Ishra ss-khinche mujhe koi dor teri ore,pt 6 on pg 113 updt on Sept 5 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Fantastic and also interesting update di..
Wat happened to Raman that he lost his mental balance...
Now Ishita also doesn't remember anything..
Wat is Mrs.bhalla trying to do with ishra ...
Hope ishra will become alright soon...
Plz continue soon...waiting eagerly
Sorry for the delay...



Thanks Nivi
Soon ur every question will be answered
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Posted: 9 years ago
Author's note- I wasn't about to update anything today as u all know I hardly update anything on Sundays but today I had to coz today is a very special day,yes today is friendship day.yes a day to celebrate our friendship. We often says we have wasted our time in yhm and ekta make this show a crap now a days.but we fail to register what the great ekta has done. She has make us a big yhm family.I never ever thought that u guys will become such an integral part of my life when I started exploring yhm world one and half years ago.but today I am here with lots of lovely and sweet buddies.so here I am to wish my each and every friend with whom I ever talk or to whom I never talk.and a big sorry if I ever hurt anyone of u.once again.

HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY

Here is the next update.but before updating this part ,I want to clear some doubts of urs.firstly Mrs bhalla is not Raman's step mom but his aunt and secondly its not toshiji.toshiji is Raman's mom which died long back,this Mrs bhalla is Mrs pammi bhalla,his aunt.hope u all get it now.
PART 2

Ishita was thinking what to do and how to take the information provided to her by her so called mother in law, that she is married and that too to a man who is mentally ill.

Ishita was standing looking at Raman ,who was lost in playing with his big teddy.he was cute and innocent like a kid and smiling talking to his teddy.a smile crept on her face looking at him all lost in himself when Mrs bhalla said- what u r thinking ishita puttar.go inside ur husband Raman is waiting for u.

Ishita look at her like asking is it a good idea to go to him.ishita was looking bit scared.though he was looking too innocent to do anything wrong but still the word that he is not OK,was ringing in her mind.

Pammi bhalla faked a smile and said- go to him,puttar.he needs u.

Ishita got the much needed encouragement and start taking baby steps inside the room.pammi smirked thinking that her plan is working but little she know that this will be her biggest mistake .she went out of the place leaving ishra alone.

Ishita went near him and sat on the bed with some space between them actually she was sitting almost in the corner of the bed.waiting for him to look at her but he was all lost in his world.ishita was just looking at him.finally she said meekly,hello.

Raman look at her and smiled fully showing his dimples.he came close to her and said- biwi tum aa gayi.

Ishita felt awkward with his coming close and step some backward.

Raman- daro mat,mintu katega nahi.he said innocently.

Ishita- mintu??

Raman- haan mintu,he said showing the teddy.

Ishita was just looking at him.he is not at all scary but too sweet and innocent.she smiled a little and said- oh toh yeh mintu hai aur kat taa bhi nahi.

Raman nodded in no .


Ishita- yeh toh bahut sweet hai.

Raman- hai naa,aur main bhi bahut sweet hoon.meri maa kehti thi main duniya mein sabse sweet puttar hoon.he said smiling.

Ishita- achcha,kahan hai aapki maa.

Raman- woh toh mar gayi, papa bhi mar gaye.mujhe chod kar chale gaye.mujhe akela kar diya.he said with moist eyes.Ishita felt sad hearing him.

Raman- u know maa papa went to bhagwaan ji leaving their Raman alone.aisa nahi karna chahiye tha naa.now I don't have any friend other then mintu.kisi ko meri parwah nahi.

Ishita - but ur chachi loves u naa.

Raman was about to say something but remember Pammi's words that she will hurt ishita if he tell her the truth.he got scared and said- yes she is good.but woh meri friend to nahi hai naa.she is not with me all the time.she is not always with me when I need a friend.she said biwi friend hoti hai toh tum meri friend banogi.

Ishita felt sad hearing his words and said to tease him- no main toh mintu se dosti karungi.woh kitna cute hai.

Raman- but main bhi toh cute hoon naa,waise bhi he is my only friend.agar tum usse bhi le jaogi toh main toh akela reh jaaunga.dont take him,he is my only friend .he said hugging his teddy tight.

Ishita- achcha toh ek kaam karte hai.hum bhi friend ban jaate hai.waise bhi biwi or friend toh same hote hai naa.main,aap aur mintu.what say ,friends.

