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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Thanks so much dear Heema.😳
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#82

Originally posted by: dharsii

U wrote the ETRETR story .Because some members didn't see .That idea is very nice.It is showing ,U r such a good writer.
Gayathri thinks about Ranaji ,that's nice.I like her feeling towards him.Her cute and childish is nice.He scooped her & take her to their room.Because of her safety.nice.
He miss his first wife.But she understands his feeling.
Update soon

Thanks alot Priya..
aww so sweet of you dear.. 😳
ya thought to write summary so that you guys get idea why char. are like this..šŸ˜›
and i am so glad you liking the story..😃
ya Gayatri is cute..bubbly ..innocent and chidish and its her journey to groom as a queen.ā­ļø

sure will update soon.šŸ¤—
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#83

Originally posted by: anish17

Aww deep lovely update ā¤ļø
Now both are gonna start a new life
Gayu is really sweet
And rananji slowly getting to know about her was lovely
Who is that person with gun ? Is BRM trying to attack them or someone else ?
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the pm deep šŸ¤—

Thanks so much Ani..😳
glaD you loved it..ā¤ļøhmmM wait lil more and you will know who trying to harm Raga..šŸ˜‰
my pleasure sissy..😃
sure will update soon.šŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: abba12

lovely part Deepti 🄳

i am loving this sweet and beautiful story .. Emotional yet beautiful ..
It reminds me of raga :P ,,
Rana g is having hard time forgetting his first love , but rani gayatri isnt trying to replace her , she wants her own place in his heart .. :P ... great ,,
and someone tried to shoot her :O ... in mahal .. how come ? well may be someone from their own waasis ...
It was great of gayatri to console him and she tried to understand him too .. he is touched :) ..
you r going great deepti , waiting next ..

Thanks so much Amna..😳

wow i am so happy you loving it..😃

me too miss Raga and while writing it miss them more..ā¤ļø
in next updates you will know who is behind the attcak??šŸ˜‰

and thanks alot for appreciation dear..šŸ¤—

sure will update soon.šŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Saw it dear .thanks Sumi.😃
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Lovely update both are coming closer ranaji's heart is slowly start beating for gayatri again attack on gayatri but atleast this bring them more closer thnx 4 pm

Thanks so much Sabina dear...😳
ya both coming closer and Ranaji too starting liking Gayatri..ā¤ļø ā¤ļø
attack is sign of their life in danger but in a way it bring them close..yes..and soon the culprit will be caught..šŸ‘šŸ¼
my pleasure.😃
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Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

Nice update Deep...

Nicely written !!
Gayatri is so nave and sweet.. She is not forcing herself in Rana ji's life they both are trying to know each other...
Who is the person who tried to shoot Gayatri ??
Want to read soon...
Update fast😳

Thanks so much Niks..😳
Yup Gayatri is like that ā­ļø
and Ranaji is her first love too.. and she wants her own place..ā¤ļøand both are trying to know each other ..ā¤ļø

wait lil more and it will be cleared who tried to harm Gayatri??šŸ˜‰
aww thanks dear..you want to read soon and loving it...šŸ¤—
sure will update soon.šŸ‘šŸ¼





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Hello friends..šŸ¤—

thanks alot ..😳

your comments made me so happy ..šŸ¤—

here's posting Part 4 in next post..😃

happy reading. ā¤ļø ā¤ļø






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Gayatri caressed his hair and when Ranaji calm down..than also for long they were in that position..


Next morning when Gayatri woke up ..she found herself on bed and Ranaji no where ..she saw here and there ..and thought may be he went for some work ..than she get down from the bed and walked towards the door ..which was half closed and she saw Ranaji sitting on a chair and sleeping putting his on one hand on his forhead..



She was so touched ..she go in and took a shawl and she was about to cover him with shawl when Ranaji woke up by her touch and said ..



"Gayatri aap theek hain?"

["Gayatri you woke up ..You fine..you ok ??"]


"Main theek hoon ..par aap yahan??"


["I am allright ..but you here??"]


"Wo hua ye k aap hamari baahon main so gayi thi humne socha k aap ko palang par sula de..waha aapko jyada aaram milega..is tarah aap palang par aayi..aur hum apna karya kar rahe hain..hamari Rani ko har khatre se bachane ka..lagta hai abhi hi humne jhapki li hogi..par sipahi yahan hani.."


