FF Bitter Sweet Symphony-Thread 2. ch 33 - pg 128

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: memories_im
Loving this! Was waiting for an insight to Shravan's feelings. You penned it perfectly! Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks!

I'm so glad you liked the chap; Shravan's feelings. 😳 I save his POVs for occasions like this actually.

Will updt asap. Take care.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Hello Lara 🤗
I always wait for your updates , even stalk this thread sometimes 😆
Shravan is ❤️ he arranged a suprise birthday party for her 😃
Finally she met her family 😃
My fav part was when he immediately rushed to her side out of concern ...so caring ❤️
And my fav lines he spoke to nanu

"Then I'm willing to bleed my way till the end of this road," Shravan said firmly, unable to suppress the ever present passion inside him. "Until we're both in the same page."

So much depth and sincerity in his voice
Poor shravu is jealous of pushkar 😆
Vandy n kamini ...am scared i dont think the duo is very fond of shraman
The lyrics are so apt for shraman ...he has fallen for her once again and this time harder ❤️
Lovely chapter , beautifully penned 👏
You write so well words aint enough to praise you.
I joined this forum coz of you , joined wattpad for you and I'm glad I did. Thank u

Love
Priyam

Thanks a lot, dear! 🤗

What he said to nanu... It's one of my wishes for the show that he says something that passionate and fierce to nanu for Suman in the show as well, and that too soon. 😳

Vandy and Kamini - 😆 Well, you're right. They are not very fond of our Suman. That means trouble around the corner. Let's see how that trouble is brought.

Glad you enjoyed the song part as well. 😳 Thanks! It's so sweet of you to say such lovely things, and most importantly for being my friend and supporter everywhere. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Lots of love for yaa...

Take care. Tada!

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
fabulous update dear..
Shra on redemption mode..
Nanu said right
Love it..❤️
Thnx for pm dear...

Thanks a lot! 😳 ❤️

Yes, he's on the way of redemption. 👍🏼 But that doesn't mean he isn't capable of creating more chaos... 😈 (evil laugh)

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Hey Lara it was amazing!!!

Really dear!!!

Seriously like shravan on the road of redemption trying to set things right trying to amend things

Really his actions are justifiable

This is actually a real beginning a new beginning of their life

And I hope that in this new life shravan will always trust his sumo no matter what 😳

Slowly things are changing for good

I really enjoyed reading this update 😃

Best part-( it was a small scene but I found it best) the scene where everyone snatches away sumo from shravan and as soon as their holding hands got separated he felt an extreme loss

These small little things but cute things I really love seriously

I hope you'll update soonish!! 😳

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: Ammiey
Hey Lara it was amazing!!!
Really dear!!!
Seriously like shravan on the road of redemption trying to set things right trying to amend things
Really his actions are justifiable
This is actually a real beginning a new beginning of their life
And I hope that in this new life shravan will always trust his sumo no matter what 😳
Slowly things are changing for good
I really enjoyed reading this update 😃

Best part-( it was a small scene but I found it best) the scene where everyone snatches away sumo from shravan and as soon as their holding hands got separated he felt an extreme loss

These small little things but cute things I really love seriously
I hope you'll update soonish!! 😳

Hey, thanks! ❤️

Hmmm... this is a new beginning, sure. But about the trust thingy you said - hold onto that thought! Hold onto that hard! Because something's soon coming up next and trust might be the center issue. 😈

The scene you liked the most - yes, that little thing has a very deep meaning. Will defo try to brainstorm or heartstorm more of such little scenes for you to enjoy. 😳

Will updt asap. Take care till then. 🤗

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an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#646

Hi, fabulous update... I was waiting impatiently for Shravan's POV, and loved every bit of it... That part about bleeding all the way to end was ❤️...

Am guessing you're going to queer the pitch soon enough for them to really test the strength of their relationship... Well, bring it on 😊

When can we hope for the next update?

