TwiNj OS - Amusement park

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Posted: 9 years ago
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FOR ADITI [adi_FMT_ct]
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There only comes one day when the whole Sarna family can spend time together which is a Sunday.

With the men working all day on the weekdays and the women as usual busy with the household work,the whole Sarna and Taneja family hardly get time to spend with each other.

Not only did the Sarna family have any time for each other but TwiNj too.

After the birth of Mia,Twinkle and Kunj had hardly gotten any time to spend with each other since their cute little daughter took most of their time and attention.

Mia was now 3 years old,pampered and spoilt to no end with the beauty of her mother and the brains of her father.

She wasn't the only child but the only girl child which was one of the reasons of her being the most pampered child as compared to Ishaan.

But Ishaan didn't mind at all.After all he had a company,someone younger than him whom he could rule and control over.

It was almost everyday when Ishaan and Mia fought and it was amusing for the family members to watch how Mia had the strength to hit Ishaan with her tiny hands and her power of blackmailing Ishaan to the extent of Him apologising in the end to the little munchkin.

Since the last whole month had been super hectic with days where Kunj preferred sleeping in the office due to the excessive workload,Twinkle had begun to get cranky.

She was sick and tired of staying at home and Kunj knew that.

It was one of those Sunday's when the whole Sarna family sat in the garden having their breakfast.

"So how's work going?",asked Twinkle trying to make a conversation

"Pure hafte mein Ek hi din milta hai jab mujhe kaam ke baare mein sochna nahi padta lekin tu aaj bhi woh sawaal puchke mera din kharab Kar rahi hai.Itni nafrat karti hai mujhse?",asked Kunj

"Oh god,I just asked you a simple question, ek conversation start karne ke liye lekin Tum na kuch zyada hi drama queen bangaye ho"

"Drama Queen? Seriously Twinkle? Mein tujhe kahan se 'queen' dikhta Hun?"

All this while the whole Sarna family kept looking from left to right trying to keep up with Twinkle and Kunj's argument.

"You know what? I hate you,tum kitne mean ho"

Before Kunj could reply to her,

"Basss",screamed a small and a soft voice

Everyone turned to look at Mia covering her ears with her tiny hands,her hands squeezing her cute little chubby face

"Mumma,Papa aap dono please ladna band Karo",requested little Mia

"Okay baby,I'm sorry",said Twinkle while glaring at Kunj

"I'm sorry too my little princess",said Kunj glaring right back at Twinkle

"Hey Bhagwan,yeh dono kitne bade hogaye hai Phir bhi inka bachpana nahi Gaya...inse samjhdar toh inki Beti hai",chuckled Usha

Twinkle showed her tongue to Kunj while he threw a piece of cereal at her

Seeing her parents fight like small babies,Mia slapped her tiny hand on her head shaking her head.

All the family members giggled seeing Mia's reaction.

"Sasriyakalji",greeted Leela as she walked towards where the Sarna family was sitting

"Sasriyakal Leelaji",aaiye na nashta kijiye,said Bebe

"Ji",said Leela as she kissed Mia's cheek and took a seat beside her

"Toh aaj ka Kya plan hai Bhai?",Asked Leela pouring a glass of juice for herself

"Abhi kuch soch nahi hai",replied Manohar

"Kuch karte hai na",said Nikki

"Haan bohot time hogaya koi family picnic pe Gaye",replied Anand

"Haanji pata nahi hum kitne waqt se iss tarah good for nothing ki tarah Bethe hue hai",said Cherry

"Haan mein bhi bohot bore ho rahi Hun",said Twinkle sadly as she looked at Kunj who was sitting right across her

Kunj could see anything in this world but see his Twinkle sad

"Toh chalo kuch karte hai",suggested Kunj

"Dekha aapne Bebe Abb tak Sab log keh rahe the tab Kunj ne kuch nahi kaha lekin jaise hi Twinkle ne kahan ki woh bore ho rahi hai,Tab phat se Kunj ne Javab hai",said Usha

