Asya SS: Meri Zindagi *NEW* (Chapter 1 UPDATED)

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I want to take a break from my other fan fiction: Asya Forever
Only for a while because I don't get time to update and because I don't want to rush the story.
So until then, I want to write another fan fiction on Asad and Zoya. But this one is going to be a short story. And I will do small updates, at least once a week.
This one is going to begin from where Tanveer pushes Zoya off the cliff in Ajmer. There are going to be some twists that weren't in the actual show. I find it so weird how no one found out that Zoya was pushed off a cliff and she wasn't injured in any way. But its a TV so what else can we expect.
I hope some of you guys are interested in this and hopefully I get some comments and motivations to continue this.
Thank you.

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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Nice to see you,Dear.😊
It was so happy to see you with another story on ASYA(KABHI).😊
Your Ideas are so Different.😊
I also felt like that only when Tanveer pushed Zoya no one saw her and Zoya came back without any injury,How can she? 😲
The Story line was so Interesting.😊
Update When You are free.😊
Always Keep Smiling.😊
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Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Nice to see you,Dear.😊
It was so happy to see you with another story on ASYA(KABHI).😊
Your Ideas are so Different.😊
I also felt like that only when Tanveer pushed Zoya no one saw her and Zoya came back without any injury,How can she?😲
The Story line was so Interesting.😊
Update When You are free.😊
Always Keep Smiling.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu



Thank you so much!
Your comments mean a lot to me 😊
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Chapter 1:

Ajmer:
Location: at the cliff

"I LOVE YOU MR. KHAN!" Zoya screamed out loud at the top of the cliff. "I LOVE YOU! HAAN MR. KHAN, MAIN AAPSE BOHAT BOHAT MOHABBAT KARTE HOON." Zoya screamed even louder.

"Ya Allah, mujhe takat dena k main uss Tanveer sy larr sakon or mere Mr. Khan ko innocent prove kar doon. Mujhe pata hai k Mr. Khan kabhi mujhe dhoka nahi dy sakty. Maine phele unke baaton py yakeen kyun nahi kiya?" Zoya cried to herself.

Meanwhile, Asad was waiting for Tanveer near their hotel.

"Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k Zoya mujhse kuch keh rahe hai? Aisa kyun lag raha hai k wo mujhse baat karna chahate hain?" Asad questioned himself. "Ya Allah, meri Zoya jahan bhi hai, usse hifazat rakhna hamesha."

"Mujhe jaldi uss Zoya k kuch karna hoga. Warna Jammy meri kaise ho gy?" Tanveer said to herself while walking towards the cliff where Zoya is. "Lagta hai aaj kismat mere haath main hai. Zoya, tumhara jaane k waqt aa gaya hai." Tanveer laughed evilly to herself.

"Zoya." Tanveer called out.

"Tum yahan? Yahan kya kar rahe ho?" Zoya questioned her.

"Bechari Zoya. Pichli baar toh tum baach gaye thee. Par ab kaise baacho gee? Tumhare Nikaah sy phele jitne baar b maine tumhe marne k koshish ki thee, utne baar hai tumhare Mr. Khan ny tumhe baacha liya tha par ab wo tumhe kaise baachye gy? Zoya, iss baar tum nahi baacho gy. Or tum mera kuch b nahi bigar sakte. Jammy ko kabhi nahi pata chale ga k uss raat kuch hua nahi tha. Jo b main kehte hoon, wo yakeen kar lety hain." Tanveer said evilly.

"Tanveer, dekhna, ek na ek din Mr. Khan ko saach pata chal jaye ga or uss din tumhe koi nahi baacha paye ga. Yaad rakhna." Zoya said.

"Allah Hafiz Zoya. Ab jo bhi ho jaye, Jammy ko kuch pata nahi chale ga kyunki tum unhe baatane k liye zinda nahi raho gee." Tanveer laughs evilly and pushes Zoya off the cliff.

"Aaa." Zoya screamed. Zoya holds onto the rocks to prevent herself from falling down. Tanveer gets a medium sized rock and throws it on Zoya. It falls on her hands and she loses her grip on the rocks.

"Aaa." Zoya screamed again and she slipped down on the cliff. Her head hit on a rock. But Zoya somehow holds onto some more rocks.

