HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 57

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Posted: 9 years ago
Romantic part.
snowfall, the conversation, eye lock, the song and kiss.
loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Romantic update.
Rishbala were so cute. Rk is showering his love for his biwi. But why is he reacting differently seeing ring and mangalsutra. Waiting eagerly for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update, loved it, awesome song for the situation.
Curious to know what happens next, please update soon, waiting for the next.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.. From start i got the vibe of something hott... And see snowfall.. Cold became soo hot🤣.. Snowfall me dance, romance, confession..Hayee..!! Ab toh dil snowy snowy ho gaya😉.. But then landslide ho gayo, as u stopped at the exact point
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice romatinic part snofell rishbala finaslly confess therir lovre rk guilty for his past behavior nice continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part ...
loved rishbala moments..
snow fight part was beautiful ..,
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update sim. Loved the curry part . How rk drenched madhu, madhu drenched rk n rk drenched her fully throwing her in the bath tub. Then that curry revenge nd how rk used it to get those words out of her mouth. The madhu you, madhu you, me what, madhu how many times you'll take bath in a day part was just fab.the snowfall nd rishbala, awe like honeymoon in ladakh, honeymoon in manali. Rk is feeling wierd seeing their marriage ring and her mangalsutra. I think they'll get married again, the saath phere shaadi.so are they gonna continue their ahem ahem or will ha..


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Posted: 9 years ago
Rishbala talks were lovely. I think RK is disturbed to seethe ring and Mangalsutra since at that time he married her for revenge...I think they are going to remarry then.
The song was nice. Esp. the changed line! The last kiss...sim you put a dead end there. Hoping for some romance next..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hola!! I hope u all remember me?? I know I know I am very late in updating this part...and I am really sorry for that. I was not well plus i was having an exam and after that i needed a break as I couldn't come up with the idea for my next update. I hope you all forgive me...i have tried to I make up through this update. Hope you all like it!!

N ya I had no time for proof reading so pls forgive me for that too!!


Part 34


Slowy they peeled back but still they were close. RK nuzzled her cheek while she smiled on his gesture.

"Madhu" He whispered!

His invoking voice gave her shivers...slowly she opened her eyes. A hot flush warmed her cheeks. RK smiled looking and the very next moment she hugged him. His arms reached around her and he held onto her tightly. He caressed her hair and she breathed heavily.

"I Love you Madhu" RK said, his voice soft but deep.

This made Madhu hug him even more tightly. She gulped in and said "I Love you too" Her voice was not audible as her face was almost buried against his chest but still he understood. They remained like this for sometime. Finally Madhu regained her composure as something clicked her mind.

"RK" Madhu said still hugging him

"Hmm"

"You know what this has happened even before"

RK got confused and opened his eyes "what?" he asked in confusion.

"Yes in my dreams" Madhu blushed while saying this

RK chuckled and said "Really...so it was just a kiss or..??"

"No no...only a kiss...and it felt so real...you know we were at our house and you kissed me and then..." She broke the hug while thinking of what had had happened next. "I don't remember after that...Ummm"

RK looked at her shocked. So finally she regains that eve when RK kissed her.

"Ahem" RK cleared his throat and looked away.

Madhu looked at RK in bemusement. "What happened RK?"

"Madhu i want to say something" RK said still looking on the other side.

"RK let's not talk about the past anymore na" madhu said not knowing the actual thing.

"It's not about the revenge Madhu...actually what all you said now was not your dream but this all happened in real"

"What...what do you mean?" Madhu not getting him asked him again

"Madhu remember when we went to Malvika's birthday party"

"Yes"

"That day You got drunk" And one by one RK told her what all she did that day and then he said that how he couldn't control himself and kissed her.

"What?" She was standing there with her mouth covered with hands and eyes about to pop out.

"And the next day you didn't remember anything...and I decided not to tell you about that incident"

Madhu was looking down in embarrassment while RK continued "I know should have told you before...but I was scared...already i was at the top in your hate list and i did not want you to hate me for this too"

Madhu on the other hand was trying her best to control her laughter. She was surprised to see the change in RK. The one who never bow before anyone was feeling guilty for what all he did and even for the kiss.

RK turned around and Madhu quickly changed her expression to a stern one.

"Madhu I...I..am sorry"

Madhu couldn't control and burst out laughing.