["Actually you slept off in my arms and I thought you should sleep on bed ..that would be more comfortable i guessed ..[he smiled lovingly in between but said in a way which made Gayatri blush ..and remembered her position in night in his arms..] so that's how you come on bed and I am doing my duty to protect my Rani ..just now I think I took a nap ..but guards are here.."]


"Hume pata hai k aap apne karya main kitne kushal hain..Ameerkot ki janta aur hum ye acchi tarah se jaante hain.."


["I know how much dutiful you are..Ameerkot's subjects and me too know it very well.."]



She also smiled now..

"Par ab aapko thora aaram kar lena chahiye ..aap.."

["But you should take some rest now..you.."]


"Nahi nahi ..hum bilkul theek hain..hume is sabki aadat hai..aap chinta mat kijiye..aur "THANK YOU"


["No no I am perfectly fine..i am habitual of these routines..you don't worry and "THANK YOU"]




[he said the last words in English]


"Kya kaha aapne angrezi main??"


["what did you said in last ??in English ??"]


" THANK YOU..OH.. hum jaante hain aap angrezi nahi jaanti ..theek hai hum bata dete hain ..isla matlab hota hai .."Dhnayawad "hindi main.."


[THANK YOU..OH I know that you don't know English ..ok I will tell you the meaning ..its "Dhanyawad" in hindi.."]



"Theek hai ..samajh gayi.."THANK OO aapko bhi .."

["Ok got it .."THANK OO to you too.."]




""THANK YOU " kahte hain Gayatri ..koi baat nahi..par ye achha hai k aapne koshish ki..aap jaldi hi angrzi seekh jayengi."


["Its "THANK YOU " Gayatri ..anyways its good you tried ..you will learn English soon too.."]


"Aap mujhe sijhayenge ??"

["You will teach me ..??"]



"Haan jarur ..hum sikhayenge ..aur bhi bahut kuch ..par pahle aap taiyar ho jaiye..aap ko samay se khana khana chahiye.."


["Yes I will and many things more I will teach you..first get ready ..you should eat on time..ok"]


both went in room..


last night has changed so many things between them..Ranaji was feeling more comfortable ..even
Gayatri too..




Both got ready and Ranaji was about to call Yashoda for Gayatri's breakfast but before that Gayatri Said ..




"Main oob gayi hoon..tang aa gayi hoon isi kaksh main sab kuch karti hoon..ab ye nahi chahiye..main bilkul theek hoon."


["I am bored ..doing everything in rooms only.. don't want this any more..i am fine now.."she made a baby face..]



"Hmm..theek hai..jaisa aap chahe ..par aap bahut kamzor hain..accha theek hai..chaliye yaha se chalte hain..]


["Hmm..ok as you wish but you are still weak Gayatri ..but fine ..let's go to the hall..]


She became happy ..both went to hall ..he asked to serve breakfast here only for Raniji too..


"Nahi Ranaji ..main ye ubla khaana aur nahi khana chahti..mujhe kuch chatpata chahiye..haan Ranaji.."


["Noo pls I don't want boiled food again..i want some spicy food..plss Ranaji.."]



"Nahi Rani Gayatri ..khshma kijiyega ..hum aapko iski izazat nahi de sakte ..jab tak doctors aapko iski izazat nahi de dete..kuch samay k liye aapko ye aur khana padega..kuch samay aur bardast kar lijiye..par hum ek baat kah sakte hain..aap aaj ka naashta karne k baad bura mahsoos nahi karengi.."


["Nope ..
Sorry Rani Gayatri..i cant allow it till doctors don't allow..you have to bear it for some time more ..but I assure you ..you wont feel bad after eating today's breakfast.."]




He bowed in front of her and settled chair for her..she sitted ..first time she was sitiing with him alone ..and having mixed kind of emotions..

He explained her table manners ..and showed her how to eat food with folk and knife..she nodded in yes looking at him ..



"Mujhe is sabki aadat nahi hai.."

["I am not habitual of all this .."]


He stood up behind her back and hold her hands and than explained her again how to use them.

Him near her..so close..explaining her ..she was trying to learn and at the same time overwhelmed too and he not loosing patience...telling him again and he said ..


