||Shivishkarumya FF: Evaded Agonies|| [PART1 Pg 2 31/7/16]

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As the title states, this work will be on our Three main couples: Shivika, Ishkara and Rumya.
I don't know what made me think of this plot but I just found it very interesting. So I have kinda linked our Ishq girls together, though not in terms of Blood relation.


So here we go..


PROLOGUE: The Night we Fell.

"United we stand, DIVIDED WE FALL!" Three girls in graduation gowns embraced one another shouting and hooting in happiness.

"Five years of hard work, but it's not enough." The principal continued his speech on the podium. "You need your experience, kids. In this tender age, your brain will grasp everything which it wishes to know. So work hard!"

"Did you know that his own son failed Law school thrice?" One of the girls with straight hair and a rose tattoo snickered.

"Shhh.." A gorgeous girl with cute black glasses, hushed her two giggling friends.

The last of them, slightly taller than the rest was counting the number of moons in the bracelet with the initial A that her best friend, Ms. Rose Tattoo had got her.

"AND now it's time to declare the STUDENT OF THE YEAR." The glasses-girl almost jumped with anticipation while the other two groaned. But they did stand upright because their parents were giving them the 'eye'.

"And the person is-"

"KAJOL, KAJOL! KAJOL, KAJOL" The two girls shouted while the third girl, Kajol looked embarrassedly at the ground.

"Hold your horses girls, it's Ishaana Mahaveer." Water spurted out from the mouth of Ishaana's mother. Was there some mistake?

Kajol and the other girl looked bewildered at their BFF for a few seconds and burst out laughing and hugging her.

"NO, there gotta be some mistake." she pouted, almost crying. For Ishaana Mahaveer, to be seen as some replica of academic excellence, was social suicide.

"Ms. Mahaveer, we don't have the whole day. Please come forth and collect your award!"

"ISHU, ISHU! ISHU, ISHU!"

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"Anu yaar, stop counting those moons and listen to me; Those idiots gave me this award for the sake of humiliating me." Ishaana lunged a pillow at her best friend.

"Kaju, isse kuch samjha!" Anu retorted, highly offended at being lunged at by a pillow.

"Seriously yaar, we are so proud of you. Uncle ke marne ke baath aise ho gayi thi ki we never expected to see this day. Achcha hai na?" Kajol said seriously. "Auntie is soo happy. Woh tumhaare liye double shifts karthi hoon. There's a limit to what an anaemic nurse can do. Toh teri zimmedaari bantha hai unko kush karna!"

"Ikr, aaj humari parents graduation ke kushi mana raha hai but Preeti Auntie's still working."

"Kya mein ek buri beti hoon?" She asked slowly. "I mean, you understand my mom more than I do."

"And you and Anika Di understand me more than Kajol Di ever will."

The trio turned around to see Soumya, Kajol's younger sister grinning at them.

"Yo baby, sup?" Anika side-hugged her as she sat down on the bed.

"Moti ho gayi hai yaar." Ishaana said, laughing with Kajol.

"That's not funny, you dhonom. Tum log hamesha hum dhonom ko chidaathe hai!" Anika scowled.

"Sorry Meri Maa!!" Kajol held her hands together and laughed.

"Okay ab hum kya karein?" Anika asked.

"Kya karna hai? High altitude estate of teri parents, paadi aur kohre ke alaava yaha kuch hain bhi ya nahi?" Ishaana countered, sipping her coke.

"Hum baahar ice cream khaane chale? Humaare so-called parents wine peekar chill kar rahe hai!" Soumya suggested

"Par kaha se?" Anika bit her nails.

"I found this awesome ice cream store jaha pe we can mix ice creams together like we please." She was literally jumping with the excitement.

"What do you think?" Ishaana looked expectantly at her BFFs. She was already dying to try this new style.

Anika and Kajol looked at each other..
"Well.. Give it up to my sister to know each and every food store in the world!"
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"Ek chutki sindhoor tum kya jaano, Anika Babu?" Ishaana laughed as she whirled her scooty over the slope.

"Dude, I think maine kuch zyaada hi kaa liya. *cough* *cough*" Kajol whined, resting her head on Ishaana's shoulder.

"Me too ." Soumya hugged Anika as she too diverted her scooty here and there.

The pair of scooty riders decided to race to the estate.

"No way Di, it's dangerous."

"Chup kar, isko dangerous nahi, zindagi kethe hain!" Ishaana laughed. "Tum sirf ice-cream theek se pakad jo hum Adi ke liye kareedha tha."

"-K, ready set AND GO!!"

The girls were having the time of their lives. There were at a draw when they reached the last diversion to their house. While taking the last turn, suddenly the entire estate just..
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This caught the girls off guards and they skidded; both scooties right into the slope. Ishaana and Kajol tumbled into paadi and the scooty exploded a minute later. Soumya escaped with minor wounds and Anika hung onto a thorny tree in the very slope; the last protection her best friend left her, the bracelet had got stuck. But yes, it's a different thing that she would slipped right after them if it wasn't for the Fire Brigade which, on the way to the estate, found them and saved the two.

Kajol's body was found. But Ishaana? Dead or alive? No one knew.

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Awesome yaar...please do continue and pm me next update...
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Plzz I hope Ishana is fine yaar 😭
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It's so damn interesting yaar4👏
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yaar that was AWESOME...do continue like soonish...can't wait.
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A/N: I have made major changes so don't throw Chameli at me.


PART 1: The Life Afterwards

"Main tumhei meri paratha kabhi offer nahi karungi."

