FF Bitter Sweet Symphony-Thread 2. ch 33 - pg 128

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Hey lara!!!
Sowieee i read the chapter n forgot to comment
Sumo checking him out 😉
Amazing 👏
Loved it!!
Update soonish

Hey! 😃

No problem, dear. You commented now. 😊 Thanks!

Will upload the next chap tmrw.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: Sunain
U r tooo GOOD...hats off yar..👏
waiting for Suman to knw the truth about the meeting tht held in hospital during her unconsiousness...😉
dooo continue soon
lots n lots of love for u👍🏼❤️

Aww... 😳 Thank you so much, dear!

Everything will be revealed very soon, dear. 😉 Just setting up the stage which is very necessary, and then I'll let the drama unfold. 🤗

Lots of love to you too. ❤️ Stay tuned. TC.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: pal655
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ok first let me thank you for the pm😃.thank you lara di.

now ok so once again mysterious episode , we are missing something . i mean that mysterious attitude of preeti and pushkar or i have missed something😕. well hope i will soon configure it. let me tell you this is the most favorite ff of mine ,i love it and this is the way you keep us hooked and with every update your writing skills are expressed and just love to read it. take a bow👏

ok now i think sumo is getting a little more rude , i mean we all know what shravan did but suman was also not the innocent one , she should also realise that. didnt she play with his life giving content to her wedding with him for her helplessnes. ok leave it but i think sravan deserve some care as well.

i love this caring shravan . just loved when he said-i thought you left- dead man . 😳.

pls update soon and as always pm me😊

Hey, thanks! 😊 All the mysteriousness will be revealed soon.

And about Suman's rudeness. Yes, I agree she is being rude and I'm not going to justify her. But I can just say that it's her way of defending herself. The primal instinct of every living being - upon finding something threatening it will do everything - even attack to protect itself. And Suman is already wounded and confused, literally.

Besides we already know Sumo's attitude and bitter mouth in time of need, 😆 I especially enjoy how she scolds her staff in P.T.C.

Anyway, about caring Shravan - you'll definitely get to see this side of him escalate. 😉

Will updt tmrw. Take care. Love yaa...

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#564

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Dedicating this chapter to - pal655 ❤️

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Chapter 27

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Surprise!! 🥳🥳

I bet most of you have guessed it already about what's coming up. Suman's confusions will clear now, it's revealation time.

This chapter was a long one! Let me know pls, if you've enjoyed reading it? Once again... which scene or dialogue you liked the most here? Do let me know, huh, it helps me write when you highlight what you enjoy the most. That way I'll know what to concentrate on more than the others while writing, so that it becomes more entertaining for you all.

Pls like and comment! That would make me extremely happy. 🤗 Silent readers, I always wait to hear from you guys. By now, you probably know very well how I get excited while reading your comment for the first time. So pls let me know how you're feeling about the story till now.

Thanks to all the people who've liked and commented on the last one. ❤️ You're the best! And your support and feedback are so encouraging. Thank You!

People who've both liked and commented on the last chapter will get a pm for this one.

Lots of love and hugs (until you choke). 🤗 🤗 🤗

Lara.

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#565

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Thanks for the PM Lara 😃

😆 First of all I loved loved loved this chapter ...Its so hilarious yaar...was laughing through out the chapter...loved your sense of humor...Okay I really liked the part when Shravn comes to PCT and then helps the ladies with the tables ...bechara sticky guy would faint sooner if he tries to help 😆...I liked the way they both took care of each other needs.

My fav dialogue is ...Is he taking me to a forest to plan a murder 🤣 What sort of crazy ideas is Sumo getting ...her suspicions are hilarious...had a really good laugh, and her phone which doesn't listen to her, after all the phone will behave like the owner 😉 isn't it 😆... So happy that she is going to open a mini restaurant...That's the best part about Sumo she never gives up at all no matter how worse the situation may be 👏

Enjoyed this chapter Lara ...this is going to be one of my fav ones, loved the fact that they both are able to spend time with each other which is so much required. As far as the surprise goes, it might mostly be her family n Ramnath n co 😆...Thank you for such a beautiful chapter, always enjoy reading your FF...And I'm glad that I'm first to comment 😃...Till then take care.

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Susmita M

@sman2195

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Lara...

SORRY AGAIN😭😭😭

😳 became greedy after getting your pm...So couldn't resist the urge to reserve a place to comment..

OK, going back to your previous comment, nope you dont want us to die. 😃 but if you describe Mr. Malhotra like the way you did, that too in that particular attire (robe/dressing robe)...ahem! ahem! I am sure, his good looks plus your choice of his attire and your descriptions are surely will be the combined reason of my death someday.. 😛😛 dont worry.. i will come back from heaven only for the sake of reading the story.. 😆😆 it wont be creepy.. 😛 Kidding!!

Anyways, ok going back to chapter 27...Loveeed it... The following what made me crack up...