"What's so funny?" RK asked making a confusing face

"Nothing...it's just you look so cute" Madhu pulled his cheeks when he stopped her

"Hey don't do this"

"Why?"

"Because i don't like it and I am not cute I am still the same old devil for you"

"You are impossible every man wants to be a hero for his wife but you want to be a devil" Madhu said folding her arms on her chest

"Well I am a devil...the name says it all...RIGHT KAMINA...RK" He said followed by a wink

"RIGHT KAMINA...what kind of name is this!" madhu said with a weird expression

"Biwi...say something new something different Because if you will repeat the same old dialogues the readers of this story will wear off in a minute"

"But for me you are only RISHABH...MY RISHABH" Madhu said caressing his face

"You love and not my stardom right?" RK asked her desperately wanting to know the answer

"Yes RK"

"No call me Rishabh"

"Rishabh"

RK was delighted to know that Madhu loves him and not his superstar image

They both hugged each other and went inside the room to sleep. Madhu was smiling remembering what all happened today while on the other hand RK was thinking of something else. Soon both slept

***************

"Ready?" Madhu asked RK while he was standing in front of the mirror busy setting his hair.

"Yes...come on let's" RK said holding her hand

"Me...what am i going to do there?" Madhu replied

"Madhu instead of staring these empty walls for the whole day it would be better to come with me and watch me doing romance with my co-star" RK held her by her waist while saying that

"What?" Madhu asked him getting angry

"In the shot biwi...Real life mein to mai sirf to tumhara hun" RK said pulling her towards him

"RK...stop it!" madhu said feeling shy

But he didn't stop and pulled her more closer when suddenly his phone rang. RK clenched his teeth while Madhu started laughing. He took out the phone from his pocket and it was none other than Bittuji.

"Lo aa gaya Kebab mein Kaddu" RK said getting angry and answered the call

"Good morning Chief"

"Good morning Bittuji"

"Chief the crew is waiting are you and bhabhiji ready?"

"Yeah Bittuji coming in 5 minutes"

"Okay Chief I'll inform them"

They cut the call and RK said to Madhu

"Mission Kebab mein Kaddu accomplished!"

Madhu hit him playfully and they left for the shoot

***************

"Mirror" RK called out

He was setting his hair where as Madhu was helping him in that when they heard two of the crew members whispering about them from behind

"It seems Madhu ma'am has joined again as RK sir's makeup artist"

"Ya it's seems so...by the way did you know how much he insulted her during their reception party"

And their talks went on. RK couldn't take it and was about face them when Madhu stopped him.

"RK stop!"

"Dada you can go" Madhu said to MA

"Why are you stopping me Madhu?"

"What's the point of fighting with them RK...God knows how many people may have said the same thing...Our past will affect us until we forget it"

"You are right Madhu...we need to forget it...and i know how can we do that"

"How?"

RK was about to say something when the director called him for the shot and he had to go.

Madhu sat on the chair watched RK giving his shot

It was a romantic shot RK pulled the heroine towards him and said his dialogues

"Do you know how much i love?"

"How much?" The heroine placed her hands around his neck

RK looked at Madhu and gave her a smirk making her jealous

"Cut it...Take this shot again" RK said to the director only to tease Madhu

He was loving the way Madhu was getting jealous.

"How much?" again the heroine said

And they closed in...rest the camera did it's work!

*************

RK Madhu and Bittuji were heading towards there hotel after the pack up. He looked at Madhu who was still boiling in anger. His mischievous mind again thought to tease his beloved wife

"Biwi...what happened...is everything okay...seems like you're in a bad mood"

Bittuji who was sitting in front heard this and he too asked her

"What happened bhabhiji?"

"No nothing Bittuji i am completely fine" and after saying this she gave an angry glare to RK.

Which made him chuckle...He pressed his lips and looked outside the window.

Soon they reached the hotel and checked in. RK opened the door of their room and Madhu was about to enter when stopped her and blinded folded her.

"What is this RK?" Madhu asked and before she could realise what had happened with her he picked her up in his arms and entered the room.

"From now on wards i will never ever go with you to see your shooting or say to see you flirting with your costars" She said hitting his chest

But there was no reply from his side. After few seconds he puts her down

"RK just tell me what are you doing?" She said getting scared as she couldn't see anything

"Shhh" RK made her quiet by keeping a on her lips "when i say only then you will open your eyes...ok?"

