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Posted: 8 years ago
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Though it seemed as if it was hard to go any faster than he was running already , somehow the man summoned a little more energy from somewhere and increased his pace a little bit more.
The urgent need to find a safe haven for his nine month old son, who he held in his arms was probably what made him dig a little deeper.
He turned to see how far back his pursuers were but saw noone.
Either they had taken a wrong turn somewhere or they had changed tactics as to how best to capture him.
"Please God, please God..."
The fervent prayer was to ask for him to just reach his destination.
As if in answer to his prayers, the door to the Catholic orphanage he was headed to opened and a young woman in a nun's habit came out.
He rushed up to her and thrust the child into her arms.
" Please sister, please help me. Some men are after me. They have killed my wife and are now after me and my child. Please protect him. I will be back for him if I survive. Don't let them take him. "
He took out a wad of cash from his pocket along with a gold locket and thrust them at the nun.
"Use this for his upkeep. If I don't make it, when he is grown up please give him this. It contains information of who he is."
The man then forcefully pushed the nun back through the door and closed it.
When the man thrust the child into her arms , the nun had been too stunned to respond or utter a single word.
She was about to open the door and call the man back when she heard pounding feet and shouting voices, that made her hesitate.
Maybe she should not go outside after all.
The man had seemed too agitated to be lying.
She walked over to the window and peeked outside from the corner of the curtain.
Sure enough armed gundas were running down the street obviously in hot pursuit of the mysterious man.
She feared for his life as she heard the triumphant cries of the gundas claiming to have located their target.
She looked down at the child in her arms.
Throughout it all the child had remained fast asleep and blissfully ignorant of all the excitement around him.
He seemed to smile in his sleep and she noticed the dimples.
Everything about him spoke of wealth.
From the beaded gold bracelets on his wrists to the romper he was wearing which bore the logo of a famous Italian designer.
Even his soft dewy skin spoke of major pampering and his chubby cheeks testified that he had never lacked a meal in his short life.
The nun wondered what she should do.
She closed her eyes in prayer seeking guidance from God when she heard the voice of the Mother Superior remonstrating with someone further inside the nunnery.
God sure did answer prayers.
She'd asked for a guidance from God and he had given her a solution.
She went to Mother Superior's office and explained what had happened.
The Mother Superior heard the young nun's tale and wondered who the man and child could be.
She was a softy at heart , but a pragmatist too.
She agreed to shelter the child only for ten days then report what had happened to the authorities.
Ten days became months without any action being taken and months became years until at seven years old a renowned and well respected businessman , Balwinder Pandey, appeared at the orphanage's door offering to adopt the child.
For them, this fortunate break was just testament to what they believed about the child.
The nuns had never named him but believed he was a blessed child.
So that's what they called him ; The Blessed One.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...a fresh leaf for such a cvs twisted story...
thank you Bea1...

wish if this came true...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is actually for Tabitha. Her comment on "A Mother's Son" saying she wanted Bihaan's parents to be some rich business people types who love him to bits made me write this. Hope she likes it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome dear.
Keep writing.
I love the way of your writings
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Posted: 8 years ago
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U write like a true professional writer. Completely love ur way of writing. keep up the good work of making people wishes come true 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great one! A fresh concept!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bea1

This is actually for Tabitha. Her comment on "A Mother's Son" saying she wanted Bihaan's parents to be some rich business people types who love him to bits made me write this. Hope she likes it.


Thank you sooo much Bea!!! Its very nice...Beautifully written ..And the way you explained bihaan in his childhood is awesome..Dimples,chubby..Seriously in serial I never understood.If he is orphan how can he be in good dress and chubby when he met balvinder..If he is on roads then he cannot be that good..So I really hope in serial too he is rich..I wanted sarabhai vs sarabhai family to be his real family..Bihaan sarabhai😆😆😆...And Indravadhan sarabhai too looks like bihaan..Itna budget nahi hai cv's ke paas..Par sochne mein kya harz hai😉..
Bihaan was not taken care properly by vasu.He was not pampered.Balvinder loves him but unable to change vasu ..Though dhruv and balvinder are not in talking terms.Balvinder never showed major insult for dhruv.But here vasu as bihaan mentioned to thapki..He lived all his life in uttaran like his first cycle,mobile etc etc...Vasu never hugged bihaan shows how she used to look him like servant rather than son..When bauji,bihaan,dhruv drunk it is evident that bauji took both dhruv and bihaan on his shoulders to mela.Only after dhruv joining office he became indifferent to dhruv..But for bihaan it was from childhood..He never got the love he deserves and he got a wife Thapki who thinks of him least after everyone😭😭..So I want him to be pampereed by his rich family 😕😕.But cv's dont have that budget ..Thanks for Os you just took my dreams into paper.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i adored it Bea👏👏...it's lovely yaar ❤️
it's a fresh and unique one and thank you for this 🤗...really,really liked it😊
wish in the show Bihaan was truly the Blessed One ...he has suffered too much and even his wife for whom he went against the world isn't supporting him...he atleast deserve some happiness😳
keep writing dear and God bless you🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tabitha


.I wanted sarabhai vs sarabhai family to be his real family..Bihaan sarabhai😆😆😆...And Indravadhan sarabhai too looks like bihaan..Itna budget nahi hai cv's ke paas..Par sochne mein kya harz hai😉..



lolz..tabi...nice thought..bihaan indravadan sarabhai...i m just laughing...😆

i m just imagining sahil n roshesh his brothers..maya n monisha ke sath kya hogi chemistry...n with his father ..maza hi aa jaye..🤣

wait...let me laugh once again..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry Tabitha, I don't know anything about the Sarabhai's or anything about that particular serial. I haven't always been an avid watcher of Indian serials. Even now the only one I really care about enough to stick to through thick and thin is TPK and I am losing interest in that too. I just rue how much time I have devoted to this serial. I am not a writer and my teachers would clearly agree with this, but TPK inspired me to write. I have weaned myself off other serials I have watched in the past and I guess it's time to wean myself off this one too For some unknown reason I am finding it really hard though.

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