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: orion23
Lara my love!
Your writing is inspiration!
It's so life like, I dont even have enough words.
I've said so much about you, that words fail me now.
Know this, this chapter was fabulous!
I felt this sweet pain in my heart and I was grinning like a fool throughout, and I wont lie the moment shravan sang that song, I did tare up a bit. It's my absolute favourite! The placing of the song couldn't have been better. So that's my first like.
Second, "I'm ready to bleed all the way to the end of the road till we both are in the same page". You slayed it there! Such depth! I could imagine the pain and fir in shravan when he uttered those words. Beautifully done.
And thirdly, to pushkar, "Always was." Sigh.
I can see this is headed to a place we all want it to head to.
I literally can't wait for the next update!
Please, soonish!
Love ya for this one!
🤗

Awww! 😳 You make me so emotional with your words, dear. ❤️ Thank you!

You know I was writing this chap with a sweet pain in my chest as well ( maybe because of the song I was hearing - the Shravan song) . So, I'm extremely glad that you felt that as well. 🤗 This feels like an achievement.

Yes, definitely it's headed where we want it to. But as nanu said - it's going to be a very difficult road ahead.

Shravan proclaimed he's ready to bleed his way till the end, but what about Suman? If the way to ever after has so many thorns then Suman will also have to bleed some more. That's kind of inevitable. 😒

So stay tuned, will updt asap. Take care till then. 🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#648

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Dedicating this chapter to -sweetheart645.

Welcome to the forum and bittersweet symphony my friend! *bearhugs 🤗

Chapter 29

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My sympathies to those who're thinking that nothing can go wrong after this chapter. 😈

I'll have to take it slow between Shravan and Suman for a couple chapters to give them time to grow a positive something between them, and then the bigger guns will be out there aiming their heads. Let's not forget what nanu said in the last chapter. 😭

Shravan said that he's ready to bleed for her, but we know how this guy can go into a defensive mode if prodded too much and lash out. We can see Suman's falling slowly and soon she will realize her feelings for him, but realizing it and acting upon it - are two very different things, aren't they?

Once again, which scene or part or dialogue in this chapter was your favorite? Tell me about all that you're thinking, it'll be really helpful. 😃

Don't forget to like and comment, please. That'll make me feel extremely happy. 😳

People who've been liking and commenting - my fierce hugs and beaming smile to yaa all!🤗 If I feel down or not in the mood to write, I read your comments and they truly encourage me. ❤️ So, my heartfelt thanks to you all. You're the reason why I'm hardly going through any kind of writer's block regarding Bitter Sweet Symphony. One really need the boost from friends and family to keep on doing something, and you're that to me. Please, don't ever stop your feedback.

The silent readers, I'm so... so... so glad to see you guys coming up out into the open and commenting. I can't explain how delighted it's making me feel. Thank you so much! ❤️❤️❤️ Please keep commenting and liking.

People who've liked and commented are going to get pms.

Take care till the next updt.

Love you all!

- Lara.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#649

Lovely, beautiful and awesome as always👏

Cont soonish😛

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Sweetheart645

@Sweetheart645

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#650

Hello Lara!!

Welcome me!! Another silent reader!!😉

I'm new to the forum but not new to the show... and was following your story for so longgg... 😊

I don't know how to describe my feelings about the story.. I feel so real... the characters.. their emotions... so beautifully penned (ofcourse a lot of people told u these but I could not help but repeat..) You are an amazing writer (I think u know this 😉)..

Now coming to the chapter, atlast he fully realised & expressed his feelings... I was so happy after reading "already did"... And a big hug to pushkar... he indirectly helped Shravan to realise his feelings... And the song... OMG... that was appropriate for the situation... But I don't think Sumo will forgive him so easily... She was in so much pain for that person & She is confused too (this's a good thing, atleast she doesn't actually hate him)...

My favourite part was when they were staring at each other from distance & Shravan noticed she was breathing heavily... They know each other so well... And also that part- Shravan was jealous when her attention was diverted to Pushkar (Actually I love most of the parts... so i think i should stop mentioning them all 😉)

I'm sorry for this lengthy post ( hope u r not getting bore)..

Just one req. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP once u are free... I'm eagerly waiting for next chap..

P.s- do pm me please 😊

PP.s- try to ignore all the printing mistakes... i'm writng frm my mobile...

With love, Rajo