Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

damn dude you write so wonderfully👏

this is some seriously awesome stuff
 loved both the OS...fabulous👍🏼
the way you characterise them is really good⭐️
i wish they were like this on screen...really miss them being happy
If possible could you please PM me when you update next 😊

Thank you so much Yashi!!!
Glad you liked the pieces!
😳
And no issues, il pm you with the next update!!
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aayra24

Oye Zoya..yeh itna achha kyu tha??😃

I was or rather still am smiling like an idiot and my sister keeps staring at me😭
Just addicted to the fanfics on this forum and ur name is definitely included in my list of favorite authors❤️...a good addiction😉

Omg!
Thank you so much Aayra!
Means a lot to me 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126

Love this second OS! It's got the perfect dose of fluff with the perfect proportion of reality! Can't eat for the next update 👏

Thank you so much hon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks!
And welcome, I noticed you're new here!
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Posted: 7 years ago
This was super se bhi upar! Soo good! My shraman babies! I'm speechless right now!! Amazing Zoya! Can't wait to read the next!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ramya06

This was super se bhi upar! Soo good! My shraman babies! I'm speechless right now!! Amazing Zoya! Can't wait to read the next!

Thank you so much Ramya🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing..
Very beautifully written..
just can't wait to read more..
U just Describe characters so well that It is beyond Perfection
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Yum_SR

Amazing..
Very beautifully written..
just can't wait to read more..
U just Describe characters so well that It is beyond Perfection

Thank you so much hon!
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread. 

Cheers! 
Edited by orion23 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res
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Unress
Me first 🤪
Vikku muahhh for this update
Le damon wali kissy



No episode , boring life n bang!!! Here comes your update

Shravu's fear of losing her , his guilt is beautifully penned!!
And that champi scene
# KarneDoAchaLagtaHai ye nya hashtag 🤣
Aditya ko chamat pdi 🤪
She trusted him so much .
How I wish sumo reacts the same way after the relevation !!
Dialogues apke hamesha hi mashallah hote hain!!!

Mai ab aur tumhari dost banke nahi jeena chahti. Biwi hoon tumhari. Haq chahiye mujhe apne
Ye hui na baat 🤪
Dhamakedar update !!!
Loved it!!
Thank u so much for writing this
Hum masoomo ko kuch pal ki khushi dene ke liye shukriya *dramatically wipes tears*
Edited by sapphire3 - 7 years ago