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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhu..

<font color="#FF3366">too bad Maan..why he left geet's birthday and went to attend Natash's
it was he who arranged Geet's b'day party!!
and as always this day gave pain to Geet!!😒
Geet left to her parent's house...but how will Maan react to this!!!

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thnx 4 reading lets see how maan react
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"Iam a new reader to ur ff
I]have gone through your FF and it is simply amazing
Beatifully penned it!Loved Geet and maan's character
Geet and Natasha's birthday falls on same day[ I]Maan went to ministers house
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]Geet was waiting for him to cut her birthday cake
Geet overheard ladies talk about Maan's presence in Natasha's birthday
Geet was hurt😕
]Hope maan went to minister's house regarding meeting rather than celebrating her birthday

thnx for reading this story 😊
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Waiting for the next update

Do not complete ur ff in haste!!😊

hey i will complete it nicely
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neetugarg123

Very interesting. eagerly waiting for the next.👍🏼

thnx
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update .
yea kya ho gaya ? I m sure maan is innocent ...he can't hurt geet intentionally ...and geet disobeyed maan for the first time ...just to hurt him . why can't she understand it can be dangerous for her :( waiting for next .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

superb update .
yea kya ho gaya ? I m sure maan is innocent ...he can't hurt geet intentionally ...and geet disobeyed maan for the first time ...just to hurt him . why can't she understand it can be dangerous for her :( waiting for next .

can't blame her she is very hurt he was the one who wanted to celebrate and now he is gone thnx for reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm! nice update! Maan late! So its Natasha's bday as well! Geet upset! update soon! well written!
Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg.. where is Maan .. with Natasha? its her bday too? on same day of Geet..

What people called Natasha is Maan's mistress & Geet is his wife.. but he is spending time with his mistress...
Geet cut the cake & left for her mom's home.. what will Maan do? when he come to know.. is he really innocent?.. i think Natasha is playing dirty..

waiting for next update.. do cont. soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 16 " Mama is love is wrong?" i am feeling miserable to myself. I came here to punish him in truth I'm punishing myself its so hard to stay away from the man i love to hide the true feelings ...


"its my home its my room still why I'm feeling the emptiness ".



"love isn't wrong its a heavenly feeling that's why it doesn't exist in hell " she left saying the bitter truth of my life. I looked at my ring his second gift no his first gift as husband. I remembered his honesty, sincerity toward our relation because of those i had fallen for him can those was just some trick to trap me to, break me...,,,.



Don't know when i fall asleep dreaming about him,his touch, his kiss. Suddenly I'm all awake its not a dream Maan is here, in my house,in my room ,on my bed and most of all on top of me. He looked at me so darkly that i shivered not in fear but in desire.



Without saying anything his lips closed on mine. No i can't give away by his passion he always did this but not tonight . He kissed me so hard as if punishing me for some mistake. But i refused to respond. After sometime he broke the kiss looking at me confused then get up slowly ...


"lets go".


Saying this he held my hand and start dragging me toward the door. I pulled out harshly from his grip. He can't be serious, from nowhere he would appear and drag me with him no i won't let him do this with me. I'm not some toy that he is playing with.

"No"...


"Geet don't argue with me ". He is looking very angry what the hell isn't he the one who humiliate me in my own birthday party then why he is angry...


"i wont go with you and i mean it" i said looking at his eyes. "go back where you were earlier " to you natasha.. ...



" Geet don't test my patience just do as i say"



i couldnt believe he is really ordering me even after what he did. "why you came here did Natasha's party is over or she kicked you out ?"

he shocked hearing me obviously didn't think i would get to know his real face. "don't lie i know where you were .you were busy celebrating Natasha's birthday leaving your own wife to face the worse situation"...


I saw a flickered of guilt in his eyes but it gone as soon as it came what i am thinking he cant felt guilty. Why would MSK would felt bad of his doing ..


"Geet lets go home we will talk about it later ".

"you know my answer i wont go"...


He was breathing hard trying to control his anger clearly no one ever said no to him " look i came here after killing some bastereds and I'm really not in mood to argue with you. You want to talk fight fine we will but in our home not here" he looked so dangerous and cold i feared for a moment ...

He again grabbed my hand but i jerked his hand away , wont let him do whatever he wish " you have no right to order me around just go to your precious Natasha who is more important for you "...



" you stubborn woman i didn't go there to attend that bitch party i was there for a meeting "...


Is he telling truth or another lie "don't you dare to lie if you are not aware about her birthday how you gave her gift?"...


"Gift?" he asked total confused "what f**king gift are you talking about ? "...


He took a long breath and pulled me harshly " i am saying last time i didn't go to attend her party but for work ,for God sake i can't even bear her presence why i would join to her damn party and i didn't give her any gift"...



i looked at his eyes and i know he is telling the truth is Natasha lied? Yes that can be possible she can do anything to gain attention . ...



Looking at my eyes he continue" hey You are world to me, most important person in my life no one can take the place "...



My heart skipped a bit hearing his words is he really mean what he said? Am i that important? " ...


don't lie Maan if i am that important you wont left, i was waiting for you and you didn't show up for a second" i said very hurt by his action he was the one who wanted to celebrate my birthday yet he went missing...



"I'm sorry doll I was coming but then Black Snakes attacked at our bar i had to go there and that took all time "... .



He cupped my face,kissed the corner of my lips " i was so worried for you. You even switched off your phone i was going mad thinking about your safty. Its not safe here security isn't good please lets go to our place"


he was worried for me he was dying to see me did he really care for me that much...( another part next post please check ) 😕
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

"lets go" .


"No i want to stay here".


" But..." ..

"Please let me i want some space Maan to sort out something between us we need this " ... "


"hey i know you are angry with me and I'm ready for any punishment just come with me" he said almost pleadingly...



My heart so much want to give in but i stop myself its for our good. This separation is needed for our wellbeing most of all its need to make him realise what i am to him, what he feel for me ...



'' Maan please i am just asking for some time can't you give me that. "...


he nodded his head stubbornly "no i wont go without you if you stay here i will also." ...



"If you lo.. respect me and our relation even a little bit you would go "...


this time he is very hurt I can see in that but he covered it quickly by a cold emotion " fine do what ever you want i am going to my house"...


his house isn't it was OURS sometime back . He went to open the door but stopped hearing me "so its your house now"...



" without you nothing can be ours sadly you never understand it and funny thing is that you were the one who said realition built by togetherness but you are the one who want seperation" without turning he answered and left leaving me more miserable situation than i was. Am i doing it right? ...


Next morning i got the answer when saw his security men in my home. He arranged everything to keep me safe my safety mean lot to him i mean a lot to him and i want to go back to his arms...
Edited by Keepdreaming - 8 years ago

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