneh, mamta jaisi anuvuti nehi ane denge. Bachpan se hi hamne iss bat ka khas khyal rakha ki aap pe aapki pita ki gun ke bajay hamari krurta aye. Kiyu ki aap hamare iss khel ke sabse bade mohra hai. Mahabali Astika ko khatam karne ke baad jab aap Arjun ko harake uss mani ko prapt kar lenge tab haam aapko bhi iss dunia se dur aapke pita Mahabali Astika ke nikat bhej denge. Aur phir Maharaj Takshak ke sath unki rani banke trilok pe raj karna hai hame. Putra, hamne aapko janam dia hai. Itne salo tak aapki dekh val ki hai. Usske pratidan mein aap hamare liye itna to kar hi sakte hai na?

Mohini threw her head back and laughed.


Don't forget to comment. Next update will be PM update. Means I will send the updates through PM only to those who commented..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Amazing story
Really interesting
Please update the next chapter i can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous update
Love it
Thanks for pm

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