"Yea right, jaise mujhe tum jaisi ladkiyon se baath karne ka bahuth shauk hain."



"DI, main patli hona chaahti hoon!"

Anika held the phone away from her; Soumya's voice could be a little too shrill from time to time that she beats her sis, Kajol.

"Stop howling yaar." She sighed.

"HAWW, Anika Sh- I mean just Anika aur 'angrezi', OMG it has to be a cold day in hell today." Soumya laughed, completely forgetting the insult Rudra threw at her a few days ago. She had been since trying to call her sister whodidn't have the furzat to talk till now.

"Shut up Sumi, aur vaise bhi yaha pe mera chaandh uss Bagad Billa ke paas hain aur tumhei mazak sooj rahi hain?" Anika frowned. As long as her chand was with that egoist, she could never forget what happened the night before.

"Bagad Billa?" Soumya laughed. "OMG, yeh kaun hain?"

"Sumi, tumhei nahi lagta ki tum kuch zyaada hi OMG kehthe hain?" She laughed, looking out the window to see Tia and Robin coming in.

"Shut up Di, mujhe achche se patha hai ki aap subject change karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. But can I come and meet you today?" Soumya pleaded. "Main na aaj ek naya type of paratha banaaya hain."

Anika rolled her eyes. Sometimes she wonder whether Soumya is the reason for her expertise in making aloo-puri. And how she knew that she was trying to change the topic? Quickly keeping aside her thoughts, she said:

"Sumi, tum mujhe jab chaahe mil sakthi hoon. Now I GTG, baadh mein baath karthi hain. LOVE ya, Muah!"

With that she hung up the phone, not waiting for any reply. She turned around to see a very intrigued Pinky staring at her, eyes narrowed.

"Who was you talkings?" She asked, her hand moving animatedly.

Anika stared at for a moment but then said, "My husband, Sumesh."

"Tumhaari marriages already hui hain?" Her jaw hit the floor (literally) "OH MY MAATA, aur tum humein informs not ki?"

'Marriages? Maine kab kaha 'marriages''

"Umm. Par- Dadi aur Priyanku ko already patha tha and- mera mathlab hain aur vaise bhi we- hum planning ke alaavah baath nahi karthi... tohhh." Anika bit her lip.
'Seriously, Anu ? Law kiya hain; you should be confident. Fumble na karne ka!'


"Theek hai, theek hai. Vaise bhi mujhe no wantings to knows teri lifes ka chakkar." With that she just left and Anika was like, "OK, now that made no sense whatsoever!"

"Anika putthar!"

"Aa rahi hoon Dadiji!"



"I am like your biggest fan and you are an inspiration to all out there." Ishana was internally cursing her work and luck for making her say such cliche liners. "I mean, normally aap jaise khoobsurat ladkiya modelling aur film industries mein jaathe hain, par aap hain ki mitti ko bachane ki koshish mein lagi hui hain."

"I know right. In fact I hate media and the spotlight, par mitti ki khaathir, hamari mother earth ki khaathir main yeh sab kar rahi hoon." Ridhima had started with her melodrama. "And agar I could change the perspective of even one person, then I have succeeded in my mission!"

"Wow, aap kitne humble ho! Can I have an autograph?" Ishana rolled her eyes as soon as Ridhi- ma turned to get her diamond-studded pen gifted by guess-who.

'Omkaara, tame maine underestimate che. Math bulaana, Marum naam Ishana che. Aur Ishana is mahir in everything.'Ishana laughed internally, smirking at the innocent-sa drama queen in front of her.

"Toh aap aa rahe hain na procession ko lead karne?" she asked sweetly, and Ridhima vulnerable to spotlight complied but not without more melodrama.



"Dadi, Ma. Mujhe goli lagi hain! Bachaaalo! Yeh mere dhonom Bhaiyon ne na mujhe ICU ke bajah yaha lekhar aaya hain. Anika Di, aap theek kehthi hai, mere bade bhai itna bada akadu hain! OWWW!"

Anika couldn't help but laugh at the antics of the boy- guy who she saw as a younger brother. Fine, he could have been hurt but he was just nicked, and now he's doing such melodrama that she wondered what he would have done if he was actually shot.

"Priyanku, paani lekhar aao. Anika Di, main aapke haath se aakri baar aloo-puri khaana chaahtha hoon." Anika and Priyanka looked at each other; they looked like cartoon characters, trying to keep in their laughters. They together strolled off to the kitchen. Hurt or not, he had wished for it.

"Haan haan, agar iski haathon se kuch kaaungi toh teri aakri hi hogi." Shivaay muttered, which only Rudra and Om heard.

"Hmm, phir aap zinda kaise ho? Aap toh unki haath se bahuth kuch kaaya hoga nah?" Om mused, biting his finger nail.

"Like what?" Shivaay frowned at his brothers.

"Joothe!" Om and Rudra exclaimed in unison and burst out laughing. Shivaay looked about, thank god the others were busy talk amongst themselves to notice what was going on amongst the brothers.

"Oh please, main kyun kaao uski joothe? Aur vaise bhi she got names for it all; Lady Gaga or Chameli or whatever!" He sat down, shaking his head in exasperation.

It was only when he saw his brothers staring at him with wide mouths that he realized what he had said. DAMN IT, why was he remembering all these choti si details about her?


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Edited by bloggism2001 - 9 years ago
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Ress
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Aiyoo, Tune Toh pura concept hi change kar dia 😕
Phir bhi , I liked Part 1😆
Annika is Married🤣 seriously 🤣
Update soon 😆
Love Kriti:)
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