Akdha OS~The extinguished lamp~ re-posted&note on pg 05

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When a lamp lighting, it erase the darkness,brightening everything.what if the same lighting lamp suddenly extinguished?just DARKNESS.
Intertwineding their fingers tightly they walked along the seashore.She was leaned over His strong arm.His vision showed the path to her as Her eyes were closed with a contenet smile on those petals.she had to open her eyes when a cold wave touched her legs drenching her skirt.expressing her pleasure with a cute giggle she looked up at HIM.but that Beautiful smile on her lips vanished suddenly.Her eyes didn't meet with him.She wasn't holding his arm as she was.Where is He?He wasn't there.She looked every where,from one end to the other, in every nook and cranny,every bit!but He is nowhere to see.she was sweating, breathing heavily.those deo eyes slowly met with their footprints.the blead in her heart streamed down from her eyes as tears.She gazed at the last print of their foots through the blured vision as HIS footprints disappearing into the sea leaving aside her's indicating that HE is gone!HE IS GONE LEAVING HER just like those footprints. "Jalal!!!!!"She bawled.Collapsed there unable to bear the sorrow. wailed diging her fingers into sands.the wind started to blow hard to show the grieved.the sky began to show it's condolences by raining heavily.the hard water drops slowly drenched her completely.those drops made their way to her precious pearls for low down the anguish of them as that's unbearable even to the earth wich is going to wet thoroughly by them.
Few drops of water land on her face taking her to the conscious world.Her eyes opened.they felt as very heavy.for a moment her heart felt a relax as she thought those everything is just a nightmare.but that peace didn't long live one.her roaming eyes fell on HIS unmoving body which is all ready for the funeral coustoms.the whole incident began to flash in her mind. HIS sudden heart attack,the comfrimation about HIS death, the Unconsciousness of her.everything is clear now.then that's not any nightmare! Then?Then it's mean that HE..HE lef..t! "NOOO!!! NOO!!NO!NO!NO!My jalal can't leave me"She cried running to HIS body.she called him..plead asking to wake up.. requested to look toward her.. caressed his hair..cuppped his cheeks..kissed all over the face but he's soo silent!She blubbered talking to his lifeless body resting her forehead on his.the man who is unable to see a single tear drop in her eyes,today has been soo silent infront of her laments! The day i dead, How will you tolerate that suffer! It's unbearable!Unable to express from words.Unable to soothe by filling buckets of tears.Unable to lighten by wailing.still she didn't accept it, even though she felt his last breath.The LAST BREATH.the LAST moment he breathed.she'll not feel it again.no matter how much she waited,but He'll not breath again.no matter how much she tried to listen his heart beat,the heart where she is live,has stopped it's beating.she's not ready to accept it still but that's the reality.HE IS NO MORE.the man whom she love her whole life, has left her alone.FOREVER.GOD! then why she's still breathing?for what?For whom? "God!Why did you kept me back? You have taken my life away from me..!Why!why god why"she broke down infront of HIS motionless body,crying hard.how much she wished that these all must be just a nightmare.but the destiny never changed. The fear of when, who will be there for you, with you! They were born in name of the purest bond in the world which called as the LOVE.They lived sharing the purest relation of the world,called as HUSBAND and WIFE. Though they were born at different places their destiny was one.Though they weren't know eachother before they meet,they lived in eachother's hearts as a secret which was known by no one,even themselves.because they are soulmates.a pair of intertwined soul.HE is her otherhalf as SHE is HIS.
Life is like a roller coaster.there are soo many ups and downs, happinesses-displeasures, successes-unfulfillments.HE is the pillar of support,the pillar of strength of Her life from the day she came in to HIS arms.Its HIS shoulder She needed to cry in.Its HIS touch which is able to soothe her.Nonetheless,today his arms didn't wrap around her when she wailling hugging him.he didn't take her to his embrance for mollify her with his soothing touch,with his sweeten words. Then how'll she ease this pain? Happily they spent almost forty years of a marriage life TOGETHER.they were TOGETHER every happy and tuogh moments of their life.without leaving each other.they beautifuly painted their own world TOGETHER gaving birth to two new lifeblood.TOGETHER they make their life Beautiful with full of love and happiness.they witnessed their kids starting their own life with a own family.that too TOGETHER.but today? the same sun rised, the same moon will Lighten the night but SHE is alone without it's soul. She sees, their kids are there, their grandchildren are there,HIS friends are there,HER friends are there,HIS relatives are there,HER relatives are there but HIM?HE is in a deep sleep leaving her alone in the world forever.it is the deepest sleep that no one can wake up again! It's called as the 'death'. What if the whole world is there when HER world has gone leaving her?
Everyone whoever you see, will ask about me from you
Everything you heared, will hurt your heart
Everything you see, will see as me
the paining eyes have not tears to shead anymore.She wished to die by Exploding the heart.the heartaching laments of her echoing the whole place making other's hearts dull by the pain. "What will i do now god!!!what will i do!How will i live without my LIFE god!!!My LIFE left me!!!HE left me god!!HE left me!!Stop my breath too!!!I want to go to him!!!" Seening the face of our son, my face will flashed in your heart seeing the copy of those orbs ,the copy of those eyebrows,the copy of that smile she couldn't bear it more.SHE want to see him alive.SHE want to wake up next to him in the morning, to break the tight grip around her belly as every morning,to feel HIS touch and warmth,to hide in HIS chest.but SHE will not get those days again!she could just cry hugging HIS miniature. Everyone will go, after burned the corpse With the son and daughter, you will be alone in the world
The silence has been spread all over the place with a gloominess As the lightness has been vanished reflecting their hearts.
With the blowing wind, you'll hear my voice HIS voice, that husky voice which is able to skip a beat of her heart ringing in everywhere as a song.the thought of that henceforward she has to inhale the air where HE ISN'T doing, wounded the broken herat even more. You will feel as I am near, with youHer eyes cuaght his socks and shoes which are laying on the floor uneatly.the memorise of those days that she used to get angry and scold him,His sweet acts to make her cool down with some romance,flashed in front of her eyes making them blured over and over again with hot tears.the towel he used hanging on the door of bathroom, just the way he put it last day.still it just like a nightmare.till a few hours he was with her,alive but what happened suddenly? Is this the life? slowly laying down on his side of the bed she start to sob hardly.still she could smell HIS fragance in his pillow.its still fresh,just like HE IS near her. Me, who spent a sinless life Haven't done anything to deserve the Hell He has a good heart and she's the owner of it's.that's why he donated his eyes, which he saw the world thill the last moment as his last will. Though I am not under this roof as before Will protect you forever from a good worldthose tired eyes of his with that weak smile expressing his deep love for her also exclaimed a unspoken promise.those eyes closed forever, silently assuring her as he'll never leave her! May be he is not alive as physically but JALAL is live in JODHA forever just like JODHA live in JALAL.HE is breathing or not, JALAL is the EVERLASTING LOVE of JODHA'S LIFE
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P


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Awww.. it's emotional one darlo..
So heart touching...
😭 I know this OS for whom.. my deep condolences for his family too..
You did great for sharing your pain with us..
Keep strong darling.. we all always had this phase in our life... so.. be strong ❤️

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Hey Savi di
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Whr is the os ...
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Originally posted by: erning_w

Awww.. it's emotional one darlo..

So heart touching...
😭I know this OS for whom.. my deep condolences for his family too..
You did great for sharing your pain with us..
Keep strong darling.. we all always had this phase in our life... so.. be strong❤️

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