Tanveer laughs and leaves from the cliff before anyone sees her.

Near the hotel:

"Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k Zoya kisi musibat mein hai?" Asad said to himself.

"Jammy chalein?" Tanveer said to Asad as she returned after thinking that she killed Zoya.

"Tanu tum kahan thee?" Asad asked her curiously.

"M-Main, kaheen bhi nahi. Idhar he thee. Jammy please chalein, hume dair ho rahe hai." Tanveer said to Asad and pulled him towards the car. Suddenly the wind blew so hard and the chaddhar that Asad had in his hands blew away. He tries chasing after it but Tanveer pulled him back and made him sit in the car.

At the cliff:

"Koi mujhe baachaye." Zoya screams while trying her best to hold onto the rocks. "Ya Allah, please mere madat kijiye. KOI HAI?" Zoya screams louder. "Please koi mujhe baachaye. HELP."

A man hears screams coming from the cliff and heads towards the cliff. The chaddhar that blew away from Asad's hands lands on the cliff. Zoya sees the chaddhar and tries using it to climb up. But she isn't able to. She slips down a bit.

"Aaa." Zoya screamed out loud again. And while holding onto the chaddhar, Zoya is almost unconscious.

That man reaches near the cliff and sees Zoya struggling to hold onto the chaddhar. "Koi mujhe baachaye." Zoya says weakly.

"Excuse me, main aapke madat kar sakta hoon." That man says.

Zoya looks up and sees that man. But she's feeling really dizzy so she can't really see his face properly. That man holds onto the chaddhar.

"Ap iss chaddhar ko tight pakriye. Main apko upar kenchta hoon. Please ap isse chor na maat." That man said to Zoya.

Zoya held tightly onto the chaddhar but she was falling really weak due to her head injury. "Mujhse nahi ho paye ga." Zoya said weakly.

"Apse ho raha hai. Himmat rakho. Please koshish karo. Kuch nahi ho ga apko." That man said, trying to give courage to Zoya. Zoya listened to that man and she held tightly. He pulled her up. Zoya successfully made it up. But she fainted.

"Tum theek toh ho?" He asked Zoya.

Zoya still half conscious said to him weakly "Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you? Do I look okay? Main apko theek lago rahe hoon?" And she fainted. That man laughed at her cuteness.

"Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai k mera iss ladki k saath koi purana connection hai? Iske taraf keeche gaya main. Mujhe aisa lag raha tha k mujhe koi apna pukar raha hai." That man said to himself. "Mujhe isse hospital leh k jaana ho ga." That man said.

He lifted Zoya in his arms. But before he could leave, some news reporters arrived. Some man near the Ajmer Fort was talking to his friend about how he saw a woman pushing off another women at cliff. The man's friend called the news reporters to go see what happened at the cliff and update the news on the television. As soon as the new reporters arrived, they started questioning the man who saved Zoya, about what happened to Zoya and how, but he ignored them and tried to leave to take Zoya to the hospital. He took Zoya to his car and made her sit in the front seat. He saw that Zoya was still holding onto the chaddhar. He took the chaddhar and tied it onto Zoya's head, where her injury was, to try to stop more blood from coming. He quickly got into the driver's seat and drove off to the hospital.

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Asad's residence:

"AMMI." Najma screamed out loud.

Dilshad came running. "Kya hua Najma?"

"Ammi, woh dekhiye." Najma said while crying.

Dilshad collapsed on the floor after seeing what Najma told her. "Ya Allah, yeh kya ho gaya?" Dilshad cried.

"Ammi, main Bhaijaan ko phone laga tee hoon." Najma said while crying. Najma dialed Asad's number. "Hello, Bhaijaan." Najma said.

"Najma kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahe ho? Sab theek hai?" Asad asked, scared.

"Nahi Bhaijaan, ap bas please jaldi ghar aa jaye." Najma said and disconnected the call.

"Naj-" the call was disconnected before Asad could even speak. He told his driver to drive faster. Asad reached home in less than half an hour. He ran to the front door and barged in. Tanveer followed him in.

"Pata nahi kya hua ho ga." Tanveer said to herself.

"Ammi, kya hua? Ap or Najma ro kyun rahe hain?" Asad asked Dilshad worriedly. When he entered the house, he saw his Ammi was sitting on the floor, near the couch, crying. Najma was trying to console her but she herself wasn't able to control her emotions.

