Winter:seasons of safed

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have come across thousands of winters,
I have ignored so many spring,
I am the curse of Durbasha,i m the bird of flame...

Will never return to your morning,
to play with light in his face,
will never return to your day,
your Shiv mandir,where some other Dhani will pray.

Will never return to ur evening,
not in busy household chores,
Will never return to your night,
where box of complaints,and demon would love and fight.

Life here is as it goes,
from ghat of Banaras,to Mumbai ghettos,
here season never change,only one winter,
i m no more the innocence i was,can u remember?


Sorry fiends could not proceed as I promised,d show ended, end it was which broke my heart, didnt feel like writing anything.but had to finish it as queen Elsa already made d siggy before i could even write.thanks for bearing with me,one or two more.

Edited by simple2joy - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Let me tell the story
of this man who fell in love
Let me tell you something
since I've never ever been like this before
lost your love,
and my heart has been so lonely

I don't understand you
as the girl I used to know
all these things have changed you
and you can't pretend that we can be
the friends we were before
I just need your love
I just need to have you here with me, yeah

Chorus:
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please, remember that I miss you
And for you I'll move the world
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore

I don't need the trouble
But, that's coming with this love
Many times you look at me
Like you regret this feeling even more
and I knew,
that one day you'd want to leave me

I can not forgive you
I prefer to feel the pain
If you don't respect me
then I'd better be alone
no matter that I want you back
that you were my life
i'll always remember what we had, yeah

Chorus:
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please, remember that I miss you
And for you I'll move the world

If you gonna leave me lady,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore, yeah baby

(Tose Solo!)

If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please remember that i miss you
And for you ill move the world

If you gonna leave me lady,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore
This song belongs to the most beautiful singer who unfortunately is no longer with us he is a Macedonian singer Tose Proeski.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww zad this is great return gift. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy

awww zad this is great return gift. 👏👏👏

thanks😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Joya...This a beautiful poem, thou took time for me to understand, I'm much in to literature...From what I have understood is that whatever may happen life goes on and Time waits for none. This is so true and practical. There was a time when Dhani and Viplav who were so close once upon a time in one season are separated in another, so people need to value what they have before they start remembering how valuable it was when they lose...Your poems have lot of depth in them and they are really meaningful...Thank you for your beautiful contributions in Ishq...Till then take care.
This song depicts what Viplav feels for Dhani through out the show.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0_whPMdMBE[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hayyyeee ur sig...😲👍🏼

Super se b operrr post n sig of anna n elsa...😳
Will b right bac..

m backs,,!!😆

ohh winter,, thnx fr writing ths n accomplishing one more step towards ur goal,,😳 u make me proud in everything u does,, be it ITP presentation,,standing up fr righteousness,, or fulfilling the task u ve set fr urself as a token of gratitude to ths amazing show,, though I agree it does go haywire at times so then which show doesn't?? bt it has connected to us some other level haina,,hence we overlooked its flaws,,😳


winter k bare mai ill copy paste the same thing,,!!
References to winter in literature may refer to death, old age, pain, loneliness, despair or an end. The season provides the setting for painful messages..👏
thnks u explain me Shakuntala n Durbasha story n now I can actually see how each n every word of ur poem has deeper meaning,, more than wat meet to ones eye!! literature writing not my cuppa tea,,bt it seems ths company will improve a duffer person like me too,,!!😛

u kno wat gvng uss IKRS journey in terms of seasons is a whole new perspective to ths masterpiece,,waiting eagerly fr the last part,,!! all the best!!👍🏼
Edited by NusiSg - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zajedno

Let me tell the story
of this man who fell in love
Let me tell you something
since I've never ever been like this before
lost your love,
and my heart has been so lonely

I don't understand you
as the girl I used to know
all these things have changed you
and you can't pretend that we can be
the friends we were before
I just need your love
I just need to have you here with me, yeah

Chorus:
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please, remember that I miss you
And for you I'll move the world
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore

I don't need the trouble
But, that's coming with this love
Many times you look at me
Like you regret this feeling even more
and I knew,
that one day you'd want to leave me

I can not forgive you
I prefer to feel the pain
If you don't respect me
then I'd better be alone
no matter that I want you back
that you were my life
i'll always remember what we had, yeah

Chorus:
If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please, remember that I miss you
And for you I'll move the world

If you gonna leave me lady,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore, yeah baby

(Tose Solo!)

If you gonna leave me baby,
If you wanna kill this love
Please remember that i miss you
And for you ill move the world

If you gonna leave me lady,
If you're walking out the door
Walk away and never look back behind you
'cuz I won't be there anymore

This song belongs to the most beautiful singer who unfortunately is no longer with us he is a Macedonian singer Tose Proeski.

Good one zaj😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks joya...it's beautiful as usual...Will miss these songs and the author.
Edited by pearl82 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Joya
the winter phase of Dhani's life expressed beautifully! I can feel Dhani's pain and isolation from love in the lines. True the poem is tinged with pathos and desolation but since it is one in a series in the cycle of seasons , it is also a precursor to the feeling of life coming to a full circle culminating in happy thoughts and reminds me of the line from Keats' poem-'If winter comes can spring be far behind?' Looking forward to your springtime song!

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