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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted this elsewhere earlier - laziness knows no bounds. Please feel free to respond with your poems. This was written in response to a lovely poem by @surochitadutta.

Pretence
of emptiness in a crowded heart,
of cool breeze on a balmy night,
The past under the guise of a fresh start,
Reality and charade engaged in a fierce fight.

Charade,
of smiles to hide dark despair,
of twinkling lights that veil the black night,
of a brave spirit that hides fear with theatrical flair,
of broken wings ready for a long flight

A facade,
of shallow seas, hiding plunging depths,
of stillness to camouflage turbulent tides,
of happiness,
under which she crouched down and wept.
of stunning strength, behind which she quietly hides.

Grief
still masked,
A journey unplanned,
Questions
unasked,
A togetherness
not grand.
They meet one day
to make their way,
towards a future bright,
but seemingly bland.

When the performance ends,
and the curtains are drawn,
behind the charade and
the broken facade,
remain a girl and a boy
with their tender hearts.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written ! You write so well 👏
Take a bow !

My writing skills are no where near yours but will post something later on.

Denial
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May darkness engulf me
May there be no light
The only peace that I get
Is when no one sees my plight
I can let myself cry
I can let myself be
The masks can come off
I can be the real me

I dare not think
That she will be here
I dare not think
That she will be near
I dare not think
That for me she will care
I dare not think
This life we will share

For when I am shattered
What use is hope ?
I am doing losing
To this monster called love

May the door stay closed
May it always be night
May the darkness engulf me
May there never be light.

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Updated post to add poem.

Edited by nith125 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES
I am speechless 👏👏
I am a huge fan of your writing.. Kudos to you 👏👏

I will try to write something tomorrow.. I am way too tired to think about anything..

You are absolutely brilliant 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beagle...
Mahn... Oh mahn...
I'm in awe of ur writing...
How do you manage to kill it everytime...
Loved it...
Again... I'm a big fan... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful poem!! Fantastic work!
And yayyy!! Shah of Blah!!! I love Haroun and the Sea Of Stories!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant!!! 👏
Very beautiful and expresses ShraMan so nicely... thanks for sharing such a lovely poem!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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❤️❤️❤️ especially the last lines👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb...just so apt...touched the heart...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125

Beautifully written ! You write so well 👏

Take a bow !

My writing skills are no where near yours but will post something later on.

Denial
----------

May darkness engulf me
May there be no light
The only peace that I get
Is when no one sees my plight
I can let myself cry
I can let myself be
The masks can come off
I can be the real me

I dare not think
That she will be here
I dare not think
That she will be near
I dare not think
That for me she will care
I dare not think
This life we will share

For when I am shattered
What use is hope ?
I am doing losing
To this monster called love

May the door stay closed
May it always be night
May the darkness engulf me
May there never be light.

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Updated post to add poem.


That's lovely! Will respond with my brain is not feeling fuddy duddy and wrapped in cotton wool.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Beautiful poem!! Fantastic work!

And yayyy!! Shah of Blah!!! I love Haroun and the Sea Of Stories!!!


Not a fan of Rushdie. Not really. His books are a bit too surreal and phantasmic. Haroun and the sea of stories was ok, but Stanic verses was disturbing. Count sleep for days.

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