Twinkle blushed as Kunj bowed his head in embarrassment while the other family members laughed

"Accha yeh Sab Chodho lekin jaana kahan hai?",asked Manohar

"Kyun na Hum uss Naye Amusement park mein chale? Abhi naya naya shuru hua hai",suggested Kunj

Ishaan and Mia's faces lit up as soon as they heard "Amusement park"

"Lekin putar Hum Buddhe wahan Kya karenge?",asked Bebe

"Oho Bebe wahan par har tarah ki rides hai,aap logo wahan ke mini train ya koi aur ride pe Beth jaana"

"Haan putar yeh bada hi changa idea diya hai tune"

After discussing for a little while Everybody decided to leave for the Amusement park later in the day

Manohar had especially booked a mini bus so that the whole Sarna family and Taneja family could go together

Getting ready and packing enough food for the journey ahead,everyone waited outside till the mini bus arrived

Taking the last seat all by herself,Bubbly lied down on the seat marking her territory

The first few seats were taken by the oldies.

While Usha and Manohar sat together,Leela and Bebe sat together chatting their time away.

A few seats away from them sat Nikki and Anand,behind them sat Cherry secretly sipping his desi Daru

Across them sat Raman and Pinni where Raman kept eating the snack he had got for himself while Pinni rolled her eyes now and then looking at her hubby

On the third last seat sat Mia and Ishaan who were busy in their intense conversation which only they understood.

On the second last seat sat Twinkle and Kunj with Twinkle taking the balcony seat and Kunj next to her

The bus started in no time and soon everybody were busy among themselves.

"Thank you Kunj",said Twinkle as she placed her head on Kunj's shoulder

"Thank you kisliye?"

"Yeh Amusement park ka plan banane ke liye,I'm so excited",said Twinkle

Kunj smiled looking at Twinkle express her happiness to him

As she continued talking,Twinkle saw Kunj staring at her

"Kya?"

"Kya Kya?"

"Why are you looking at me?"

"Just,I miss you"

"I miss you too,pata hai Kunj,mujhe Toh yeh bhi yaad nahi when was the last time we had spend time together",said Twinkle sadly

"I know but don't worry,aaj ka pura din hum saath mein bitainge"

"Promise?",asked Twinkle like a baby

"Promise",chuckled Kunj

Looking here and there and seeing everyone busy in themselves,Kunj leaned in to capture Twinkle's lips who happily responded to his kiss

Once they were out of breath,Kunj pulled away and entwined his fingers with Twinkle's while Twinkle placed her head on his shoulder again.

At the amusement park

As soon as the Sarna family reached the park,they divided themselves into groups of three with the youngsters(Kunj,Twinkle,Anand,Nikki,Cherry,Bubbly) being one group,the oldies (Manohar,Usha,Bebe,Leela) being in the second group and the third one being (Raman,Pinni,Mia and Ishaan)

Raman and Pinni had decided to take the kids on all the rides since they never wanted to sit on any rides themselves.

Promising to meet each other after an hour,the 3 groups split into three different directions.

The youngsters started off with riding on all the roller coaster rides.

With Cherry crying half through the roller coaster,Anand had enough memories he had captured in his phone

During all the rides,Twinkle sat with Kunj,holding his hand with her eyes tightly shut while Kunj screamed his lungs out,laughing whole heartedly

On the other side,Raman and Pinni made Mia and Ishaan ride all the water and cartoon rides which both the kids enjoyed a lot.

The elders enjoyed looking at their Kids have fun

"Mia putar Dekh Tere papa aur mumma wahan upar hai",said Bebe to Mia as she pointed towards Twinj who were at the highest peak on the roller coaster

Mia giggled and jumped on Bebe's lap seeing her parents do a ride which was the most daring thing ever for her

She even waved at them but didn't get noticed since the ride had started again

Once Twinkle and Kunj were out,Twinkle quickly ran to Mia and hugged her tight

"Did you see that baby?"

