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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
comments tab likhegi jab me update karungi 😆
filhal ek poem likhde mere honour me jhalar 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

comments tab likhegi jab me update karungi 😆
filhal ek poem likhde mere honour me jhalar 🤣


Yaar 🤣🤣
🤣🤣
Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
#93
what? yar?
I asked u write poem 😡
it's a command for u 😛
u shld have wrote COMMAND ACCEPTED at least 😆
poem kal dedeti... 🤣
kabse itni tareef kar rai h meri tu... ek poem b nai likh sakta mere liye 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Awesome yar just nailed it
Great story
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Sirat711

Awesome yar just nailed it
Great story
Loved it


Thankyou😳
Will write an epilogue2 also
Thanks again😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

meri poem abtak pending h 🤔


Okay will pm poem to you😃 in coming days
And I'll starting reading from your index today itself😉
Also I found when I clicked the TS link it shows DNS error😲
though I found it using Google baba then😆
So will comment soon😃
Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: aNibirFan


Okay will pm poem to you😃 in coming days
And I'll starting reading from your index today itself😉
Also I found when I clicked the TS link it shows DNS error😲
though I found it using Google baba then😆
So will comment soon😃



haaye waiting for my poem 😃
LOL link gadbad chhe? 😲
let me check 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

I'm taking the story little forward in this second epilogue...😃

Mere Laptop ki band baji hui hai to agar accha na lage, krupya maaf kare🤔

Mai ek extension bhi post karungi of Memorable Birthday 😉

Thanks so much again for liking this complete SS❤️

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NiBir SS: Destiny ne aise hi nahi milaya


Epilogue2


Nisha and Kabir are blissfully married for three months now. Nisha runs a dance academy in Delhi which got inaugurated few weeks ago. And Kabir still works as an engineer in Delhi. Nisha's mother had gone back to London after blessing the duo as she works there and is in touch with phone and video calls. Same is the case with Kabir's parents as well as Kaira & Viraj, who stay in different cities but keep in touch with NiBir through calls and skype.

Nisha returns home earlier than Kabir... like she reaches home by 8 or so and Kabir by 9. And today too the same thing has happened. Nisha is standing in front of their flat or house...

Nisha(thinking): ye door kese open hai?

Nisha nears the door and hears some noise.

Nisha(thinking): Lights bhi off hai to ye aawaz?? Theif!

Nisha(thinking): Mere ghar pe chori? Ye jaanta nahi kisse punga lia h isne!

The next moment she steps in .Very faint light is coming from bedroom till the living room. She then cages the person with the duvet and starts beating him black and blue.

Nisha(thinking while beating the person who tries his strength but is unable to free himself): Thank God! The duvet was in the living room

Kabir(in between the punches of Nisha): jee...jeena hai m...mujhe Nisha!

She stops hearing Kabir's voice and pulls out the duvet. She gulps finding the person was Kabir.

Kabir (touching his forehead which is paining and in crying voice): patni pidit pati ka case darj karunga mai
Nisha (stammering): k...ky...kya
Kabir (scowling): I'll register a domestic violence case against you!
Nisha(sheepish): arey mujhe laga chor hai
Kabir: Chor dikta hu mai tujhe!
Nisha: m..matlab lights off thi naa to...
Kabir(letting out a quick breath and says calmly): fine ek baat bata
Nisha(cuts in): ek hi batau?
Kabir (annoyed): chod!
Nisha( chuckles): pakda kaha hai tujhe
Kabir (pointing a finger to her): sorry bolne k bajaaye mera dimaag mat khaa samjhi!
Nisha(worried touching his forehead): zyada lag gayi kya?

Kabir (frowns not letting her touch): itne zor se maaregi to lagegi nahi kya?

Nisha:hmm...tabhi aisi behki behki baate kar raha hai
Kabir (understanding &glaring the next moment): You!!!

Nisha finds that yellow light is coming from the bedroom while rest of the house is dark.

Nisha(curiously): Ye bedroom se light aa rahi hai
Kabir(crossing his hands over chest): nai bataunga tujhe ab!!
Nisha: sorry sorrry please Kabir
Nisha(in a baby voice blinking eyes): please patidev
Kabir looks away.
Nisha( grins): ek kiss du? To maan jayega?
Kabir (hiding his smile): Nahi maanuga! Kisi bhi surat me nai
Nisha:Surat to Gujrat me hai na?

Kabir(irritated): Doob mar kahi jaake tu!

Nisha: Doob ke hi marna hai to Surat kyu jaana hai?

Kabir(looking up):God! Kyu aapko daya nahi aati mujhpe?
Nisha: da
Kabir (cuts in): Chup baith tu!
Nisha keeps finger on her lips.

Kabir(composing himself back smiles): Chal andar...

Kabir takes Nisha inside bed room who feels delighted. The room is decorated with candles and rose petals.
Kabir(whispers in her ear): pasand aaya?

Nisha nods looking at him who smiles back.
Nisha: aaj suddenly ye sab? Kuch special hai kya aaj?
Kabir(in a side hug with her) : Kyu? mere liye tere saath everyday is special
Nisha(keeping her head at his shoulder): Thanks Kabir and sorry yaar tujhe peet diya

Kabir(flaring his nose): Kese bol rahi hai yaar peet diya'!
Nisha(chuckles): muh se
Kabir: Jaise mai to pairo se bolta hu nai?

Nisha(breaking the hug & moving forward): accha thik h... thik h... but yaar it's so hot here, fan to on kar deta
Kabir(coming in between, smirks) : Mai itna hot hu to garmi to lagegi naa

Nisha shakes her head and again steps ahead.