"Hume pata hai aap is sabki aadi nahi hain.par ab aapko hina padega..
ab aap ek aam ladki nahi hain..ab aap hain.. "Maharani Gayatri Devi"
aapko bahut jagah jaana padega ..aur bahut se aayojano/utsavo main jaana hoga..uske liye bhi aap taiyar rahein.."


["I know you are not habitual of all this but you have to now..now you aren't a commoner ..now you are ..your highness Rani Gayatri Devi..you have to go to many places and will have to attend many events too..so be ready for that too.."]



He announced her name so royally..she couldn't describe in words how she was feeling..

Truth is bitter but its always washes lie and make everything crystal clear..last night has changed many things ..she thanked Ambe maa..[Godess Durga]
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Finally she understood how to use them ..


"Main poori koshish karungi k aapko meri wajah se sharminda na hona pade.."

["I will try my best to not feel you ashamed of me.."she could shyly said that.."]


"Bura nahi hai Rani Gayatri ..aap seekh gayi aur aap kar lengi..aur hum aapki madad karenge..Rajmata ..Swarna..Yashoda..balki hum sab aapki madad karenge.."



["Not bad ..now you learnt it Gayatri ..and you will do it ..and I will help you,,Rajmata is here to help you..Swarna ..Yashoda..infact we all"]




He hold her hand and caressed it..than he took a spoon and start feeding her breakfast ..she was loving it .its like dream come true..she and Ranaji together..no hatred ..only care ..concern..and blooming love ..she was a fan of Ranaji ..and now also she was praising him in her heart..really she feel so special and she like even boiled food from his hands..and she said that him even..


"Ranaji aap sahi the..main ye naashta aapke saath kabhi nahi bhooloongi.."THAANK OO" kshma kijiye main ise theek tarah bolna nahi jaanti...wo "THANK..THANK..""

["Ranaji you were right ..i will never forget this breakfast with you.."THAANK OO" sorry I don't know it properly..its "THANK ..THANK.."]



She felt embarrassed..and tried to stood up..


"Humein izazat dijiye "
["Allow me "]

he said and settled chair again..


"Koi baat nahi Gayatri ..aap hindi main bhi kah sakti hain..accha hai..balki hum bhi nahi bhoolenge kuch cheezein.."

["Its ok Gayatri..you can say in hindi too..good ..even I will ever forget somethings.."]






His eyes showing wide range of emotions..somewhere he was also feeling happy to give her ..her place..and to make her happy ..she is courageous but so innocent ..her heart is so pure and her love too..he know that now..he himself don't know how his heart now giving positive vibes towards Gayatri ??

the same heart who was against her before ..their heart to heart talk must have some effect ..but he also liking that ..and liking her too..she don't want anything big ..and she deserves the love she give to him..he being rude to him prev but he noticed her than too..her bubbliness ..her efforts to talk to him ..to do anything for him..to care for him..but aah! That time he was misunderstanding her..but now he know the truth..
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A sevak [servant] came and said ..
"Ranaji sab taiyar hai,,"


["Ranaji its ready .."]

"Theek hai ..hum aate hain.."

["Ok coming.."]


Gayatri looked at him and he smiled ..and told her that he is going to check the guns and all stuff ..and will practice some shooting too..now its more danger in palace.Gayatri nodded but it was clear from her face that she also like to come which Ranaji understood ..



"Aap aana chahti hain par aapko nahi ana chchiye ..aap kamzor hain abhi.."

["You want to come Gayatri but you should not ..you are week .."]



"Par main theek hoon..aur jaanti hoon k main theek hoon."

["But I am fine and I know that I am fine.."]



"Hum mazaak kar rahe the..aap aa sakti hain..aur dekh sakti hain..aakhir aap Rani hai..aapko rajya ki haalat k baare main pata hona chahiye..
chaliye phir.."


["I was just kidding ..you can come to see atleast and you are also queen afterall ..you should know kingdom position..ok come than .."]



he put his arm around her shoulder and took her to that place..
Gayatri's eyes opened wide seeing so much stuff ..weapons ..many guns ..etc


Ranaji put one rifle and shot at the bottles kept at distance ..it broke..than he put next gun and this time shot one by one many bottles in line..

"Hmm..good they are best..Ram singh..show me more.."he was examining and she was wondering ..and also putting hands on her ears..she was scared of those voices..he saw her and come near her..

