HUM HAIN DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE RM FF updated 12/05 COMPLETED page-89 - Page 56

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Posted: 9 years ago
Really loved the update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for next part dear want to see hot romance of both
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Nice update.Rk is really mad lover n i luv him.cont soon dear.madhu is innocent.
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Hey peeps Thanks for lovely comments and I am sorry for updating this part so late.


Part 33

"Madhu can we order something now I am very hungry...and i can't eat this curry anymore." RK said in a teasing tone. Madhu laughed hearing this and said "I am sorry RK...I shouldn't have done this".

"Madhu you did the right thing or else how would i have known that you love me so much"

Madhu nodded and they again ordered the food.

After having dinner.

"Wow RK...look here" Madhu jumped in excitement looking outside the window.

"What happened Biwi...i am sitting here...then what is it that you are looking at and got excited so much?"

"RK...I know you love yourself more than anything else but please come out of your misapprehension...just look at this it's looking so beautiful"

"What Madhu ??" RK asked her confusingly not knowing what is she talking about

"Uff...come here na then only you'll be able to see it" She told while still looking outside the window.

He kept the script which he was reading and walked towards Madhu "Ya tell what is it?"

"See outside"

RK looked outside and said "Hmmm...snowfall...so what's new about it?" He said shrugging off his shoulders.

"Isn't it beautiful?" Madhu asked him getting so much excited as she had seen it for the first time in her life.

"Umm...ya but i have seen it many times so it seems nothing new to me." He said while still looking outside.

Madhu looked at him and and then again looked outside and shook her head. RK looked at Madhu and understood what is she thinking

"But hey I think you are right...today it's more beautiful and more special" RK said giving a pensive look.

"Special?" Madhu said not understanding what's he trying to say.

"Yup in a way...look...today you said that you love me...and you are with me here...so it is special to me"

Madhu looked down and blushed.

"And to you?" He said looking towards Madhu. She looked up directly into his eyes and said "It's special to me too".

RK smiled at her and then again looked outside and asked her " Madhu...do you wanna enjoy our first snowfall together??"

"What...no no...it's so cold outside." She replied right away.

"O come on Madhu don't behave like a kid...come" he grabbed her wrist and took her to the balcony.

At first Madhu resisted but when she saw the view from there she couldn't stop herself from taking her hand forward and feel the snow pellets.
"Wow" She said mesmerized by it's beauty...While RK was getting lost in Madhu...she looked as beautiful as the snow pellets. The wind blew her locks into his face. He closed his eyes and sniffed her hair which smelled like sweet roses.

"It's so beautiful...hain na?"

RK opened is eyes hearing this and looked towards Madhu "yes beautiful". There was a something strange in his voice something exotic which drew shivers up her spine...she looked into his eyes... his gaze was so intense that it made her heart beat run on a very fast pace. They moved forward towards each other RK looked down and locked his fingers with hers, Madhu did the same. He brought her hand up and saw the ring which he made her wear on the day of their marriage. He narrowed his eyes giving an odd look. Madhu noticed this and asked him "What happened?"

"Nothing...it's just i don't like it"

"But you only gave me this"

"Hmm...I know"

"Then?"

"Ok leave it...you come here" He evaded the talk and pulled Madhu closer towards him.

Madhu was stunned...She blushed and said "It's getting cold" and pushed RK backwards and was about to run inside when she heard a humming sound.

Hmmm...hmmm hmmm...

Madhu got confused and turned around.

O mere dil ke chain...chain aaye mere dil ko dua kijiye.

Madhu smiled while RK started walking towards her.

"Apna hi saya dekh ke tum jaane jahan sharma gaye.

Madhu again looked down and blushed listening to that.

"Abhi to yeh pehli manzil hai...tum to abhi se ghabragaye.

RK walked around her without turning off his gaze from her.

"Mera kya hoga socho to zara...

Madhu looked up at him with a sparkle in her eyes.

"haaye aise na aahein bhara kijiye"

RK straight away looked into her eyes and took her hand and kept on his shoulder while he took another hand in his hand.

"Aap ka armaan aap ka naam mera tarana aur nahi
In jhukti palkon ke siwa dil ka thikana aur nahi"

madhu gigled hearing this

"Jachta hi nahi aankhon mein koi
Dil tumko hi chahe to kya kijiye"

They slowly started swaying on their feet

"Yun to akela bhi aksar gir ke sambhal sakta hun mai"

he pulled madhu against him and crossed and turned her around now being her back against his chest.

"Tum jo pakar lo hath mera duniya badal sakta hun mai"

he looked down at her Mangalsutra and again gave an odd look seeing it...but he continued swaying and singing.

"Maanga hai tumhein...Duni" He suddenly stopped singing making Madhu confused she turned around and asked him "What happend?". "Umm this line is not correct...i can't share you with anyone...so i won't sing it". "RK it's just a song." madhu tried to assuage him. "Hmm I know but still I won't sing this line...but hey yes I can modify it in RK style"

"Oh really...may i know how?" She asked him folding her hands against her chest.

RK cupped her face and sang that line again "Maanga hai tumhein APNE LIYE...ab khud hi sanam faisla kijiye"

Madhu was touched by seeing the depth of his love for her. "When did you fell so deep in love with me RK?"

"Honestly I don't know Madhu...but the day when I saw you I was lost in you...but i ruined every.."

"Shhh" Madhu stopped her in between by putting finger on his lips..."Let's not talk about that RK...In fact I thank God that he brought you in my life and everything changed"

"I Love you Madhu"

"I love you too"

he then embraced her tightly and she slowly started melting in his arms as an overwhelming sensation touched her. She heard his heart beating against his chest. It seemed as his heart is saying how much he loves her with every beat. Suddenly she felt a strange rush in her heart...she hugged him tighter.

"Madhu" RK understood the words unsaid because he was feeling the same.

He pulled her back and and looked towards her. She was looking down...Her cheeks were faintly turning red.

"Madhu look at me" His voice soft and low as his passion came through his countenance...but she didn't have the courage to look straight into those eyes full of intense desires. He lifted her chin up and again said "Madhu look at me". She had no other option but to look up, She slowly lifted her lashes while her lips were trembling.Though she was nervous but the passion in his eyes made her look deep into his. Their bodies pulsed with heat with each passing second. He came closer to her as their breath mingled. He slowly rubbed his nose against her while she trembled more and more. Slowly he pressed his lips against her...for few seconds they remained like this for few seconds feeling the pleasure of their first kiss. They slowly parted their lips but in no time again started kissing each other passionately.

LOL I am sorry for stopping it here...giving way to your wild imaginations...till i update the next part.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏beautifully written
Madhu n rk...lovely convo ..snow fl n then rk singing fr madhu n even modified da line fr his beloved.n confessed his love..
N dey kissed..ahaan.
Looking forward to next update

Edited by ...Seema... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Romantic update.Rishbala r romancing in snow .Nice situation n apt song but u stopped at wrong time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update loved it waiting for d next one dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. ...Thanks for pm. ...romantic feeling cutely expressed. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update,
amazingly written,
loved rishbala moments
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really its a lovely update Dr I am thoroughly enjoying it BT I am feeling impatient to read the next update Dr all the best...

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