CID Story: The Underground Shrine

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone,

I can't do much about CID not airing this weekend, but I can change everyone's mood with this rather delayed present. 😉

Disclaimer: The idea of this story came to me while I was watching a movie (you'll see the name in the references so that I don't give the story away). One scene in the movie just led me to start thinking about looking at this in real. What if the police had actually found something like this? That's where this idea came from. Apart from the origination of the idea, everything else is my idea only.

For my other stories, visit: Shreya's Writing Corner.

Next up will be the request from Visrom di. I'll start working on it now. 😉



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb wonderful idea superb investigation and beautifully potrayed👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superbbb story dear Shreya 👏 ⭐️.
l love investigation in this story & you described everything very well.. 👏
Great work.. ⭐️ ..Thanku so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful story Shreya di...
I liked the investigation and plot was set up well...
One thing I need to say...
At first you said about skeletal remains, then how all turned to be the dead bodies of girls? It could be of boys too na... You should have clarified it... I think you have missed it...
Other than this, I enjoyed reading it...
Sorry if I have missed anything... Maybe I'm wrong sometimes...
Thanks for sharing Shreya di...
Edited by swathi17 - 9 years ago
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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathi17

Wonderful story Shreya di...

I liked the investigation and plot was set up well...
One thing I need to say...
At first you said about skeletal remains, then how all turned to be the dead bodies of girls? It could be of boys too na... You should have clarified it... I think you have missed it...
Other than this, I enjoyed reading it...
Sorry if I have missed anything... Maybe I'm wrong sometimes...
Thanks for sharing Shreya di...



Ah yes I started saying dead bodies because usually in CID that's how they refer to skeletons. And I confirmed they were girls after Dr. Salunkhe's autopsies. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shreya Di I am really starting to love your investigative stories...👏
Absolutely brilliant and classy...⭐️
I love that your stories are simple and move forward on a medium pace...👏
I was finding myself playing a guessing game about who the killer...😆
And I guessed right...😎
Well atleast the psychiatrist was an easy guess...
The story starting was smooth and light...love that...👏
But it turned into thrilling as team moved ahead to found the underground park...😲😲
Amazing..👏
Rest the story was simple and yet brilliant...
The use of forensics and team side by side was point to point...
I was confused with real estate a bit...
As I didn't get that how they managed to sneak in dead bodies after a tenant started living there...
And also why the police was not recognized by her colleagues...
Or was it going to be the first day for her...
See even after your simple narration I am a confused bird...😆
Again a brilliant effort...
and yeah also...
i am pleasantly surprised that CID solved the case without disguise...👏😆
if FW attempted something like this PURVI would have been made the target for sure...😛
and as swathi said i was confused at that suddenly all dead bodies being of girls too...
but i was sad also as then i would have expected a duo disguise too...😆
but really classy decision to solve the case without disguise jhanjhat...⭐️
Thank you do much Di.
I am waiting for way way more stories from you...😆
Edited by dreamfanatic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes. While Salunkhe was explaining about the dead bodies he could have mentioned that all were girls. I didn't find like that anywhere...
It's always refreshing and I get a new experience while reading your stories...
Hit a like button for my previous post as well 😆
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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamfanatic

Shreya Di I am really starting to love your investigative stories...👏

Absolutely brilliant and classy...⭐️
I love that your stories are simple and move forward on a medium pace...👏
I was finding myself playing a guessing game about who the killer...😆
And I guessed right...😎
Well atleast the psychiatrist was an easy guess...
The story starting was smooth and light...love that...👏
But it turned into thrilling as team moved ahead to found the underground park...😲😲
Amazing..👏
Rest the story was simple and yet brilliant...
The use of forensics and team side by side was point to point...
I was confused with real estate a bit...
As I didn't get that how they managed to sneak in dead bodies after a tenant started living there... It was underground and there was another entrance. I realize I forgot to mention that because in my edits I accidentally deleted the part where Daya found another entrance.
And also why the police was not recognized by her colleagues...
Or was it going to be the first day for her... It was her first day and she got kidnapped (and later killed) from the railway station itself before anyone saw her.
See even after your simple narration I am a confused bird...😆
Again a brilliant effort...
and yeah also...
i am pleasantly surprised that CID solved the case without disguise...👏😆
if FW attempted something like this PURVI would have been made the target for sure...😛 I was planning on doing that. That's why I had Freddy give the idea of a fake, but then I chose another route of investigation. 😉
and as swathi said i was confused at that suddenly all dead bodies being of girls too...
but i was sad also as then i would have expected a duo disguise too...😆
but really classy decision to solve the case without disguise jhanjhat...⭐️
Thank you do much Di.
I am waiting for way way more stories from you...😆

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathi17

Yes. While Salunkhe was explaining about the dead bodies he could have mentioned that all were girls. I didn't find like that anywhere... Hmm...looks like I edited that out accidentally as well. 😆

It's always refreshing and I get a new experience while reading your stories...
Hit a like button for my previous post as well 😆

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