Kabir( pulling her): kya yaar romance k 12 baja rahi hai
Nisha(surpassing him by pushing him aside): Chal ab hatt yaha se warna tere 12 bajaungi mai samjha
Nisha: Ye fan kyu nahi chal raha?

She tries switching on and off the button two three times.

Nisha (looking at Kabir): Kabir ye fan?

Kabir( hesistantly looking at the fan): a...accha n..nai chal raha kya?
Nisha(a thought dawns at her mind): Tune electricity bill nahi bhara Kabir!!!
Kabir( stammering): bh...bhul gaya m...mai

Nisha( strangling him): To isliye ye sab haan!!
Kabir( finally freeing himself): Arey yaar pehli baar to bhula hu, kyu chilla rahi hai itna!

Nisha( shouting): To kya Bharatnatyam karu??

Kabir: aata hai tujhe?
Nisha(gritting teeth): Man to kar raha hai ki tujhe is window se bahar phek du!
Kabir( coolly): Dekh man to mera bhi bohot kuch karne ka karta hai magar maine kiya kya haan?

Kabir(adds placing his hand over her shoulder and pursed his lips): everyone should practise self control...
Nisha(fumes and kicks Kabir): Self control my foot!
Kabir: ow yaar!
Kabir (fumes): Itni hi problem hai mujse to divorse kyu nai de deti? Pata le kisi London k ladke ko!!
Nisha (states): London k ladke ko patane k liye tujhe divorse dene koi zaroorat nai hai mujhe
Kabir( giving a deadly glare) :You're crossing limits now!
Nisha( spreads a grin on her face encircling her arms around his neck and winks): karu cross?
Kabir( shrugs his shoulders and then chuckles): Kya yaar tu? paagal hai! (hitting lightly at her temple)
Nisha(smiling): tujse kam!
Kabir(pulling her in his embrace smirks): tujhe ye paseena aur bhi hot bana raha hai
Nisha (in his embrace in a disdainful tone): magar tujse badboo aa rahi hai
Kabir breaks hug lightly pushing her out and glares at her
Nisha( with cool): vese badboo naa ye shirt se aa rahi hai, agar tu ye shirt utaar de tooo
Kabir(shaking his head in disbelief) : kitni matlab kitni k hai yaar tu! Suhagraat phirse manani hai itni garmi me? K kahinki!
Nisha(smirks): Kpanti apne hubby k saath nai karungi to kya London k ladko se karungi?
Kabir: ab phir London k ladke boli naa to

Nisha(cuts in flashing brows and grinning): To kiss karega?

Kabir(showing tongue) :Zindagi bhar nai karunga
Nisha smiles.
Kabir(puzzled): dimaag ghas charne gaya hai kya? Kiss nai karunga zindagi bhar kaha maine !
Nisha: haa to usme kya hai? Tu nahi karega to mai kar dungi ( pulls him by his collar and giggles)
Kabir sulks.

Nisha(leaving his collar and wiping her sweat): Waterfall ho gayi hu sweat ki mai!
Kabir(chuckles): aur mai ocean !
Nisha :Ocean bola na tu?

Kabir( casually) :Ha kyu ?
Nisha: doob maru tere me? Phir Surat jaane ki zaroorat nai padegi (laughs)
Kabir (makes a face): K!
Nisha (still laughing): And you J of my K!

Kabir smiles a little later and pulls her to him.

Kabir(huskily): chal ek kiss de

Nisha(unable to believe): tu keh raha hai ye??

Kabir : Nai padosi keh rahe hai! Idiot mere alawa kaun hai idhar?
Nisha: mai hu
Kabir stares at her.
Nisha (giggling): Alright alright

Kabir smiles and both close their eyes as they near each other. Both can feel each others breath. Kabir's heart thuds hard each passing microsecond and then his leg thuds.

Kabir: Aaa!

Kabir opens eyes instantly as he just got a kick instead of a kiss and finds Nisha laughing running away from him.

Kabir(fumes running):Nisha ! You're gone now!

Nisha(chuckles running): but I'm still here !

Both are opposite sides of the bed. Nisha throws a pillow at him which hits Kabir. He too throws pillow in avenge hitting Nisha. They grab more pillows coming on the bed and start hitting each other.
Kabir(slightly irritated as he's getting more blows than her): Kese kar rahi hai yaar!!
Nisha(chuckling hits him hard): Aise!!

Kabir(glaring still hitting): You!
Nisha chuckles.

Kabir: Time please! time please!
Both keep down the pillow panting and sweating... the room has turned into a mess. Both laugh out loud lying beside each other facing up. After a while,

Kabir: Nisha
Nisha: hmm

Kabir: I love you
Nisha: I love you too

Kabir: I love you more
Nisha: I love you more than you do
Kabir(smirks): I want a kiss then

Nisha(blushes): okay

Kabir(warns): is baar maara na to sach me FIR kar dunga

Nisha(smirks): chal phir kar hi de, is bahaane jail bhi ghoom aungi mai

Kabir sighs looking down and smiles wide after a while because Nisha just kissed his cheek.

Nisha (excitedly): Time over!

Kabir (finds Nisha holding a pillow and grabs his one): I'll win!

Nisha(smirks): Let's see

And their pillow fight continues...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Lovely update 👏
Nibir are so so so cute 😳 and your writing make them more adorable 😳
Pillow fight and time plzz then continue 😆 😆 😆 😆
"Kiss kabhi nhi karunga " khud hi bol ke pachta raha tha 😆
Loved it 😳
Want more 😛
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww this was so so so cute😳
Nisha kuch zyada hi K hai 😆
Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago

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