Madhu nodded her head

He removed the blind fold and said "Now"

Madhu slowly opened her eyes and looked at the floor. It was shining with the reflection of the candle bags.

"It's..." she was about to say something when she carefully looked at the bags

"WILL YOU MARRY ME" This is what it outlined

Her heart skipped a beat when she saw that. Yes his husband was proposing her for the marriage.

"RK?" She didn't know what to say

It's not that she didn't want to marry. Of course she is already married to him but she didn't expect it from him again.

"This is my answer to your HOW Madhu" RK said pointing towards the question which Madhu asked him this morning.

I want to forget everything what we have been through...that revenge, that party, our marriage...which was just a part of my plan. I want to start all over again which will have no revenge nothing but only you me and our love. So tell me

"will you marry me" RK got down on our his knees

Madhu remembered the day he proposed her the same way he was doing today getting down on his knees and asking her the same questing, but still it was different from that day because this time he was genuine his love for her was true.

"Sorry Biwi I don't have the ring right now but I will get it when we will go back to Mumbai"

Madhu was overwhelmed and her eyes were filled with tears

"Could you make it fast my knees are hurting"

Madhu chuckled and said "Yes"

RK knew her answer but still he was happy to here it from Madhu. This was the best day of his life. He was going to marry her again. Nothing more he could have wanted.

He stood up and they both hugged each other.

"I love you RK" Madhu said

"I know Biwi...By the way do you know how much I love you?" RK said while breaking the hug

Madhu knew he was repeating the same dialogue which he had said while giving the shot which his co star but she didn't get angry and she wrapped her arms the same was that girl did and said the same dialogue

"UTNA JISKI KOI HADH NAHI" RK said this time his voice husky


(Mature)


This gave Madhu shivers down her spine. RK slowly pulled her forward and pecked her lips. They opened their eyes and looked at each other...they clearly knew what was going to happen the next moment. He cupped her face and began to kiss her...soon it became a wild one. He took her lower lip and bit it which made her moan in and she gripped her hair tight After 10 minutes of a passionate kiss he turned her around with her back towards him. He swiped her hair to one side His lips blew a thin stream of breath on her exquisite ear...and slowly he trailed his breath towards her shoulder and pressed her stomach pulling her towards him. While she felt her cheeks burning and she was melting down with every single breath he took. He gently kissed her neck and nibbled her ear. He again turned her and stared deep into her eyes. He took her into his arms once again and walked towards the bed without breaking the eye lock. There eyes clearly spoke there heart out that he wanted to make her his and she wanted to be his tonight. He placed her on the bed and without wasting further he again started kissing her. He sucked her tongue passionately and started to unbuttoning himself he knew Madhu is too shy to do that. He broke the kiss and removed his shirt. He looked hot as hell with that naked body and reflection of the candled was just perfect to enhance his hotness. Madhu couldn't look into his eyes as she felt shy. He came forward and started unzipping her. Her heart was beating fast as every single breath of his touched her neck. He had almost unzipped her. She was hot it felt like her heart was pounding to her chest and suddenly she hugged him tight. She felt warm and secure in his arms. He swept his fingers down touching her bare back.

"May I" He asked her his voice soft and deep

Madhu nodded and he slowly removed her shirt only to see how beautiful she looked. He held her by her waist and pulled her towards him. He again started kissing her passionately and one by one he removed the remaining barriers.

"you are beautiful Madhu" He said and buried his face in her neck and gave a mark "Ohh" She moaned.

He moved down and sucked her boob and while squeezed the other one.

"Rishabh" she whispered

She moaned as his fingers touched the perfect spots of her body. He continued kissing her all over until it was time. He entered her and they felt a strange sensation as he filled her completely. she clenched on his shoulders as he moved in and out. She felt completely his...and with a final moan both of them reached the climax.They could here nothing but the sound of their breath. RK looked down at madhu who slowly opened the eyes. He smiled at her kissed her forehead.

So was this is update worth waiting for?? tell me in the comment section!!

Once again I am sorry guys...but now i'll be pretty regular in updating my stories and yeah those who have pmd me their update links I'll surely read them in few days and comment.😉

Take care everyone!!


Edited by srksimran - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsome update...
loved romantic scene...
iupdate soon okk..
Edited by abhiya2405 - 8 years ago

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