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Posted: 9 years ago
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Did I say you never cared...

That all you thought of was yourself...

That you'd change colours as it suits you...

That you hurt me deeply...

Now I know I should have...

Looked beyond the You I saw...

Or the You I wanted to see...

Just seen you for who you are.

For you are the girl who hides your pain,

Giving yourself up for others...

Hiding me in your heart,

Like your most precious possession.

Had I known this before,

I would have seen the girl...

Who waited forever for me,

On that swing...

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Who says you should have...

Known me better...

Not misunderstood me...

Because even after you said I hurt you,

And I did hurt you,

Ignored You, avoided You.

But You cared enough for me...

To tell me you'd always be there...

And tucked me in...to blissful sleep.

That is all that matters to me.

Inspired by the passion behind Suman's hug and the innocence of the preceding tucking in' scene.

Take a bow, cast and crew!šŸ‘

Was imagining Shravan's feelings when he finds out that Suman was never playing a game with him...and that she had waited for him to come back into her life...

And even if he wouldn't be able to express it, how Suman would feel about him...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Always a delight to read your posts... keep it coming more often 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely.
I guess group waiting is going on.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank U guys! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: noexcuse

Lovely.
I guess group waiting is going on.


group waiting?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chick, you are awesome.. These lines are love!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely Chickā¤ļø
Beautifully put the feelings of Shravan after that hug!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Infofan

Soup, this is lovely.



šŸ¤— Nandy!

And thank U all, once again. ā¤ļø

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