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Posted: 9 years ago
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epilogue

after getting married both took blessing from elders ... when they came to ramnath... he refuse to give them his blessing and in anger he said to sumo ..

ramnath: akhur tum nay apna promise nahin nibhaya na ... jo chati thi woohi keya...

all become confused ...

sharavan: papa kaisa promise ...

ramanth: meine is se kaha tha tumse dor rehne ko or is nay mujh se promise keya tha k woh tumse koi baat nahhin keray gi...

sharavan become shocked with this revelation he didn't believe tht his own dad done thi ... he looked at sumo who had teared eyes and they express tht she cant live without sharavan...

sharavan hd sumo hand... and said to his papa

sharavan: papa ap nay kun kaha aisa sumo ko ap jantay thay k mein us se kitna pyar kerta hoon or phr b ap nay aisa keya...

ramnath : haan janta hoon... per tum kun nahun samjhtay yeh laardki tumharay laik hai he naahin ... yeh tumhay dhooka de gi...

sharavan: papa ab yeh lardki ap ki bahu hai or mujhe apnay pyar oer bharosa hai Infact ab to pura yakeen hai kun k is nay sirf ap k ek dafa kehnay per mujh se baat nahin ki kun k woh janti hai k ap ko dukhi ker k mujhe takleef hogi... papaa jis nay ap ki wajah se apnay pyar ki quarbani de di... ap ki baat ka maan rakha woh kisi ko dhooka nahin de sakti... ap nay humesha unski self respect ko galat matlab leya haai or mujhe b wohi sub soochnay mein majboor keya ... per ab nahin papa meine humesha ankh bandh ker k ap per bharosa keya... per ab mein apni dil ki suno ga... or mera dil yehi keh rrahaa hai k sumo mere leye best hai... or agr ap nay sumo ko naahin apnaya tum hum yahan se challay jain gay...

sumo: nahin sharavan plz aisa na kero mere wajah se uncle se dor mat ho... ma baap k begsir life kaisi hoti hai yeh mujh se behter koi nahhin janta...

uncle I m sorry meine apko hurt keya ... per I promise jab tak app khud mujhe dil se apnay bahu nahin maan laytay mera sharavan per is ghr koi haq nahin...

sharavan plz mujhe janaay do...

sharavan silently pleading her not to leave him...

sumo: nanu chalaiin...

they are about to leave...

ramanth saw everyone become sad specially his soon woh was crying silently...

ramnath: ruko suman... shayed sharavvan sahi keh raha hai meine tumhay galaat he samjha hai...

tum is ghr ki bahu ho... or sharavan ki patni... m sorry beta ...

he put suman hand on sharavan... humesha khush raho...

both become happy and they hug ramnath ... sharavan hold sumo hand from back... and look at her lovingly...

all the youngster took the couple in the took the couple in the room and lock the door...

both having awkward situation...

sharavan: to ... yeh thi tumhari majboori... hummm

sumo didnt say anything just look down...

sharavan come near to her and hold her chin and lift up... sorry sumo meine tumhay kitna galat samjha or tum yehi sub papa k leye...

sumo put her hand on his mouth and said sharavan meine yeh sub is leye keya cuz mein nahin chahti thi k tum papa se dor hojaao... tumhara trust un per se toot jaye... plz tumhay sorry kehnay ki koi zarorat nahin hai...

shravan just cup her face and kiss her in uer forehead ... and hug her ... and said to finally hum ek duge k ho he gaye...

sumo just smile and hug him tight for assurance tht she is always be there for him... and said I kove u sharavan ...

sharavan just look at her and said love u too... and hug again...



plz dont hit b with anything I knw its not soo good ... butt next time I promise to give the good story... sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Happy wali ending really nice yr keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
awesome
absolutely loved it
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Wow this was awesome.
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
great , keep writing more pls.

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