||ONE SHOT -Materialistic Life || Pt 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a late evening the storm had hit that
city very hardly winded were blowing very harshly as if they are getting angry over something black clouds were almost ready to burst out and shower heavy droplets of rain due to the black clouds the that timing the city get wrapped in immense darkness ..everyone was in rush to go there home from human beings to animals in the middle of the city people were seeking every possible way to escape from there and in that rush a girl of late twenties was walking freely very calm totally contrast to that situation walking slowly getting wet each n every heavy drop of rain making her drench she was lost very lost to her thought a thought which making her upset she was trying very hard to forget that thought ...but it was impossible but she had no choice it was her fault ,it was her mistake her rigid attitude was giving her extreme pain that pain was killing her inside she wanted to chase time move faster than time want to achieve success ,fame ,money ,popularity ,heavy bank balance and all the materlistic thing but in order to chase so called "greatness " she had left all the thing for whom she was doing all these things she lost her relationships ,friendships and most important thing peace of mind ...she checked the date may 29 special date for her on this date her sister was born her angel prateeksha her younger sister ...but look at the unfortunate condition she can't even wish her after all she said in anger she is nothing for her ..but today returnkng from office she was going to boarding school way to wish her carrying a scrapbook which she made for her And a beautiful neck piece ...she wants to ask sorry from her sister to neglecting her so much in her life after all she was responsibility of her not a burden ...now she was at huge gate of her sister's boarding school she visit inside ask the warden to meet her sister by each passing movement her legs start shaking she don't know how to face her sister but she have to meet her sister ...


*To be continued

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This OS is birthday gift for my dearest friend DIVISHA ...
Happy birthday dear

I have written something after a long time do please excuse the errors ..,n please give review
Edited by SHADESOFNATURE - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My dear Stardoll🤗...u made my day so special...i m so so happy...and u wrote for me after a long time...that means alottt🤗
Coming to the story
Starting was too good👏
I really liked the way u described the weather and the girl who is totally opposite to it...
So the girl wanted to live a Materialistic life...but money can't buy u love...happiness...care...joy...😳
She neglected her responsibility...her sister...but now she felt that...and she went to her boarding school..
I hope her sister has no grudges against her😃😳
Waiting for next part...continue soon...
Love u my stardoll🤗
Edited by Desirable_Star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written piece :D
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written pari
Congrats and keep it up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is touching .. I can relate to it ... 😭 Many beautiful relationships which are the reason of our smile, are often left behind in the cut throat competition of the world... We don't even realize and the time flies by.. 🥺 Amidst them we make so many mistakes, rectification of those seems almost impossible... 💔

Beautiful OS dear.. 😊

Thanks for the PM Prakriti... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!! story of two sisters..grt..!!🤗
Continue soon..!! Want to know the story, hw she faces her younger sis.!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super awsomeee Pari!!!!!!! Loved it how you describe the bitter reality of life!!!!!! So true!!!!!!! 😔 welll writtennn!!!! Con.soon!!! Waiting for next part!!!!:love you Pari!!!! So happy to see you back !!! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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29 ko mera bhi birthday hai no wishes for me ...😭

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