- || Bin Tere || - || A ShraMan SS || - [Complete Pg 15]

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Intense, Soothing and Hard - This one will be emotionally consuming and quite serious. Hope you'll like it!

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"Sumo, this isn't working..."
"But Shravan, I thought you will understand! They are my biggest clients!"
"It was my Award, a moment of pride for me. And hopefully for my family too."
"Shravan you're dragging it too much"

He turned around and left.
"Suman I hope you won't chase your dreams till your love is gone"
He sighed and let out a silent prayer to God.




Love,
Mahi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I N D E X

Chapter One - Pg 2

Chapter Two - Pg 4

Chapter Three - Pg 7

Chapter Four - Pg 11
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Your stories are always a treat looking forward to this one !
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Very Interesting teaser Mahi šŸ¤—
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Interesting teaser! And my genre. ā¤ļø Looking forward to it.
Mahi, check MF too. Wifi rocks! 🤪
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Judaai wala SSšŸ˜†
Don't worry I M Sadistic one and waise bhi Jaha ShraMan_Writing waha ShivišŸ˜›
MahišŸ¤—
I love D TeaseršŸ‘
Update Soonish...
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Mahi ka SS , ramya ka OS
Nothing could be better than this on friendship day
Superb teaser šŸ‘
I love intense stories 😃
Update soon meri jaan 😃
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Totally different concept
Want to read it further
Update soon
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Thank you everyone for the overwhelming response! Glad you'll are pepped for this!šŸ¤—
A/N :
Couldn't talk much about this yesterday as I was in a hurry. But i think you'll should know the thought behind this. Recently, there was an article regarding Shravan who shouldn't had fallen in love. I was so bugged by this. I mean Shravan is someone who defines love at all levels. And I couldn't take it. So this is my answer to everyone who thinks Shravan is wrong at this stage of the serial. Even now I think he doesn't have a bit of fault. Not that he's perfect, no one is, but then I love him how he is <3
Also, Suman will always be referred as Sumo here. Coz I think Shravan has always loved Sumo and he isn't pleased with the way Suman behaves.
I hope you'll enjoy this Shravan centric POV of mine. Cheers to Shravan lovers!😳




BIN TERE
-Love Is All About Compromise-


Chapter One

...

Shravan left her standing wide eyed and moved to the kitchen. His eyes depicted struggle and heart was full of frustration.


He rested his arms over the platform, head facing down. He closed his eyes and recalled those moments full of bliss :


"Shravan, will you marry me?", confessed an anxious Sumo. Those eyes, those beautiful, round, black eyes, brimming with love.


Nagmen Hain Shikve Hain
Kisse Hain Baate Hain
Nagmen Hain Shikve Hain
Kisse Hain Baate Hain
Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain
Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain
Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain
Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain


...


He longed to see that now. Something was amiss these days. They felt professional and cold. And everything because of her will to rise. Her ambition of success. Her dream to be powerful. She had risen to great heights, really?


He made himself a coffee. He hadn't realise when and how had his late night partner changed from Sumo to Coffee. Sumo would usually be tired as she came from her meetings. He missed her hand made food. He missed that warmth that they shared. He missed those moments of sweetness that had become past.


...


The Next Day


Shravan woke up. He glanced at his mobile.


Freaking hell! It was 9!!


He saw a sticky note attached to the mirror. It read :

Good morning darling... You were stressed yesterday night so I switched off your alarm. Have a good day sweetie. I'll be late today.

Yours only.


Ohh no! With who's permission had she done that? Only if she knew he had an important meeting at 9 today. But how could she? She never bothered or had the 'time' to know his schedule.

He peeped into his cell. 4 missed calls.

Three from office and one from Pushkar.


Ah! He wasn't used to Sumo's calls anymore. She only called her clients now.

He sat back on the bad, smiling at all this. But he still loved her. Loved her for her thoughtless things she did out of concern for him. The biggest entrepreneur she might be, but for him Suman Malhotra will always be that jhalli Sumo who acts first and thinks later.


Made himself a bowl of cornflakes and left for office. They had separated from Malhotra House long ago, an year after their marriage. She couldn't meet up to the demands of the family and plus they needed some space for themselves. Only if he knew that this space will be the cause of the distances tha had cropped up.


Suman Malhotra - the name behind the most successful Coveted Cuisines - a chain of food business. If it was Food, it was this. They were everywhere, whether it was collaboration with 7 star hotels or Airline food service. Her dream of making it to the top had materialised after years of sheer hard work and passion.


But who knew that rise brought downfall with it and success was synonymous to egoistic clashes?



...



PS - I flipped the title. Updates will be short but highly frequent as I intend to wrap this up pretty soon.


Love,

Mahi

Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Res
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Unress
Me first 😊
Poor shravu ..my heart ached to see him like that 😭
Why is she behaving like this ??
Her priorities changed..work became more imp than shravan
His pain is beautifully penned
Loved this chap from shravu's pov
Song is so beautiful and apt for the situation
Title is ā¤ļø

Update soonish
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