Raman nodded cutely and said- pakke wale friends.

Ishita smiled seeing him smile when the help came to call her for lunch.he has a plate of food with him.

Ishita- for whom this food is.

Help- for Raman baba.

Ishita- why,he will not eat with us downstairs or what.

Help- don't know,nidhi ma'am told me to give him food here.

Raman- its OK biwi,u go downstairs. I will eat with mintu.he said making a sad face.

Ishita didn't understand what is going on in the house.at one side ,pammi is hell worried for Raman and on the other side nidhi is doing such stuffs.she went downstairs looking at Raman.he was looking down trying hard to stop his tears.

Ishita went down only to see the trio where eating lunch happily.she went to them and asked- why Raman is eating alone in the room.

Nidhi- so what u want,hum uss pagal ke saath khana khaye.

Ishita- mind ur language. He is my husband.

Nidhi- huh badi aayi husband wali,woh tera pati n,pammi didn't let her complete and slapped nidhi tight.

Pammi- badtammez ,how dare u call Raman puttar pagal.aao ishita khana kha lo.

Ishita- nahi I will eat with Raman.and nidhi mind ur language next time.she said and went upstairs.

Nidhi was sitting keeping hand on her cheek.

Nidhi- mom ji,u slapped me for that bitch.

Pammi- param tell her to keep her mouth shut or else I will kill her.yeh badboli usse batane wali thi ki Raman uska pati nahi hai.listen carefully,both of u.I want noone should disturb them for few days.I want a good bond between them.uske liye woh pagal aur yeh ladki joh bhi karenge karne do.after that I will play my master plan.param I don't want any kind of mess created by ur wife ,got it.

Param- ji mom.nidhi hope u don't do anything stupid next time.

Nidhi- mom ji u r giving too much importance to her.ek din woh hume le doobegi.

Pammi- param tell her to keep quite or else today only I will drown her in deep water.

Param- shut up nidhi and eat silently.


Ishita went to his room only to find Raman sitting on the bed with mintu.he was talking to mintu.

Raman- biwi bhi chali gayi mujhe chod kar.koi mere paas nahi rehta.koi mera friend nahi tumhare siva.noone loved me mintu.sab mujhe pagal kehte hai.main pagal hoon kya mintu.

Ishita had tears in her eyes hearing this from Raman,she regretted saying his mad as well.she went inside and said- who told u that Raman is mad.

Raman saw her and said smiling- tum aa gayi biwi.

Ishita- mujhe toh aana hi tha.because I am ur friend,aur friend dusre friend ko chod kar nahi jaate.ab main ,Raman aur mintu saath mein khana khayenge.saying so she took the plate only to see the food was cold .she saw that the food was simple as compared to what they were eating.only chappati and curry.

Ishita- aap yeh khaate ho roz.

Raman nodded in yes .

Ishita- but why.this is so cold.

Raman- woh mera haath jal gaya tha naa,so nidhi told me to eat cold food.waise bhi param told that I don't earn anything, just sit idle so I should eat this food.main kuch karta nahi naa,main pagal hoon naa.he said innocently.


Ishita couldn't take it anymore and burst into tears,seeing his innocence and how param and nidhi is treating him.for her pammi bhalla is only the pure soul in the house.

Raman- why u r crying ,biwi.tumhe bhi lagi kya.he asked concerned.then seeing the bandage in her head and hand he said- oh its paining naa.ruko main thik karta hoon.saying so he went and came back with a first aid box.he took out a cream and start applying on her bruises near the bandage.he was applying it and blowing air to lessen her pain while she was just looking at him.just then her eyes fell on his burn .she hold his hand and asked- yeh kaise hua.

Raman- I told u naa,main jal gaya tha.

Ishita- but kaise.

Raman didn't say anything.

Ishita caressed his face lovingly and asked again- tell me raman I am ur friend naa.

Raman- u will not tell anyone naa.

Ishita nodded in no.

Raman- nidhi ne jalaya tha.he said with moist eyes.

Ishita- why.she asked in shock.

Raman- coz I was asking for food when she was talking with her friend.he said wiping his tears.

Ishita hugged him tight and said- I am sorry Raman.I am so sorry.

Raman snuggle closer to her getting love and care from her.

Raman- why u r saying sorry.

