IPKKND FF: KHUSHI by JALEBI JANE Thread 1: EPISODE 001-052

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MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

ASR wants to correct his mistake before khushi gets an hint of it . So he had come rushing to cinema to claim his rights , Khushi who just wanted to escape from the lecher Shyam was relieved to see her husband . Their first kiss , that was lovely . Khushi did not protest when Arnav kissed her or held her by waist . Arnav manages to heal the pain given by ASR .

P.S I so wanted to see ASR(Owner of a Fashion House ) showering khushi with best designer saris in the show , but that never happened .

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Maya,

What a fun chapter this was. Also for me helps push away images of the very embarrassing Raizadas at the cinema episode from the serial, which quickly descended into slapstick of the lowest order. This one has ASR actually letting himself go and discover the heart beat he has only felt earlier on occasion...always in his wife's presence! Loved how they behaved like teenagers and made out at the movies. Now this is how one would expect ASR to behave, hai na?! Good one, girl! 👏

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mogul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

that was so cute. amazing story.

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Reveur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

You are reviving. One of the bookmarked-indexex or wilted paperbacks which brings us heart whenever we seem to lose ours. And days without you were difficult.

This comes as such a gift! Thankyou for considering us and our state and giving us this thread to hang on to, pun intended.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

sunitikapoor wrote:

Thank you for reposting the story...I am reading this for the first time. I have heard about your stories from one of my friend and she told me Maya is back you must read her stories. Welcome back dear...and whenever your blog is ready do let us know. I am ready to join this journey with ARSHI and you till the end.

Just finished reading all the seven parts. Arnav realised his mistake...that Khushi is innocent. I love when he came into the theater and rescue Khushi from sitting next to Shyam. Such a magical equation between both of them. Why he had gone to Lucknow to find out about Shyam. At least here Arnav is showing some common sense and not going against it. Love the way she trying to avoid her husband...and he came and ask her to feed him. Just WOW moments between ARSHI...even when Payal is teasing her. ARSHI and their equation is changing from hate to love, and it is always a treat to read. Ahhh...and their first kiss...beautifully written dear.

I got this story last night at around 12 am and started reading it. Thanks to all my writers recommending me this story. Maya take a bow dear!

Am pleased that you are enjoying it. Email me@mayahill.com to receive update notifications for website.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Snell wrote:

Omg I just loving the story. I want MORE and MORE!!! Is it possible for you to give two updates in a day ;)

OR---you could read the other two stories ;-)

Or when it's on the website you can binge-read.

Jalebi Jane

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Really loving this story :)
Thanks for the update

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

MDTharun wrote:

P.S I so wanted to see ASR(Owner of a Fashion House ) showering khushi with best designer saris in the show , but that never happened .

I know. I wanted to see him bring some elegance to her wardrobe. So in my writing, I do it. Dress her in clothes worthy of her beauty, I wrote in one of the serials.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Anu567 wrote:

I have not seen the IPKKND cinema episode. And now I dread it. Our Nostalgia thread will be depressing when we reach the part of the serial where the show quality suffered.

Jalebi Jane

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Reveur wrote: You are reviving. One of the bookmarked-indexex or wilted paperbacks which brings us heart whenever we seem to lose ours. And days without you were difficult.

This comes as such a gift! Thankyou for considering us and our state and giving us this thread to hang on to, pun intended.

Thank you for your welcome. I'm enjoying being back.