Twinj Drabble : Parenting

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"EVAAA", screamed Twinkle angrily as she called out to her 6 year old daughter

Hearing her mother scream, little Eva hid herself behind her father

"Kya baat hai Twinkle,tu chilla kyu rahi hai"?asked Kunj peeping from the first floor

Twinkle looked up to find Kunj looking behind him again and again nervously

"Kunj,abhi ke abhi neeche aao aur saath mein apni beti ko bhi lana jisse tumne itna bigaad ke rakha hai"

"Papa,mumma se kaho ke Eva so gayi hai", whispered Eva from behind him

"Aaj toh tumhari mummy mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi", whispered Kunj back

"Twinkle woh Eva so gayi hai"

"What? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai,Eva ko meine 2 min pehle hi khana diya tha"

Oops,Kunj was gone.

"Dekho mein janti hun ki Eva tumhare piche khadi hai aur tumhe yeh sab kuch kehne ko bol rahi hai.Chup chap abhi ke abhi dono neeche aao"

Kunj knew he didn't have a choice but to listen to his wife.Taking Eva's hand, Kunj slowly came down

There stood Twinkle whose face was red by now because of her anger and beside her was their neighbor Mrs. Singh

"Arre Mrs. Singh,aap yahan achanak?"

"Achanak nahi Mr.Sarna,mein yahan aapki beti ki complaint le kar aayi hun"

"Eva ki complaint? Kya kiya ussne?"

All the while Eva was hiding behind Kunj,peeping through his legs

"Kya kiya? Yeh puchiye kya nahi kiya?"

"Okay,kya nahi kiya usne?"

Twinkle glared at Kunj while Mrs.Singh looked at him in disbelief

"I mean,aap itne gusse mein kyun hai? kya kiya Eva ne?"

"Aaj school mein aapki beti ne mere bete ko bohot maara,itna mara itna mara ki who itna dara hua hai ki bed ke neeche se nikal hi nahi raha"

Kunj looked at her confusingly. Eva had hit a boy?

Before he could ask further,Tiwnkle started

"Eva abhi ke abhi bahar aakar aunty se maafi maango"

Slowly Eva came out and stood Infront of Mrs.Singh with her head bowed down

"Lekin mumma"

"Lekin wekin kuch nahi,say sorry"

"Sorry aunty",said Eva innocently which made Mr.Sigh melt

"It's okay,aainda se mat karna",saying this she left

Seeing her chance,Eva started to run when

"Not so soon young lady",said Twinkle sternly

Eva stopped in her tracks

"Kunj tum aise bhud banke kyun khade ho? Yeh sab tumhare ladd pyar ka natija hai"

"Arre lekin mujhe koi batai ga Eva ne usse ladke ko maara kyun?"Asked Kunj while scratching his head

"Woh papa aayush meri best friend ko taang kar raha tha iss liye meine usse bohot maara"

"Kitna maara?"

Twinkle looked at him in disbelief

"Bohot"

Shahbash,with that Kunj high-fived Eva

I don't believe this.Tumhari beti ne ek ladke ko itna maara and instead of shouting at her,tum usse shahbashi de rahe ho? Wah kunj Sarna wah

Nahi nahi mein Eva se bohot naraz hun aur usse daantunga bhi

Kunj turned around to Eva and winked at her

Eva,very bad,tumhe aisa bilkul nahi karna chahiye tha,maafi maango mummy say,said Kunj loudly to add effect

Twinkle rolled her eyes looking at the drama unfold infront of her

They were never going to change.

Sorry mumma,said Eva softly

Before Twinkle could say anything further,

Wow twinkle tumne Eva ko itni jaldi maafi bhi kardiya,wow tumhara dil kitna bada hai,chalo chalo Eva video game khelte hai,with that Kunj picked Eva up and ran towards his room.

Twinkle shook her head and laughed at their antics before making her way to the kitchen.

Who said parenting was easy?

---THE END---

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Unres
K👏
You are sooo right parenting is not only a tough job,it is the toughest job.
I am completely mesmerized.😳
Kunj and Eva's bonding is sooo cute.
Poor Twinkle!what else she can do.
Awww...Anybody do melt by their antics.
Twinkle also got melt and thought they can never change.😃
Thanks K to write it.
And Remember what I told you before never and ever left writing.You are genious.🤗
Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣
Twinkle had 2 kids to care of!
This was adorable!!!! I was smiling through out..
Eva is such a bold kid, i love it. Plus i liked Kunj encouraging her rough behaviour😆

Brilliant buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Kiara Babs..🤗
It's so amazing..
Am afraid becoz I may hav to face situations like this soon becoz Sriya is growing naughtily..😆
I loved it..it's soo cute..
Eva love the name..
I was imagining SidMin..
Kunj encouraging his princess naughtiness is lovely...
Twinkle is poor have to grow up two kids 😆
Thx for pm..
Lots of love.,.,.
Lavs and Sriya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was cute!
Really loved it!
You know what you surprise me everytime you write something.
Sakshi ne tumhe sahi naam diya hai magic! You create magic in each and every story you write!
Actually wasn't going to comment as have a terrible headache but really couldn't help it!
Will give evenore detailed comment if possible soonish!
But just know this much that I really loved it a lot
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh kiara u don't know today my mood was very great ...I was very happy today and reading ur story made my day more great...thank u so much sweetie🤗..it was soo good...twinkle's anger it was so sweet...kunj and Eva's bonding was so cute and how both of them do naughty stuffs and irritate twinkle ...I can't describe how much my smile increased after reading it..love u and ur writing❤️😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohmigoshh !!
cuteness overloaded !!
haye, kunj and eva are so cute, I loved kunj talking to mrs singh
lol, the guy can be so amazing
evaaa, iloved how mrs singh melted, she ought to, its twinj's daughter we're talking about
but yar magic, another of your magic spells on, eh ??
amaing work buddy, keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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adorable...
jab twinj parents banenge toh kitna achha hota...
waiting for more such drabbles
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Res

Unres
K👏
You are sooo right parenting is not only a tough job,it is the toughest job.
I am completely mesmerized.😳
Kunj and Eva's bonding is sooo cute.
Poor Twinkle!what else she can do.
Awww...Anybody do melt by their antics.
Twinkle also got melt and thought they can never change.😃
Thanks K to write it.
And Remember what I told you before never and ever left writing.You are genious.🤗

Thank you so so so much ADIII🤗
love you so much
so so glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

🤣

Twinkle had 2 kids to care of!
This was adorable!!!! I was smiling through out..
Eva is such a bold kid, i love it. Plus i liked Kunj encouraging her rough behaviour😆

Brilliant buddy

Thank you so much ras malai🤗

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