"Aap koshish karna chahengi ?? oh! lagta hai aap dar rahi hain..koi chinta nahi ..hum yaha hain.."

["You want to try ?? oh! It seems you are scared ..no worries..i am here.."]



he pressed her hand gently..


"Aaiye saath main nishana lagaate hain..aapko ye sab seekhna chchiye ..goli chalana..talwarbaazi..aur bhi bahut kuch..aapka prashikshan shuru hota hai..aap kahti hain aap theek hain ..toh hum maan lete hain..isliye aapko thora bahut seekha rahe hain aaj..aur sab kuch seekhayenge jab aap poori tarah se theek ho jayengi.."




["Come let's shot together..you have to learn all these ..shooting..
sword fighting..etc..your training starts now..if you say you fine ..i believe..so giving you lil bit training today and will give you full after you get fully fit."]



she was listening to him ..Rana Indravardhan Singh Deo will train her ..she was clueless what's happening..but was going in the flow..loving every moment spent with him...seemed after all those painful moments..God's is so kind upon her..she was lost in her world thinking..


"Raniji aaiye.."

["Raniji..come .."]


her chain of thoughts broken and she realized he is calling her..she nodded in yes ..


"Hume banddok se dar lagta hai ..hume in par bharosa nahi hain.."

["I am scared of guns /rifles..i can't trust them.."]



she said ..seeing those..


"Par aapko hum par toh bharosa hain na ??agar haan toh aaiye ..kuch bura nahi hoga.."

["But you trust me !! right!! If yes than come on..nothing bad will happen.."
She gave her hand in his hand ..


"Haan main aap par vishvas karti hoon Ranaji .."

["Yes I trust you Ranaji .."]




He explained how to hold rifle and how to press ..how to shoot ..gun was heavy ..he knew..so he supported her with his arms over hers and they both hold gun..
Which she didn't expected ..first he being so close to her..she could feel his breath near her ears ..while he was explaining..her heart beating faster..in all those days post marriage .. she was dying to be with him but he being so rude and avoiding her ..and now so much change and she could feel its not fake ..its genuine..she was losing herself min by min..and wanted time to stop there..and she can stay forever in his arms..she was looking at him and than on gun


he asked her to shoot ..she didn't listened ..he pressed his fingers over hers and shoot..by the voice of bullet she came in senses and hell scared and turned around leaving gun and buried her face in his chest ..putting hands again on her ears..Ranaji in moment of time hold the rifle firmly by one hand and put it aside..and than embraced her ..giving her assurance ..that nothing happened..


he was also couldn't remained untouched from that moment..in all these years he is being lonely and there is no one in his life with whom he can share his hearty feelings ..he was surrounded by many ppl but still felt lonely..and last night Gayatri's concern touched him and he understood that there must be some connection between them that he could talk his heart out to him o/w he never shared his pain ..his thoughts with any one..he caressed her warmly and whisphered in her ears..




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"Dariye mat ..sab kuch theek hai.."

["Don't be afraid..everything allright.."]


by which Gayatri realized of her position and she lift her face up ..look at him and said shyly..


"Mujhe maaf kijiye ..main.."

[" I am sorry ..i was .."]


"Shshhh! Maafi mat maangiye..baap jaldi hi seekh jayengi..aur nidar hokar bandook chalayengi..hamare shabdo ko likh lijiye..yaad rakhiyega.."


["Shshhh! Don't be sorry Raniji..soon you will learn it ..and will shot fearlessly..mark my words.."]


"Mujhe aapka andaz bahut pasand aaya ..jaise aap nishana lagate hain ..ye meri kismat hai jo aap mujhe seekha rahe hain.."



["I love your style ..how you shot Ranaji..its my luck to be trained under you.."]


"Aap ko pasand aaya thanks ..oh! dhanyawad Gayatri.."

["You loved it..thanks ..oops dhanyawad Gayatri .."]



"Nahi mujhe samajh as gaya.."THANK YOU" theek kaha na maine..??"

["No I understand now "THANK YOU " theek kaha na maine..??"]
"Ji ..aap seekh gayi .wah!!"


["Yes ..you learnt it..wow.."he smiled..she smiled too..]




Their convo was interrupted by a sevak who came to tell them that Bhanu wants to give some imp information..


Ranaji called him there only ..he told that they have caught that shooter and he told them that Rajmata hired him ..