1. The guy just couldn't function properly in anger... - hahaha... yes, true!! Especially if the guys is Hot headed like Shravan Malhotra. 😳

2. They've sent a stick man..--.hehehe😆 mona couldn't come couldn't choose a better time to come by and announce it... Oh my..kinda felt what was to coming next..There was no way in hell, Shravan would let Sumon and the PCT crew to get the umbrella's and tables down from the van. So loved it how you have described one mishaps after the other and had Shravan present...and made him Shravan take care of it and at the same time impressing Sumon.. 👏👏

3. Besotted husband ... uh-lala...☺️ 😃 kash.. humme aisa koi mil jata..

4. he is all yours, we all know that - *coughing *coughing..Wow!! of course he is hers.. :)

5. His hair was a mess.. forehead was covered in perspiration.. Suman watched his adam's apple bobbing up and down, and somehow made her feel thirsty.. Hai! Hai! Another lethal combination.. it not only made Sumo thirsty..It made me thirsty too.. 😆😆 Kya yaar... Told you..by the time, i am done with your story and this serial.. i will die infinite times, go to heaven and come back.. wish u were able to see my check to cheek grin..

6. must be the pain meds --- ahahahah🤣🤣 really Lara.. Blame the poor meds.. and Mr. Malhotra and You walk way free... Oh Lord.. Bechari Sumon and bechari me... !!

7. Hanky...If you sew me one..I really wanted one of those hankies where my name would be on one corner with little flowers surrounding intricately... Hai.. What do you mean, Sumon can't sew? 😡 oh well that is ok.. I can sew. If you want, I am happy to sew one and send it to Mr. Malhotra..👍🏼 😆... Love this flirty Shravan.. too many wild ideas are running in my mind Lara.. when its Mr Malhotra, this woman (me) here doesn't function rationally ... 😆😆

8. Good Sumon is getting used to him.. and i also understand why she is afraid !!

9. what a blunt reply.. "it would depend on who that someone is.. and what intentions..defense mechanism" 👏 wow!! "a wall that seemed to be cracking because of his persistent attacks"... Nice tennis match.. very symbolic.

10. I hope, once the wall breaks, she is left with something instead, something beautiful..

11. Cooking doesn't tire me out, it calms me when i come home and cook the food of my choice.. ❤️ this is why I love your imagination. This is where you have won my heart.. this is why i appreciate your words and work so much.. you have spoken my mind. Cooking de-stresses me... and its a fact...I cook, when i feel the need to clear my head and want to relax..🤗🤗 for mentioning this.

12. She amuses him.. and felt all over the place.. Wow.. again brilliantly described..👏👏

13. Loved it how she made pasta to appreciate his help and effort.. again brought together by the pasta.. ahahhaha!! Love u for using pasta and not any other item.🤗.

14. hehehe.. Shravan Malhotra is the walking Epitome of the word - contradiction 😲 He too seems to amuse Sumo.. Amuse! Baffle!.. name it all.. great opponent she has.. 👏

15. Oh lord.. what an imagination Sumo has.. "was he taking her to forest to murder her:"🤣🤣

16. Like Sumon, I am a bit puzzled and surpised!! I wonder what the occasion is?

Cliff hanger? No!! Ok.. waiting for the next part.. i promise, I will be a good girl and wont make you wait for a feedback for this long.. I just don't want to end it with saying "beautiful update"... I want to take time to appreciate each word and sentence and tell you in details... coz all are connected.. !

YEAH .. I am again blabbering... Ok chalo.. Thank You and Loads of Love for writing this beautiful chapter.. so beautifully.. Hugs..

Take care of your self... Not sure, where you are situated.. but due to the seasonal change, Mr. Flu caught up with me.. So.. yeah meds were blabbering 🤣🤣 Ok till next time.. Cheeerrrs..

Love,

Susmita

Ps. How are you liking the recent episodes?

Edited by sman2195 - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#567

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Oh Lara! Lara! Lara!

This is superb!

I always wait for your updates and you never disappoint!

You're so fine at this art I don't even have words!

👏

This chappy was quite something ha...

ShraMan are very much cordial much to my happiness.

Sumo thinking of him as a fine man! I like!

Sumo gaping at his adam's apple! I super like!

The sexual tension was so thick I could cut it with a KNIFE!

Shravan demanding his share in the food...

Beaming like a fool at the hospital..

Excited at surprising her!

Love!

My favourite lines, Sum, that's a word but its 😳

Sumo's he's going to murder me 😆

I'm loving it more each day!

Can't wait for the next part..

Revelation!

I can imagine it's going to be epic!

Thanks for the pm!

Update real soon!

🤗

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#568

hey Lara...m new to this forum...though I was a silent reader from a month I guess..when I read that you want to hear silent readers views so I thought of commenting here... :) first of all I would say ur an amazing writer dear... one fine day I read all chapters in one go...n then I kept waiting for chapter 26 ...it was like no please post it...m being impatient ...but I kept patient...n I daily check whether u have updated next chapter or not... n also today when I saw chapter 27 ...a smile came to capture my lips... just one request please keep updating soon ...its tough to wait u know ;) n yeah best dialogue for me today was when sumo thought in mind that is he taking me forest to kill me ...hahaha it was hilarious n she felt it .. good luck for next chapter sweety.. :)

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#569

Wow amazing update it was lara ...u enjoyed it to the core👏

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

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Posted: 8 years ago

#570

Firstly thanks for a long chapter. Whenever I read any chapter of your FF I just feel it shouldn't end. And I m content with the length today. Coming to the chapter. It's as amazing as ever. I love how you are not rushing things. Adding every minute detail that helps a lot in visualizing the story. Every feeling, every emotion penned down so well. I love ShraMan's conversation. Everyone of them. Funny or intense, they have that spark. Love how they want to have the last say. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Do update soon.

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