Poetic swag on Fight sequence

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi all... a poetic swag on yesterdays fight sequence..hasn't come out that well ..but still posting..
Do leave ur comments and make any additions u may like..can amend the post accordingly!


So here it goes...

Jo dekhne aur karne ke liye rahe the hum taras
Aisi hui Adi ki maramat ki yaad rakhega kai baras!

Shravan ne aise dhoya Adi ko
Ki chain padgaya fandom ko!

Adi beta ab tum ghar jao
Aur apni marham patti karao!

Waise Adi jana tho chahiye tha jail tumhe
Tabhi padti thaand hume!

kyonki jo tumne kiya uski tho koi nahi hai maafi
Aur jittne pade tumhe laat ghuse woh nahi hai kaafi!

Chalo ab aapko iss ladai mein kisne kya dekha yeh batate hai
Aur kavita ko aage badhate hai!

Nirmala ne dekhi "apne nanhe shaitan" ki ghinoni kartoot
Shravan ka Sumo ke liye pyar dekhar Ramnath dara aise jaise dekha usne koi bhoot!

Mami ne dekha America ka ticket doobte hue
Nanu ne dekha Adi ko Shravan ke hathon Rui ki tarah dhunte hue!

Kamini ne dekha ek ghayal Ashiq ka waar
Sumo ne dekha usko mil gaya apna dost phir se ek baar!

Preeti ne "shayad" dhekhi Shraman ke pyaar ki gehrai
Baki janta ko DISHOOM 2 ki pehli jhalak nazar aayi!

Shraman ka hug dekh Kar dil ho gaya bagh bagh Fandom ka
Chomu ki pitai dekh Kar dil me hua khushiyon ka dhamaka!

Kamini ki planning, dekh kar fandom ne kiya mann hi mann dance
Humari khushi hui dugni Dekh kar Shraman ka silent Romance!

Precap mein Shravan ka reaction dekh kar hue thode dukhi
Par jab Sumo ne precap mein tulip dekhe tho hum khil gaye jaise chandramuki

Sumo ko jab pata chalega Shravan ne kya hai kiya
Aap ko pata hai na uske baad aapki khair nahi Shravan miya!
Umeed hai Shravan khud se jake sach bataye Sumo ko
Aur assani se maafi na mile mahashay ko!


Ok this is just some random stuff.. do leave ur comments

Tc
Rio

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rio 🤗
Superb 👏 👏
Ramnath ne dekh koi bhoot line cracked me up bad 🤣
Ramu ki shakal yad aa gyi 🤣
Thank u so much for writing this 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Rio 🤗
Superb 👏 👏
Ramnath ne dekh koi bhoot line cracked me up bad 🤣
Ramu ki shakal yad aa gyi 🤣
Thank u so much for writing this 😃


Thanks Priyam ...Glad u liked it.
As soon as i remembered Ramnaths expression that line came rushing in😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hilarious...🤣
luv it so much...i like precap one the most
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PALAK19

hilarious...🤣
luv it so much...i like precap one the most


Thanks Palak

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