FS: A JOURNEY OF CHILDHOOD FRIENDSHIP TO LOVE (LastPart up pg9)~ 22/10

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This is an old TS and first ever piece of writing of mine on Maaneet which I converted into FS by editing. :)

It has total 4 parts.

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Banner Credit: Priya di


PART- 1




A boy of 13 years having chocolaty eyes was continuously crying... And due to the excessive crying his eyes were swollen and mouth becomes thirsty... But he does not care...

On the other hand an elderly lady draped in a white sari was performing last rituals of two persons while she also has tears in her eyes... And supported by another person throughout the ceremony- Prachi Handa.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept i want to read that pls pm ur blog link
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very sad n curious prolong.. Can't wait for the fs ti continue.. Pls assist blog link.. Tk you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start do pm me because you were update on blog
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hi thanks 4 da FS! superb banner! will comment on blog
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Congrats for the new story 👍🏼
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Nice update geet is such an angel maan has kept very apt name for her. Their friendship is so sweet. People stoop so low to earn money. Maan is very determined to get back his parents property. Waiting for next update dear. Please pm me when u update.
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I will comment on IF only as i don't know how to do it on blog.
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Awesome update. Maan is crying as his parents has died. His GM is doing their last rituals with the help of Prachi Handa. Geet came to Maan and asked him why he was crying. Maan told her the reason. Geet told him that she also lost her father when she was six. She consoled Maan and made him her friend. When they all reached KM, their liggage is packed and his adopted son throw them out of KM. They cheated her and took over KC also. Prachi brought Tanuja and Maan to her house. Geet and Maan become friends. Maan decided to work hard and earn lot of money and take his father's company back.

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