"Asad, woh Zoya. TV." Dilshad tried to say but she was unable to control her tears.

"Ammi, Zoya kya? Kya hua Zoya ko?" Asad asked his Ammi, with tears in his eyes.

"Bhaijaan, ap TV on kijiye." Najma said while crying.

Asad turned on the TV. What he saw on the TV broke him. He collapsed on the ground. There was news on the TV of a girl who fell off the cliff. That girl was none other than Zoya. Asad saw that she was badly injured and there was this man with her who was carrying her.

The new reporter was saying: "yeh ladki ek pahri sy ghir gaye thee. Ek ladke ny aa k isse bachaye or woh ladka usse hospital ly gaya, Ajmer Hospital. Agar ap iss ladki ko jaanty hain, toh please isse milne Ajmer Hospital aa jaye. She is in critical condition." The news reporter kept talking on.

"Ammi, main abhi Ajmer wapis ja raha hoon." Asad said while crying.

"Asad, hum sab bhi chale gy tumhare saath." Dilshad said.

Everyone, in tears left to Asad's car to go to Zoya. Tanveer was the only happy one.

"Aacha ho ga agar yeh Zoya baache na. Aur baache gy bhi kaise? Itne unchai sy giri hai. Iska baachna mushkil hai." Tanveer said to herself and smirked.

Najma saw Tanveer smirking and smiling. But she brushed is aside thinking it was her misconception.

Everyone got into the car, Asad was driving, he had completely lost it after he saw Zoya. It was as if Mangalpur scene was flashing again before his eyes. His Zoya was laying lifeless yet again and he couldn't save her. Asad's tears wouldn't stop but he knew he had to be strong for his Ammi, his Tamatar, and moreover his Zoya. Who would take care of Zoya if he fell weak? No he couldn't fall weak. His family needed him. Zoya has no one in this world except for him amd his family. She needs all of them at this moment. Nothing can happen to Zoya. She is a strong girl. A very strong girl. "Meri Zindagi. Haan Zoya meri zindagi hai." Asad said to himself.

Dilshad was completely broken. She was thinking to herself that what did this poor girl ever do to anyone that she was facing all this. She was praying to Allah to keep her Zoya safe, her daughter. Yes, Zoya is her daughter. She became her daughter the day she first stepped into her house, the day she said she was jealous of Asad and Najma to have such a caring Ammi, and the day she said she reminded her of her Ammi, her laugh, her everything. All Dilshad wanted was her daughter to be safe. Zoya became the sunshine of Dilshad's life.

Najma was just as broken as the rest. She wanted her best friend to be safe, her sister, her other half, the girl who supported her through every situation like an older sister. She would die if anything happened to Zoya. Zoya always helps others, makes everyone happy, even though she might be broken from the inside. She hides every pain to give happiness to everyone. She can't leave them and take away their reason to live.

Everyone was lost in thoughts and crying over Zoya, except for Tanveer. She was happy that Zoya was going to die soon and then Asad will be all hers. Her child will have a father's name and she will be living like a queen.

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Ajmer:
Hospital:

"Iss k condition bohat critical hai. Isse bachana bohat mushkil ho gaya. Or hume blod k zarooray hai. Sar py chot lagne k wajah sy blood loss hua or operation karte waqt or loss hua. Ap please blood arrange kijiye, B postive inka blood group hai or kisi b tarah inke family k baare mein pata lagaye." The doctor said to that man.

"Jee. Waise mera blood group B Positive hai. Ab mera blood use kar lain." That man said.

"Phele apka blood test karwaty hain. Waisa apka naam kya or apka patient sy kya rishta hai?" The doctor asked.

"Mera naam hai-"

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Precap: Asad and his family reach the Ajmer hospital. They meet the man who brought Zoya to the hospital, and gave her blood. Zoya is still in critical condition.
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So guys how was it? Any guesses on who that man can be? Anyone who guesses correctly, the next post will be dedicated towards them.

I hope you all liked this part and I hope it was interesting. Please leave your reviews. Comment and like. Thank you.
Edited by Asya_Forever - 9 years ago
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i think that man is haider.
nice update

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