AKDHA SS: SOMEONE LIKE YOU

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Hi Friends 😊

How are you all??
Hope you all are doing great (aamin) 😃

Today I'm again disturbing you with a new story😉
Its based on the distanced love story

I hope like previous... You all too like my this story
Thank you🤗
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INDEX



Prologue : page 1
Character Sketch - will post soon
Chapter - 1: page 1
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PROLOGUE

The whole hall is decorate with white tulip flowers and white curtains. In the middle of the hall one huge chandelier is hanged. There are many small light bulbs at every corner of the hall.
All guest are already arrived and to receive and welcome them all family members are present in the hall.
All are enjoying welcome drink with soothing music played by one of the famous music band of the city but beside this all are waiting for the couple to arrive as they all are gather here to attend their engagement ceremony but seems that they have to wait more as there is no sign of them.
After 15 minutes all heard a sound of foot steps are coming from a stairs and everyone look at the direction and here comes bridegroom decked in white shervani looking not less than a Greek God.
All welcome him with big round of applause and loud cheer. The girls present there not control their selves to drooling over him.
He come and stand at the center of the hall, his all friend come and gather around him and start to tease him. Now all are waiting for bride to come.

It has been hour since all guest and bridegroom arrived but there is no sign of bride...so the guests are start to gossiping and family members of both bride as well as bridegroom start to worried and try to contact her on her mobile phone but there is no response of phone calls. After a while bridegroom's mobile ring and he show the caller ID which make his lips curve into sweet smile and he immediately answer the call "hello Jo where are you?" . But after listening the caller's word he dropped the mobile from his hand due to shock.
Seeing his state all are got panicked and starts to asked him "what's happened Jalal?"...
Gathering all his courage he answered " Jodha met with accident and she is hospitalized in city hospital. "

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After this accident will jodha survive?
Will there lovestory has happy end?



Edited by Akdhalover6898 - 9 years ago
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C H A R A C T E R S K E T C H

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CHAPTER-1



Evening 5pm
I was in my office doing a last minutes work before leaving from there and suddenly my mobile phone buzzed which is kept beside my laptop on my desk distracting me from my work. I picked the phone from the table and show the ID of caller and my face become brighter with a smile and I answered the call "hey buddy what's up? after long time?" I said in one go without giving time to caller to say anything. After I complete the same cheerful voice come from the other side "hey jalal, I'm good yaar...and ya its been long time when we last talk" said Abdul.
"hmm so what's going on" I asked him.
"nothing dude just hectic work on office, meetings and foreign trip's nothing more... BTW what about you?" he answered me.
"same as you bro...the boring life style no any fun. I really miss our college days" I answered him.
"yeh bro I too miss our college days...and that's why I called you" said Abdul.
"I don't get you bro" I answered him in confusing tone.
"Actually on this Sunday its friendship day na so I decided that we four will get together on my place...what say?" said Abdul.
"oh that's great idea dude...I love to be part of it." I answered.
"so done we are gather in my place on Sunday" said Abdul.
After talking for good time we hanged up. And I will resume my work.
While coming back to home I shared my plan with mom and dad and they are very happy to know that because now a days I'm to engrossed in my work that almost forgot to smile...yeah its weird but its true... I'm so engrossed in my work that sometimes skip my meals.
But today after talking with my best buddy that smile come back on my face.
I booked my air ticket on the next day and my flight is of Saturday night.
I lived in Bangalore where as Abdul lived in Mumbai, he is businessman like me or I can say all 4 of us are running our own business in different city of India. Adham and sharifuddin are my other 2 friends and both are living in Punjab and Simla respectively.
****