"Halaki main vishvas nahi karta us par par mujhe Ye suchna aapko deni hi thi Maharaj."


["Though i don't believe him but I have to give this info to you your highness.."]


"Kya?? Uski himmat kaise hui??"


["What!! How dare he !! ]


[he shouted first ..not believing any word ..but he understood this politics
Very well .so he calmed himself and said ]


"Shabash Bhanu..aapne use pakad Liya..yahi bahut hai..an chahe so jhooth bol raha ho ya nahi..hum dekhenge..aur aap aur pata lagaiye uske baare main..wo aisa kaise kah sakta hai ??us se saboot /pramaan maangiye."


["Good Bhanu ..you caught him ..its more than enough..whether he is telling a lie or not ..we'll see to it..and go and search more about him..how can he say like that ??ask him for proof."]


"Ji hukum .."

["Ok Hukum"]



"Ranaji koi Rajmata par ilzaam kaise laga sakta hai ?? ye jarur kisi ki chaal hai.."

["How can someone blame Rajmata?? Surely its somebody's planning.."]

"Haan Gayatri ..hum jaante hain..par ek Raja hone k naate hume sab par shaq hai..chahe wo Rajmata hi kyu na ho..par hume vishvaas hai k hum jaldi hi pata laga lenge..asli apraadhi ka..aap chinta na karein..jayiye aur jaakar aaram kijiye..theek hai.."


["Yes Gayatri I know..but as a King I have to suspect everyone including Rajmata ..but I am sure we'll catch the real culprit very soon..you don't stress yourself ..go and take some rest..ok"]

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Somewhere else near Ameerkots' boundry..


Some ppl gathered there ..there were camps ..fire was litting..it seemed a temporary place to live ..
One of them who was looking like a leader said to other person who is also covered his face like them all..


"Tumne apna kaam theek se nahi kiya..wo use kaise pakad sakte hain??wo sach bata dega..aur Rani Gayatri abhi zinda hai??use kyu nahi maara ab take??"


["You still didn't do your work properly ..how can they caught him..?? he will say the truth..and Rani Gayatri still alive ?? why not she killed by now??"]



"Nahi Sartaj ..befikr rahiye..wo mar jayega par sach nahi bolega..aur Gayatri .. ab tak kismat use bacha rahi hai..pahle him soon rahe the Ranaji use khud hi door kar denge..uski parwah nahi karenge aur hume mauka mil jayega use maarne ka..par ab wo chaubis ghante uske saath hi rahte hain ..aur hum kuch nahi kar pa rahe..par hum koshish kar rahe hain..aur wo jaldi hi maari jayegi.."



["No Sartaj ..rest assure ..he will die but not say the truth ..and about Gayatri ..she is saved by luck now..prev.we were thinking that Ranaji himself will avoid her much and we will get ample chance to kill her ..but now he is 24*7 there ..and we are not able to do anything..but we are trying..and she will be killed very soon.."]


"Aur agar wo jaldi nahi mari aur agar Pratap me kuch kaha you tum is duniya main ek aur din bhi nahi zinda rahoge..yaad rakhna."


["And if Rani Gaaytri will not get killed very soon and if Pratap will say anything ...you will not be here in the world next day..remember ."]
"Manjoor hai Sartaj.."


["Sure Sartaj."]he nodded and than all went to camps.

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Swarna informed in palace that they are coming soon and asked about the well being of Ggayatri and Ranaji ..Ranaji didn't picked up phone but ask Bhanu to attend and he told Swarnalekha that everything is fine..and they are waiting for them.


Gayatri asked Ranji why he did that ?? so that no body came to know that what happened in palace in their absence and it's a sensitive matter..


"Haan Gayatri aur hum khush hain k aap pahli baar main hi samajh gayi..aap main ek mahaan Rani hone k saare gun hain..bahut acche."

["Yes Gayatri and I am happy that you understood it at first place..you have the traits of a great queen ..good .."]



"Ranaji mujhe nahi pata par Jo mujhe laga ..maine kaha."

["Ranaji i don't know but I said what I feel like .."]



"Haan aur aapki soch sahi raah par jaa rahi hai .."

["Ya and your thinking is going on right path.."]


He shown him thumps up..



She said "Thank you Ranaji.." and this time also correctly.






Thanks friends.ā¤ļø ā¤ļø

Deepti.😳





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