ShivIka FF-Th love story that died at proposal(Updated on pg2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys,with all the motion I got from my first OS,Just like that,I present you guys with my second story.Hope you guys will enjoy this one as well.
N.B:M a Shiv luver so almost all my stories will be from his point of view dow I'll try to balance it with Anika's point of view as well as the story progresses.
Happy reading.

"Kisi rooz barish jo aye samajhlena bondho me main hoon,
Shubha dhup tumku sataye samajhlena kirnome main hoon"

The lyrics of the song that was being played on the radio echoed through his mind.
Shivaay's car came to a sudden halt when he remembered her how she,His Anika, used to sing the exact same lines to him.Closing his eyes and leaning on his seat,he tried to remember all the occasion when she would sing the mentioned lines.His grip on the steering tightening with each passing memory of events.Shivaay got out of his car when he no longer could take the flooding memories.

As soon as he got out of his car,he started getting wet due to the rain.He walked a little distance.Closing his eyes and lifting face facing the sky and spreading his arms,he started feeling the rain drops that was falling on his face as if trying to feel her.As much as he hated rain,he felt a strange calmness and peace taking over his senses.Shivaay wished to live in the moment,occasionally trying to hold the raindrops on his palm.
A sudden loud sound broke his little heaven.Shivaay looked to the direction of the sound only to find a car hanking at him.Unconsciously,he looked at his hand only to see the raindrops he so desperately tried to hold onto slipping through the gaps of his fingers.A lone tear skipped from his right eye,self pitying at his fate.


Om,Rudra and Dadi were sitting in the living room when they noticed a wet Shivaay passing by them without acknowledging their presence.
"Bhaiya"Rudra called out to Shivaay only to get silence as a reply.
Om and Dadi's eyes threatening to slip the tear drops they so wanted to hide all these days.

Shivaay went into his room and locked himself in and leaned against the hard door.
Changing his wet clothes he sat on the floor leaning on the bed with his hand pressed on his face as if trying to stop his tears from kissing his handsome face.After what felt like ages,he hard a soft knock on his door.Rubbing his face to erase any trance of tears,he opened the doo to find the biggest shock of his life,


"I never wanted to leave,but you made me go" echoed from the other side of the door.



P.s-l shall edit it a bit the next time I use PC till then ignore the typos/grammatical mistakes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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whoah.. thts scary...
intriguing it is..
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Thats scary n interesting
Continue soon
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ITS BRILLIANT DEAR
Pls update FAST and PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, very interesting!
Continue soon!

Ps. Plz don't kill Anikaaa

Jk, it's your story, I was just saying 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Wow, very interesting!

Continue soon!

Ps. Plz don't kill Anikaaa

Jk, it's your story, I was just saying 😆


seems like u missed sth😉😉bt we shall see😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was scary prologue 😭
what happened to anika? 💔
hope she is not dead?
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok guys here is the second chap.I didn;t really wanted to scare you guys😆😆but don't worry no witch,snakes will be in my stories🤣
Anyways,this part is more from OmRuDa's point of view with lil from Shiv's as well.Hope i don't disappoint you guys.
Ignore typos/grammatical mistakes/tense of the narration😳😳

Happy reading😛😛

Chap-2

She Never Knew

Dadi,Om,Rudra were sitting in the huge hall of the Oberoi Mansion.Each of them emerged deep into their own thoughts having a known look plastered over their face.Each of them knew what the other two were thinking.Om,the ever thoughtful one,cursing himself for not being able to help his brother pull out from his past that was still haunting him.Rudra,the otherwise happy-go-lucky guy,hadn't even smiled in months now and Dadi,the eldest of the house,self pitying herself and having a silent quarreling with the God,for snatching the only light of her Billu's life.Her Billu never got the love he deserved from his parents,his uncle-aunt.All this while he was busy sharing his love to his siblings and his Dadi and just when she thought he would be getting the much deserved love,fate had to play a cruel joke and turned his world upside down.Om,Rudra and dadi all remembered a verse they read long back,

"The marks humans leave are too often scars"

Finally,they understood how true were these words.

The trio were brought back to their harsh reality by a loud screaming.They didn' need to hear the voice for second time for they very well know,those scream belonged to whom.They made a mad dash towards Shivaay's room only to find a broken Shivaay repeating the samething again and again"I never wanted you to leave either.I never intended this to happen,ever.I..."His voice was becoming inaudible with the formation of lump in his throat.

Rudra froze seeing his Superman all defeated,crying on his knees,begging to be forgiven for what had happened trying desperately to undo his one mistake that had happened unknowingly by him.

A single tear escaped Om's eyes seeing the great Wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi,not just cracked but all broken into so many little pieces that even his artistic nature couldn't mould it back into its original shape.

Tears oozing from Dadi's eyes seeing her Billu's otherwise Artic blue eyes,red.Why her Billu?Why fate had to be so cruel to him?What had he done to deserve this?Thousands of similar thoughts surfacing her mind.

All of their chain of thoughts again broken when Shivaay called out to Om,"Om? I never wanted any of this to happen,you believe me,right?" Om immediately rushed to his elder brother and crushed him to a tight hug dropping to his level.Rudra and dadi soon followed.All of them then took Shivaay back to his room and made him lay on his bed.Putting the blanket on him,Dadi brushed his sweaty hair with her hand and later placed a kiss on his forehade while Om and Rudra sat beside him.

"Billu,it wasn't your fault my dear.Stop blaming yourself!It was destined to happen my boy.Even if you knew what would follow when you would propose her,you possibly couldn't had stop it from occurring.It was not your fault that she never knew how much you loved her or should I say you still love her "

"Yes,bhaiya!Enough of crying over the past,get over it.I want my Superman back"said Rudra with a puppy face.

If only they understood,it was not easy for him to forget and get over someone who meant the world to him,when her memories were his only solace and worse to still live on everyday with the guilt that he was the reason she felt him!Get over it?When all he wanted to have her back in his life by any means.If only...

Om who was observing Shivaay, cupped Shivaay's hands on his and give a slight nod conveying he understood.With this he took Rudra and dadi out of Shivaay's room leaving a pondering Shivaay behind who was dwelling on her memories.

"Dadi was right,she never knew.She never knew how much I loved her.She never knew how much I crave for warmth,she never knew how desperately I want her back.She never knew..."repeated a drowsy Shivaay before drifting to sleep,waiting for yet another set of nightmares to follow.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update!
Poor shivaay!
But what happened to anika??
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
What happen to Annika
Looking forward to know how story will unfold

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