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Posted: 9 years ago
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hiii to all my dear friends
back after a very long time. hope u all remember me...
so i am here with an OS requested by two of my friends #manasi90 and #gdfss 🤗
as we all know there is a lots of sadness😭 in the show.
so here i am with this OS. i tried my best, but really i don't know whether it is up to your expectations or not 😛

hope u all love it specially #manasi and #gdfss

so here we go...

YOU ARE MINE

Dev was sitting closing his eyes in his cabin. Sona's words were ringing in his mind

Nahi karti main ab aapse pyaar. Mujhe chodna aapki marzi thi, aur ab mera bhi ek decision sun lijiye main shaadi karne jaa rahin hun. Maine apne life Mein move on kar liya, so now just leave me. Aur main yeh aakhiri baar bol rahi hun that I don't love u

Dev opened his eyes and stood up

Dev-" Vo kaise itni asaani se keh Sakti hai that she don't love me anymore. Tum sirf meri Ho. Aur main janta hun tum sirf mujhse pyaar karti. And you are just MINE. I am coming sona" and dev took his coat from his chair and made his way to Sonakshi's hospital. After some time he reached there and parked his car. He came out of the car and as it was raining,he felt the drops of rain on his face and he remembered their first rain together and now he was fully drenched in rain. He went inside hospital and without knocking he went inside Sonakshi's cabin.

Sonakshi was getting ready to leave. When she heard the click sound of the door and looked in that direction of door and saw dev fully drenched in water

Sonakshi-"aap" and dev started taking baby steps towards Sonakshi

Dev(while going towards her)-"haan main" and dev stopped

Sonakshi-"Maine aapko pehle hi sab kuch clear kar chuki hun"

Dev-"par tumne meri baat nahi Sunni"

Sonakshi(confusingly)-"konsi baat"

Dev-"ki" again he started moving towards her and Sonakshi was moving back and finally she hit the wall

Sonakshi-"Ki kya" and dev blocked her

Sonakshi-"yeh aap kya kar rahen hai"

Dev-"Jo baat tum Janna chahti thi wahin Bata raha hun"

Sonakshi-"say" and slowly dev leaned towards her and Sonakshi closed her eyes because she was not able to bear the closeness between them. She was able to feel his breath on her ear lobes.

Dev(whispered)-"you are only mine" and Sonakshi made an irritated face and pushed him little away

Sonakshi(bit loudly)-"aapko ek baar Mein baat samajh nahi aati hai kya, that I don't love you" and dev smiled which made sonakshi totally confused with the reaction she got from him

Dev-"you don't love me na??"

Sonakshi-"yes I don't"

Dev-"pakka, because I don't think so"

Sonakshi-"aap kya sochtey hai kya nahi mujhe usse koi farak nahi padta aur aapke soochne ya na sochne se sachaai nahi badalegi. Aur yahi sachaai hai Ki main ab aapse pyaar nahi karti"

Dev-" tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti na"

Sonakshi-"kitni baar kahun nahin karti" and again dev moved towards her and blocked her. There was only few cm distance between them. Both were looking directly in each others eyes. Sonakshi was able to see something new but what was that,she was not able to figure out.

Dev-"koi farak nahi padta hai na meri wajah se"

Sonakshi-"nahin"

Dev(husky voice)-"jab main tumhare kareeb aata hun tab bhi nahi??" And Sonakshi's heart beat raised to a higher speed and she made herself say

Sonakshi-"nahi"

Dev-"jab main tumhe chutta(touch)hun(dev slide his hand on her arm from her palm to shoulder) tab bhi koi farak nahi padta??" And with his touch a shiver went through her spine and she closed her eyes

Sonakshi-"nahiii" and now dev did his master stroke, he slowly leaned towards her face and their lips were just few inches apart. Sonakshi was able feel his breath on her face. And dev smiled at how she used to get effected by him. And now he slowly plastered his lips with hers. And Sonakshi opened her eyes and started pushing him but he was little tough for her. After few try, she went totally weak and responded with same passion as he. She was longing for his touch, his love, his care so long. She was able to see hunger, passion in his eyes for her.

Dev's hand was roaming on her back pushing her towards himself and Sonakshi was caressing his hairs. And suddenly Sonakshi's phone rang but none of them heard it as both of them were lost in each other. Again after sometime, her phone rang but this time she saw her phone and the name flashed was hritik. And dev also saw that and he broke the kiss. And Sonakshi realised what they did but dev was just smiling. Sonakshi was about to pick up the phone but dev again leaned towards her and whispered in her ear

Dev-" I said na you are MINE" and left from there smilingly. And by the time phone got disconnected.

Sonakshi knew what they did was wrong but her heart was not supporting that. She was smiling remembering what they did.

And now again her phone ringed and the name flashed was home

Sonakshi-"hello"

Maa-"kothae tumi"(where are you)

Sonakshi-"aschhi"(coming) and ended the call

hope u all loved it

do hit like and comment(plzzz long dear)
THANK YOU😊

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sa1234B thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Lovely OS👏soo sweet & romantic as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all Thanx for the pm...
And now u again proved ur writing...that u r the best...
Aap best ho Aur Rahoge...
Loved it from bottom of my heart...
Waiting for the next part...
Js amazing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's so beautiful dear...
Lovely OS...thanks for sharing it
Do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gdfss

First of all Thanx for the pm...
And now u again proved ur writing...that u r the best...
Aap best ho Aur Rahoge...
Loved it from bottom of my heart...
Waiting for the next part...
Js amazing...


glad u loved it dear
and thnx fr the appreciation, it really really means a lot
hope i was able to write up to your expectations

i wrote it keeping in mind just like an OS dear but whenever i will get any idea to extend it then i will surely do it...

again a gr8 thnx dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing os...
Loved it... ❤️
Do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer



glad u loved it dear
and thnx fr the appreciation, it really really means a lot
hope i was able to write up to your expectations

i wrote it keeping in mind just like an OS dear but whenever i will get any idea to extend it then i will surely do it...

again a gr8 thnx dear


Oops sorry I forgot that it was an one shot...I only read n read...didn't even realised...
Anyways whenever you get time write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you angel for sucha wonderful OS... With all zatkas and confusions of on-going track one needs sucha chocolaty write up.
Again... write more such Os's.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manasi90

Thank you angel for sucha wonderful OS... With all zatkas and confusions of on-going track one needs sucha chocolaty write up.

Again... write more such Os's.


glad u loved it dear
it really means a lot
hope i wrote up to ur expectations
surely i will whenever i will get time
again a gr8 thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I would have loved if something like this in d show...passionate and romantic

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