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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

I'm first res!!

Okay due to your incessant nagging, I'm back to unres.. Lets start with how much I loved Anika's bold stance.. Wish she'd do that in the show as well.. Oh well.. thats not happening.. You have to write a sequel to this! There is so much potential here 😆😆

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 9 years ago

Roflsss anu would hv done this

If oberois wouldnt hv disturbed them🤣

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

😆I wish anika had done this...

Can u continue this please? I knwo you dont watch the show but still it would be interesting to see how this would go😊

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#GirlPower!

Awesome one! Wish Anika did something like this. And she can, she's shown quite bold. Does this have a next part? I want to see Shivaay's reaction!

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

Jaw dropping OS. I was all 'you go girl! Brilliantly written! I loved it.

Keep writing. 😊

-V

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

Ridz?! My eyebrows were intent on disappearing into my hairline when I saw this as I was trawling through the forum (as one does 😆)

If this was the result of watching one scene, I'm going to hound you to watch more and write more.

Bindaas Anika should really do this, Shivaay needs his pomposity punctured 😆

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

Haha haha! This was sooo good! It is like so common to have such scenes in soaps where the guy keeps threatening the girl of what he could do to her and holding her really close to his body all the whole doing so! It is clearly a threat on her person but then in the story it becomes him punishing her by spoiling her business, destroying her house or as in this case, sending her to jail. Arrey if you had to destroy her business, why hold her so close to you or get her against a wall and loom over her while preventing her from leaving!?! Then are you threatening her with physical violence? But no they are all gentlemen despite behaving like obsessive monsters.. So to have the whole thing turned on its head by Anika in your story felt so good!

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fallingpieces

@fallingpieces

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

it was a wonder he didn't suffer from chronic neck pain, and his perfectly carved eyebrow that would disappear into his hairline if it went any higher.

Loool, you're the best. Okay so a) PLEASE YOU MUST WATCH MORE EPISODES SO THAT b) YOU CAN WRITE MORE.

Someone has been a total babe and actually Archived and titled each ShivIka scene somewhere on this forum so I DEMAND you use that post and turn this into either a full story or at the very least watch the scenes that sound interesting and turn this into a series of OSes like the "How It Should Have Ended" series on Youtube.

YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO LET THIS BE THE END. HAVE YOU SEEN YESTERDAY'S BED-FALL SCENE? LI PROBABLY HAS IT RECORDED ON HER PHONE. LET IT INSPIRE YOU ;)