Fan Fiction - ' Jab we met'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello people, This is swadheenta ... I m a die heart fan of Rishna ... They are jst excellent together... After Manya, Twinj , Rishna is making me insane with their nok jhok and romance ... So i have come up with a Swasfiction(Swadheenta's fiction 😉 )... I ll be there very soon with the 1st part... Right now the teaser is all yours
-------- Go Baby Go -----

RishNa Fan Fiction~"JAB WE MET"

I ll go with the same cast of BR ... Enjoy

Teaser~

Rakhi and Raina ... Two best frnds since childhood ... Nt only Rakhi nd Raina bt their family 's also share a very good nd strong bond ...

At srivastav's plce evryone is very busy in works except rakhi... She is sitting alone in her room , strng at her hands where ajays name is written by henna... Rakhi had twinkles in her eyes , finally she is gnna get the man she loves... She is going to get married to Ajay ... Ajay was going through the same feelings ... He cnt jst wait to see rakhi in a bridal attire...
On the other hand , Raina was busy in dress selections whn some one frm behind whispered in her ears ,
"CHINDI CHAMELI"

Guys guess who ? And pls drop dwn ur comments...
Love u all ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Cool... Of course its our Rish.. Continue soon.. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Sounds interesting.. please continue and let me know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice teaser...plz continue..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here goes the first part ...Hope you all will enjoy it ...

***PART ONE***

Raina was blindly absorbed in her work whn some one whispered in her ear " Hey Chindi Chameli"...
She cld rcgnze the person with those three words ... Bcz in the entire wrld only one monkey exsisted who clld her by chindi keeping aside her beautifull name...It was Karan ( Guess Karan Wahi)... Her another besty nd rakhis bro ...

Raina- Karan ?????
Karan- Chindi , tujhe kaise pata chal jata hai yaar ...
Raina- Kuynki mujh jaisi khubsurat ladki ko is typical nme se sirf Mr. Monkey Srivastav hi bula sakte hai..
Karan- Hey , you dnt call me tht , huh ... Warna main???
Raina- Warna kya, katoge mujhe Mr . Monkey Srivastav???
Karan- Chindi ki bacchi , tu ruk ...
Raina strtd running as karan was after her to take revenge ... Thankfully Mohini caught both the kids...
Mohini- Kya tum log bhi ... Shaadi ki umar ho gayi hai ,aabbhi baccho ke tarah ladte rhte ho ...
Karan- Ladne ka koyi umar nhi hoti senorita, kuyn ki ladna bandh to chindi mode ho jati hai on ... Hu hu haha...
Rakhi comes and shows her mehendi to evryone ...
Mohini - Areh wah , teri mehendi ka rang to bohot khila hai ...
Raina- Iska matlab tujhe sapno da changa mehbub mila hai , hai na aunty ??
Mohini- Bilkul sahi ...
Rakhi became red hearing those comments ...
Mitali- Areh wah di , abhi se blushing ...
Rakhi- Chup kar mitali ... Kuch bhi bolti hai ...
Karan , Yug and Ved were busy in the decoration chores ... Raina went to thm ...
R- Main kuch madad karu aap logo ki ...
Karan instantly threw an ans...
K- Hum yaha decorations ki kam kar rhe hai, bacche payda nhi kar rhe hai jo tu help karegi Dr Chindi ..
Ved and Yug burst out of laughter..
Raina- Huhhh ... Khaoke pude ...

The ceremony was rocking and smoothy till bidai... At the tym of bidai , both raina and karans F*Ly were cryng ...
Whn Rakhi was gone the festive look of the house dried away ... Karan , Naina and mitali tried hard to feed mohini bt remained unsucesfll ...
Nw there was only one prsn left nd it was raina ... Raina lovingly made mohini eat the food which imprssd karan...
Karan loved raina since childhood ...Its their F*Lys desire to see thm as a couple bt destiny has its own plan which cnt be escpd...

2 days later -

Raina was gttng ready in hr room...She was tlkng to hrslf ...
R- Chal Raina , shaadi ka function khtm aab boaring lyf main re entry mar ...

Raina reached hospital at 8.30 instead of 8.00...
R- Oh damn , Aaj sir pakka mar dalenge mujhe ... I m 30 mnts late ...

Blabbering with her own raina stumbled with a stair , she closed her eyes whn she was all set to fall but at the nick of tym she felt two strong arms grabbing her safely ...
Opening her eyes she saw dashing young guy holding her tight ... She was lost in him ... The guy was nt less thn a greek god ...

Screen freezes whn they both are busy in admiring each other .. .

Precape- New doctors entry ... Raina in trouble ...

Drop dwn ur cmnts budds...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting!! So Rishab is going to be a doctor!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very good start...karan wahi is one of my favorites too...good to see him here...loved the intro of Rishab...u really hv gd writing style...plz continue😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gaurav84

Very good start...karan wahi is one of my favorites too...good to see him here...loved the intro of Rishab...u really hv gd writing style...plz continue😊



Thnkuuui so mchhh frndo ...
It really means a lot 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Namita_

Interesting!! So Rishab is going to be a doctor!!!



Haha... Dr Rishab... Hope u lykd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start, waiting for Rishab. Greek god yes he is . Aham has that look.

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