Whole weekend passed in meetings and hectic works and finally Saturday arrives. After finishing my work at office I came to my home. There my mom already packed my stuffs in beg, and I feel so relief. At 9'o clock I reached to the airport as my flight is of 11pm.
I finished all the procedure at airport and waiting for the flight to arrive. And I feel so bored and
Finally the plan arrived after a waiting for so long...yeah time seems so long first time to me, may be its due to excitement to meet my buddies after 4 long years.
Before plane take off I messaged to Abdul about my flight so he can pick me up from airport.
***
Its almost morning when I heard the announcement that the plan is soon land and I feel the same excitement in me.
Finally the plan landed and I come out from the flight and the moment my foot touched the mother earth I felt so much emotions in me.
I collect my luggage and come out from the airport and I start to search for Abdul...and I saw Abdul standing there and searching for someone and I knew its defiantly me, he is changed lot in these 4 years means he become healthy than before. I go and stand in front of him and said "buddy...!" and he saw me and tightly embraced me in his warm and friendly hug. but before we parted we heard a loud voice coming from our behind "him bhi yaha hair (we are here too)...!" and we looked back and its a voice of Surif and Adham, and we do a group hug and when we parted I can show the same smile and emotions on there face to as it is on my face...The smile of satisfaction and happiness.
We headed towards parking area where Abdul parked his car, after reaching there we settle down in car and headed towards Abdul's home.
On our way we saw half of Mumbai and chat on its development and some political topics. After half an hour of drive we reached to the Abdul's pant house, there is no any his family member present because he sent all to some trip so that we can enjoy and feel comfortable there. We directly went to Abdul's room for freshen up.
***
After getting freshen we go down to the hall and comfort our self on big couches...soon the breakfast with cup of coffee for all come there by maids and without wasting time we start to eat it as we all are hungry.
After finishing our breakfast we are chatting on our business and share market but suddenly my phone rang and I see the caller I'd and it's my mom...I hit my head for forgetting to call my mom when I reached here as she was said me to call her when I will reached. I immediately picked the call making excuse from my friends and I answered the call "hello mom"
"jalal...how careless you are why don't you call me..." said hamida.
before she continue her lecture I cut her in between and said "sorry mom I'm just about to call you but your call come." I lied to my mom to decrease her tension but our mom is such a genius she always caught our lies.
"I know you beta..you become so engrossed in talking with your buddies that you forgot to call me, am I right?" said hamida.
"yeah mom...but I said sorry na." I answered her.
"its OK dear...now you enjoyed with your friends I will call you later...bye."
"bye mom" and we hanged up.
After talking with mom I will resume my talk with my friends and we don't know when we slept that couches in same position we were sit.
*******************
We wake up when Adham make us awake like he used to when we are in hostel.
After having our evening tea we decide to explore Mumbai, so we dressed up and set in Abdul's car.
The Mumbai is such a nice place we first go to the juhu beach there we saw a sunset and after that we go to some famous places.
It almost past 8pm so we decided to have our dinner and that to in dhaba, not in any five star hotel.
After finishing our meal we went to some night club to cheer the day and for lighten our mood.
After reaching there we set at bar counter and order our drink...its great feeling to drink with your friends because no one can restrict you to drink more.
We can drink but in limit and dance on a bit which DJ played...we enjoyed lot.
It was 11pm we decided to leave the club and back to home...
but when we set on car Abdul said that its amazing to go at beach at night time so we will go back to there.
I thought there were no one except us but there were some couples, some groups of collage students are there and I become surprised.
We sit on a stone which are at seashore... the water is continuously come and go from our feet...the cool bridge is blowing and it feel so chilling there.
We are recalling our trips of college days when we went to Goa. Suddenly Abdul asked as a question which make all of us surprised.
Abdul "guy what all of you decided for future?".
and showing our confused face he said " see guys I know we all are succeed in our life as we achieved our goals but what after that. "
Adham "see guys I will decided to explore my business"
Sarif "me too same"
and I answer the same.
Abdul "no guys i'm asking you all about marriage...if any one dated someone or you all are still bachelor like me."
"yes" we trio answer him in unison. and then we laughed on yourself that we are businessman but not able to make a single girl fall for us.
"Abdul yaar you too started to torture me for marriage like my mom" said sarif.
"see guys its a common thing and now we are mature enough...
now or after sometimes, we have to do marriage as we can't spent our life alone we need someone beside when we become old." said Abdul.
"you have a point dude but for that we need "someone like us"...who can understand ourselves and adjust with our family and the girl should be of our choice not like 19th century whom our parents decided we have to marry with that girl" said Adham.
"I'm agree with you adham" I said.
"why don't you guys try metrimonial site for founding your match" suggested Abdul "but for that you have make an account on the site" he added.
"are you having an account on these type of site?" asked Sharif to Abdul, and we all are look at Abdul with so curiosity for answer.
"No bro, not yet"Abdul answered so casually.
" not yet means, are planning to make account on it?" I asked him.
"yeah man...and that's why I take out this topic" answered Abdul.
" is it safe?" asked Sharif.
"yup bro they will keep your data as much as confidential" answered Abdul.
"so its good...we all should have to try" said adham.
"OK...we will" we all agree to make an account on the site and inform each other when we will get our match.
After this conversation we decided to leave the place as we three have morning flight to back home.

MORNING AT AIRPORT
we arrived at airport and feeling weird as now its time to get apart.
we group hug tightly for the last time before enter inside the airport and at the time Abdul remind us about our previous night conversation and promise which we gave each other. We said good bye to each other.
It was a one of the great and unforgettable friendship day after our collage life.
Thought:

True friendship multiplies the good in life and divides its evils. Strive to have friends, for life without friends is like life on a desert island... to find one real friend in a lifetime is good fortune; to keep him is a blessing.

In the sweetness of friendship let there be laughter, and sharing of pleasures. For in the dew of little things the heart finds its morning and is refreshed.





Precape:
From:unknown number
Hi..This is jodha Sharma
Will you call me

Done guys...Happy Friendship day to all Dearie's!
Sorry for writing and grammatical mistakes...I now this chappy is worst to reading...Its based on frndship na so i decided to post it though i'm late but still i posted it 😆😉 so thank you all in advance for reading it 😛
Love you❤️
-Aarti


Edited by Akdhalover6898 - 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story Aarti
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Can't wait to read it
Update soon buddy
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Fantastic prologue aarti
Update soon buddy
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Thanks for pm in advance
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Fantastic prologue aarti

Update soon buddy


Title is Someone like you isn't it?
Start is nice
Describing decorations
N then slowly bridegroom
N then call to confirm that bride is Jodha
Then confirming Jalal is the bridegroom
Jo n jalal engagement party
All waiting for jo
But she met with accident 😲
She should survive
N they should have happy ending love story
Update soon buddy

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