THINGS FALL APART-A SUKOR FAN FICTION prologue page 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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another fan fiction of sukor,
i am updating the teaser over here and this story is in alternate universe and by no means is related to the udaan tv series.
hope everyone likes it.

TEASER:-

31st JULY 2016

Chakor took out the keys and entered her house.today it was a hectic day for her,she was working as a coach in one of the most famous training institute WDC.
Being a 24 year old coach,she had a tough time dealing with the students,people were astonished that why is she working as a coach when she could herself participate in national marathon championship,but no one knew her secret,a dark secret.
she entered her house and saw white lillies all around her,the whole house was lit up with scented candles,suddenly she heard a song.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hame tumse pyaar kitna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yeh hum nahi jaante</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">magar jee nahi sakte tumhare bina</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hame tumse pyaar kitna</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yeh hum nahi jaante</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">magar jee nahi sakte tumhaare bina</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">tears welled up in her eyes and sweat formed on her forehead,her fear was turning into reality,she shouted and fainted but before she could fall,someone caught hold of her,her husband,her companion,SURAJ RAJVANSHI</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">"biwi,biwi,are you okay,chakor,are you alright?",that was the last words she heard before fainting out but one thing she was sure that now nothing would happen to her beacause she was in her saviour's arms.</font>



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">so guya,this is the teaser of my story,do you like it???</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">if yes,then hit the like button and post your comments.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">till then,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love you all</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">byeee...</font>

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Posted: 9 years ago
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new sukor story wav am so excited. interesting teaser. so sukor are already married amazing. are their love marriage? how they married? why chakor is so tensed? what troubling her? so much question. its gonna very much hard for me to wait for update. waiting for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice! Seems like Chakor is sick? Plz update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!!! loved the teaser . pl update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow ...its so awesome ...plz do it do it right now
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Wow thrilling teaser..waitting for story love it👍🏼
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prologue
CHAKOR'S POV
I looked at the mandap, it was beautiful but soon a fear engulfed me. I was scared of losing all these happiness in my life. My right arm was clutching my lehnga tightly. Sweat beads formed on my face.i was really scared and nervous.Then I saw him,my bride groom. He smiled at me assuring that he is with me,always. He forwarded his right arm towards me. I looked at him and then at his hands and then I gave my right arm on his hand. His grip was tight but firm. He helped me reaching the mandap as my bridal dress was heavy. The pandit started chanting the mantras and we both were listening what the pandit was saying . The pandit then asked my to be better half to fill my maang with vermilion. He did so,then he asked him to put mangalsutra around my neck.
After chanting few more mantras, the pundit asked us to stand as it was time for varmaala.
After the varmaala,it was time for the pheras. The seven vows which bounds a girl and a boy into a inseparable bond which is very pure and sane. In the first 4 pheras, the bride groom moves ahead of the bride and in other 3,the bride.
After the pheras,the pandit declared us as a married couple. From today onwards, I am no more Chakor Bhuvan Lal, I am now Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi. But my fear is still there. I am really scared but I heard a voice.
"Pundit Ji,I want to take one more vow", someone said and I knew that person. My husband,Suraj Rajvanshi.
He said those words and then he took hold of my mind and started taking round of the sacred fire of the havan kund.
"I vow that all my life,even after my life,I will never leave my wife's side. I will always protect her from all evil things. All her problems will be mine and all my happiness will be hers", said Suraj completing the round and tears formed in my eyes . Before my tear could fall,he caught it and said," Chakor, I can't promise you that I will always keep you happy or you will never cry but I promise that whenever you will cry,I will be the first person to wipe your tears. I will be there to hold you in your bad times. I can't promise you that I will bring stars for you but yes, I promise that I will give my whole life's happiness to you".
His words assured me that he is there for me. Always,every time in my life. He is my saviour,my knight in shining armour.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You truly are a writing ⭐️👏
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Superb! SuKor had had a love marriage? So sweet!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww!!! that was so beautiful!!!😳
waiting for more

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