Ishita- coz I wasn't around and everyone was troubling u.but not anymore I will be with u always.will always protect u.koi aapko takleef nahi pahuncha payega.

Raman- sachchi ,promise.

Ishita nodded in yes and said- pakka promise.aapki friend aapko chod kar kahin nahi jayegi.

Raman- Raman promise.he said pinching his neck.

Ishita smiled and said- yes Raman promise.Raman smiled hearing this while ishita hold his hand tight.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.and do tell me whether u r liking this or not.any changes of u want u guys can tell.do respond.








Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Edited...
Omg 😭...this was succha😭...I feel so bad for Raman...how can someone be so innocent man...god😭
Nidhi param n pammi 🤬... assholes how cruel can they get...they don't even give him fresh food...
I'm happy that ishita told off nidhi...
She thinks pammi is good but I want her to know about that pammi stupid aunty...
Raman is feeling bad that he doesn't have anyone except mintu...but ishita promises that she'll always be with him...n they're friends...
Ishita felt bad for Raman...even me😭
I want frequent updates if this one please
Continue soon
Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
resssyyy
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thank u fr updating this..❤️
love u...
happy friendship day...

ishu was hesitant to go to RKB..as she was feeling scared coz RKB is pagal..
poor he..😔
bt she finally goes to him whn he was buzy talking with hiz mintu..
ishu was so scared of him k she almost sit on d corner of the bed..
bt RKB was so much into hiz mintu k he dint noticed ishu..
finally ishu said hello to RKB..
biwi tum aa gai...aww..thats cute..
he is adorable.. as always..
bt ishu felt lil awkward with hiz sudden closeness..
bt how innocent RKB is..he thought she is scared of hiz teddy.. nd told her dont worry teddy won't bite her..
she played along with him telling him k she dnt wanna be a friend with hiz teddy only..
felt bad hearing hiz past...😔
poor he..
nidhi troubling him..
uska haath jalaya..😭
how dare she..
good mrs. bhalla slapped her..
kamini..
though mrs. bhalla playing with ishu nd RKB
usko karara jawab milega.. jab iahra ek honge...
nd m waiting fr that..
felt very happy when ishu went back to him to have her dinner...
loved that scene..
bt that cold food..
my poor baby..😔
i want ishita to give good lessen to nidhi..
kamini cold food diya RKB ko..😔
insaniyat naam ki chiz hi nahi hai...
m waiting for the next update...
nd more Ishra scene..
thanks fr updating this soon.. will b waiting fr the next..update soon...
Edited by Sk-Sharmin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Suppper update waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
m loving da update,,,,unknowingly da bond ishra having is really lovable,,,,raman condtn is emotional,,,,ishita shuld b strong in order to save raman,,,,dnt change anythng raksha,,,,its perfectly alryt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Enjoyed reading it
Thanks for pm
Cont soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update..
Ishu should fight against pammi..
Raman is soo cute
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update di
poor raman
he's just too innocent
n dis nidhi n param
dey r aggh
i don't evn want to use dat word
ishita is there
nw she will protect raman
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ishita went near him and sat on the bed with some space between them actually she was sitting almost in the corner of the bed.waiting for him to look at her but he was all lost in his world.ishita was just looking at him.finally she said meekly,hello.

Raman look at her and smiled fully showing his dimples.he came close to her and said- biwi tum aa gayi.

Ishita felt awkward with his coming close and step some backward.

Raman- daro mat,mintu katega nahi.he said innocently.

Ishita- mintu??

Raman- haan mintu,he said showing the teddy.

Ishita was just looking at him.he is not at all scary but too sweet and innocent.she smiled a little and said- oh toh yeh mintu hai aur kat taa bhi nahi.

Raman nodded in no .


Ishita- yeh toh bahut sweet hai.

Raman- hai naa,aur main bhi bahut sweet hoon.meri maa kehti thi main duniya mein sabse sweet puttar hoon.he said smiling.

Ishita- achcha,kahan hai aapki maa.

Raman- woh toh mar gayi, papa bhi mar gaye.mujhe chod kar chale gaye.mujhe akela kar diya.he said with moist eyes.Ishita felt sad hearing him.

Raman- u know maa papa went to bhagwaan ji leaving their Raman alone.aisa nahi karna chahiye tha naa.now I don't have any friend other then mintu.kisi ko meri parwah nahi.
Awsum update i love this part yaar superb updt soon

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