Satyabhama's Plea- An OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: shabari14

Thank you for writing such great OSes, di! And you said patience, I was impatient and still am for a sequel! Please write one!

Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt

First of all. Yes, Adi Keshava Temple.😆😆😉

Secondly, "Soubhagyavathi.. Oh no no.."😆😆

And since I am commenting this after posting 'Rukmini Kalyana Gopala' (with all the gesticulation by Krsna and Ekanamsha's assimilation) this seems like a continuation!

It may sound cliched, but I love the succint way of explaining Bhudevi's perumai and mahimai while talking about Satyabhama's own wit and unpredictability.

Speaking of Sridevi and Bhudevi, why does no one talk about Neela Devi? (Which gives me another idea, please don't take it from me.😆)

Narada is ... as unpredictable as his Narayana.

And so, Satyabhama's wish is fulfilled! But then, she gazes into his chocolate brown eyes - yes, she is Bhudevi, Radharani and all that, but I didn't know chocolate was invented then😉

Originally posted by: Meself

Srutha I have said this before and I say this again, you have gotten into the pysche of Satyabhama so well. I could see how cleverly you incorporated all that we feel about her through the monologues by Lord Vishnu himself.

Also the fact that you added the elements that dominates Bhudevi herself was utterly beautiful. So where is the sequel to this one?