AKDHA OS : THIS LOVE NEVER END.....

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wow Supercute story it was 👏 Loved how you portrayed Jodha and Sujamal's relation! Totally in love with your story...a perfect gift for Raksha bandhan indeed 😃

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice OS

beautiful depiction of brother - sister love with an angle of love story

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Very beautiful relation of brother and sister you have depicted Hemu, its a very special bond that stays for a lifetime infact it strengthens day by day. I truly got too emotional reading the bidaai thing, you already know why...

Just superb👍🏼 I am speechless right now..

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Beautifully written 😊 pure bond of brother and sister and very well knitted the thing what every bro wish for his sisy👍🏼 it's lovely.

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ketaki1

@ketaki1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

sorry for late reply dear...you know my condition...wifi problems..
anyways the os is very nice...new concept...beautifully written..
jodha's and her brothers relation is beautifully expressed...
loved it...

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Fantastic os babes...
One of my best os.. Totally loved it..
Both jo n Suj love beyond anything...
Suj is chasing jo to stop eating..
Hee jo is hidden behind the bed n teasing is bhai..
Maina say is ladki ka kya hoga..
Every time jo is cry so much with happy..
Wow Suj give gift to jo n jo give 100 watt off smile.. Kyu na de har ladki khush hoti hai gift paa ke...
Suj is trying to drap saree..
By seeing this scenes ja started crying n Suj misunderstood him..
How sweetly jo cup his face n talk..
Ja is loved this n chuckling at jo ANTIC's..
Finally their marriage ia fixed but our poor jo is hell nervous n she in ja land...
Omg First jo ask ja no n run from there n suj is chasing her..
They stary talking whole day n night..
Last scenes is so lovely..
Good imagination Babes n i am proud of u..
Thanks for such a awesome gift...
Love u so much babes