Moments In Time - An Oberoi Siblings FF (Chapter 3 on Page 3) 30 July

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rahul_coolaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Such a amazing Ts...
I can actually feel like I am seeing all the incidents happening infront of me. ...
Feelings of all the characters are so well described

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I just read all the parts and I literally started crying😭...I am not exaggerating...that was so heart touching, so sweet! Great work, and a really nice concept! Keep up the good work👏

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Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

👏

Read All the Parts in a Go 😃

You won't Believe me, this Coincidence happened with me .

I was Reading Part2 of Your Story when Shivay was To be Born and at that Moment itself meri Niece who's 4Months Old came.

My Aunt Asked me to Play with Her and take care of her.

And I was like 'Kya Coincidence hai, idhar I'm reading an Os on babies and at that time my Chotu Cousin also Comes '😆

Lovedd all The 3 Updates 😳

Read all Of them In one Go itself😆

Keep Writing more and Do Pm me whenever you write next :)

Love Kriti:)

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Both the part was axing I likegheway you describe om and shivaay nature and rudras coming wonder how priyanka will come

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Debalina Dey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Wow. Just wow. Beyond words. You are amazing!!!! It was touching, but at the same time cute & funny too. Please continue super soon. Waiting like very very eagerly.

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