"Yes Mumma,my parents are the strongest",said Mia with a big smile on her face

The other family members chuckled listening to Mia praise her parents

The next hours were spent with the whole family sitting together for lunch,Twinkle and Kunj accompanying Mia in a kid's ride and Pinni being forced onto a roller coaster was the most hilarious and also the highlight of the day

"Chalo Kunj Chale? Thodi der mein andhera hone wala hai,ghar bhi toh pochna hai",said Manohar after they covered the last portion of the park

"Lekin chachaji itni jaldi Kyun?",asked Cherry

"Putar tune yahan ke saare rides toh kar liye hai,ab Kya yahan rukh kar workers ki help karni hai park saaf karne mein?",asked Bebe sweetly

The whole family laughed as Cherry made a face at Bebe

Anand slapped Cherry's head and went forward to the bus while the others followed

In the bus

Due to running everywhere all day,Mia and Ishaan were exhausted enough so they had slept as soon as they sat in the bus.

This time Mia slept on Kunj's lap while Ishaan and Bubbly slept on the last seat.

"This was one of the best days of my life",whispered Twinkle careful enough to not wake Mia up

"Mine too",replied Kunj smiled

"You know Twinkle sometimes I really thank God for giving me you and Mia,my little family,I don't know what I would have done without the both of you",said Kunj getting emotional

"Shhh,we are so lucky to have you too.Let's not think about what would have happened if we weren't together but instead cherish this"

Kunj smiled and opened one of his arm so that Twinkle could come in his embrace.

Twinkle smiled as she closed her eyes,keeping her sleepy head on Kunj's chest.

"Wake me up when we are home",said Twinkle sleepily

"Yes my love",said Kunj pecking her hair

One glance at his beautiful wife,another at his adorable daughter,thanking God for their little world,Kunj placed his head on top of Twinkle's with a content smile on his face as he closed his eyes.

---THE END---

Hope you liked this Adi and I hope I was able to live upto your expectations🤗
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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neverlandspirit thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was ubber cute...
Love the family bonding and especially loved the sneaky TwiNj kiss.
Everything here was such a bliss to read

Great job K
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely each n everything was perfectly described loved it do update our os's soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hayee K. .
I am flattened totally.
You ask to live up in my expectation;It's beyond of all things.
MESMERISING..
Sooo Lovely.😳
Thanks K,🤗
From which part I particularly praise.
It's Cutest Cute as a whole.
And Mia is more mature than Twinj;it's quite obvious.😆
Love Ishan-Mia' s Bro-Sis Bonding.
Amusement Park Idea is simply best.
Cherry is best as usual in his antics.
And the last part is just mindblowong.
In One Side of Kunj,Twinkle and in another side Mia.
PICTURE PERFECT.😊
& This is called Happy Ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
really sweet...
i couldn't stop smiling reading this
waiting for the other OS's
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
So this was a long one...but it was amazing Kiara...
That family spending time and twinj kiss in middle was so cute
u r such a fabulous writer...their daughter Mia was such nicely described by u...if really they had a daughter on the show her character sketch would have been the same as described by u..
Role of every person was so justifying ...
Love u loads,
Jhanvi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Kiara...
It was soo cute..
I couldn't stop smiling even for a second...it was that sweet
Their kiss... ❤️ ❤️
And the ending... ...Twinkle and mia in his arms.. ❤️...that was perfect

Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWWW
a big wala AWWW
that ws so cute i mena so so so cute...
Kunj agreeing to do somethng seeing twinkle sad...
I wish i get a hubby as cute nd sweet as him...
Hehehehe psycho me
But agent K this ws so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
hey amazing update...loved it...what's next ur writing???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agent k this was so awesome.
Starting from twinj little fight nd mias description😊
Twinj scene in the best to their picnice.
Back to bus😳👏
The last scene kunj with mia sleeping on kunj's lap nd twinkle kunj was picture perfect
Continue writing such cutiepie stories🤗

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