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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

actually I don't know How Long The Story or How many Chapters .. I don't think it will be more that 10 chapters ...

Prologue later in the day ..

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I will start sending PMs after the Prologue or Chapter 1 .. please notify me if you want one

Khushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

pls pm me n post soon 😊

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello everyone 🤗

PROLOGUE is up at page 1

Thanks for waiting ..

Khushi

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Mike13

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Posted: 9 years ago

prologue is awesome 👏

hope u will give both track n couple equal importance 😊

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mike13
prologue is awesome 👏

hope u will give both track n couple equal importance 😊

Thanks 🤗

I will try .. but I think there will be more SwaSan because ML track took longer time in my story more than FP .. sorry for that

But yeah there will be a whole chapters about RagLak and they will have their share of Scenes .. I will not sideline the couples like what happened in the show ..

I hope I will not disappoint you .. 😊

Khushi

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Mike13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Thanks 🤗

I will try .. but I think there will be more SwaSan because ML track took longer time in my story more than FP .. sorry for that
But yeah there will be a whole chapters about RagLak and they will have their share of Scenes .. I will not sideline the couples like what happened in the show ..

I hope I will not disappoint you .. 😊

Khushi

well tht will do 😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Khushi dear...

Interesting update...how is kissan there???im soo excited for chapter 1...update soon...

Will wait for your version of memory loss track...

Talia

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Khushi dear...
Interesting update...how is kissan there???im soo excited for chapter 1...update soon...

Will wait for your version of memory loss track...

Talia

Talia my dear 🤗

Yeah I love putting my readers on their toes 😆😆

How kissan is there ?? That is a twist 😉

😆😆😆

Wait for chapter one ..

I will update as soon as I can ..

Khushi

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Dear Khushi 🤗

A very interesting start to your story- it promises to have a lot of things going on it seems. The ML track in the show was the biggest disappointment so it's nice to see good writers try to set it right and give us something that we all wished we could have had. I will await to read more but I can tell that Sahil promises to be hateful (😡) and I hope this will show him getting his comeuppance at some point 😈. I will look forward to more! Please bear with me if I get delayed commenting. We are moving house in the coming week, so that plus work and EI are slightly errr challenging .

Lots of love,

Shru xoxo

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Dear Khushi 🤗
A very interesting start to your story- it promises to have a lot of things going on it seems. The ML track in the show was the biggest disappointment so it's nice to see good writers try to set it right and give us something that we all wished we could have had. I will await to read more but I can tell that Sahil promises to be hateful (😡) and I hope this will show him getting his comeuppance at some point 😈. I will look forward to more! Please bear with me if I get delayed commenting. We are moving house in the coming week, so that plus work and EI are slightly errr challenging .

Lots of love,
Shru xoxo

My dear shru 🤗

Yayy you found my story interesting .. thanks 🤗

I have alot of plans and details since I am writing about 2 tracks ..

ML was indeed a disappointment .. this is my take and the way I wanted it to be ..

Sahil was irritating person .. here he will have his sets of games but my Sanskar will be there ..

Don't take it hard on yourself darling .. take your time in reading and commenting I will wait ..

I will try not to disappoint you ..

I will update as soon as I can ..

Khushi