Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Lucky 🤗 🤗

Hahaha, I'm glad that doggerel dedicated to Ronnie dahling, got Aish to emerge from her self imposed exile? 😉😊

Now what will get her to write some fics here as well----I don't have any ideas right now for a repeat doggerel. Will think and revert. 🤣

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Hi viji 🤗

You guys give new dimensions to arms wide open wala welcome 😆

Another poem from you would be lovely 😃 and so much love for Ronnie darling is overwhelming 😆 me too literature bug bitten.. K long back .. and big fan of the Bard😳 acha no standalone ffs, not as good a Swasan expert as u guys are 😊but if the plot permits, maybe a scene here in Lucky ka Fana.. it's such a lovely planet no just Swasan 🤗 and of course out V till we throw her to ur dragons ya under Nyna's boots 😆

Truckloads of smiles,

Aish

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky dear...when r u updating???
Welcome dear aishwariya...i hope u enjoy here as much as we do...😃

Talia

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Lucky dear, take as much time u want to update.😉
Hello Aishwarya dear.😊 Welcome to IF.😃🤗So u r the creator of our dear Veronica.😉😳
With love,
Aheli.

Hi Talia, Aheli 🤗🤗 thnku 😊😊 I have so much fun discussing Fana with Lucky, and then reading all ur replies, am so glad I can share Fana and Swasan with y'all 🤗

🤗s to all,

Aish

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: Aish_21

Hi viji 🤗
You guys give new dimensions to arms wide open wala welcome 😆
Another poem from you would be lovely 😃 and so much love for Ronnie darling is overwhelming 😆 me too literature bug bitten.. K long back .. and big fan of the Bard😳 acha no standalone ffs, not as good a Swasan expert as u guys are 😊but if the plot permits, maybe a scene here in Lucky ka Fana.. it's such a lovely planet no just Swasan 🤗 and of course out V till we throw her to ur dragons ya under Nyna's boots 😆
Truckloads of smiles,
Aish

Hey Aish 🤗🤗

Be careful what you wish for yaar. 😆😆😉 My skills in poetry are...well...no comments.😆😆. I normally stick to writing OS/2S/3S/SS, but when I get so much in loouuu with a character or a plot sequence, I can't help but pen down some doggerels. Purely as catharsis. 😆😆 I've written a few on the forum before. 😉😆

Your conceptualization of Ronnie Verma was so deftly done, I just couldn't resist dedicating a doggerel to her. 😆

Please do think of writing something here...if not a full length FF, an OS perhaps? Lucky tells me that you are an incredibly talented writer. Would be such a pleasure to read something by you.

Ronnie thrown in the Komodo Dragon enclosure /Saltwater Crocs pool...Oh my...what a gratifying image. 😉😉 I'm not sure who is more reptilian. 😆

Nyna stalking over her, in high heeled boots sounds fab too. 😆😆

Love,

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Lucky

I had missed out on your last two chapters ,I don't know how but seeing few comments I have been searching left right for them. After quite a search found on the 35 th page. Very touching one indeed.

How will my babies endure the separation. Hope they talk it out and reconcile. Sanskar being the gentleman just won't adopt any extreme measures. If only he would ...I am sure swara being a sensible girl will figure it out soon. Till then heart break for us readers. Anyway I am happy I spent my morning two hours searching for the page.Update soon.

Veena

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Lucky
I had missed out on your last two chapters ,I don't know how but seeing few comments I have been searching left right for them. After quite a search found on the 35 th page. Very touching one indeed.
How will my babies endure the separation. Hope they talk it out and reconcile. Sanskar being the gentleman just won't adopt any extreme measures. If only he would ...I am sure swara being a sensible girl will figure it out soon. Till then heart break for us readers. Anyway I am happy I spent my morning two hours searching for the page.Update soon.
Veena

Hi Veena

I am so so sorry.😕.I will put up an idex in the first Page ..and Did I miss out on PM ??...Sorry Once again..

Thanks a lot for reading and in next update swara and sanskaar will be fine and will evolve more stronger

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

INDEX

CHAPTER 1 - 5 ( Page 1)

Chapter 6 - PAGE 2

CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9A

Please refer to page 36 then 83, 84 and 85 for rest of Chapters😊

Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Hey all

Chapter 9B Updated😛

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Lucky dearest 🤗

I have people sitting here so have to type this very quick but I sneaked a read and could not help but comment asap! You have outdone yourself with this part 👏👏. It was delivered with so much intensity, that each element- the raw burning pain of both to start with, their conflict, their need to resolve but the demons holding them back, Sanskaar's responding searing anger, and then finally that sublimely blissful reconciliation- it all leapt out of the screen at me and hit me square in the chest! I can't describe enough but it was sheer and gripping and I was literally praying that they would sort this mess out between them by the end! And when they did, in that lovely sequence in the Church (could not have chosen a better spot), I was grinning like an idiot.

So many smooth and nice touches here! The immediately striking ones- the play on the very intense and powerful scene in Swara's flat where Sanskaar grips her arms and pins her- it took me straight to that scene from the show which still remans in my top faves list. That was scorching in its power and I liked how you made that your own here. Then the handkerchief - 😳😳- so SwaSan and you combined that so well with your slight twist of the no sorry, no thank you which in your story is of course Swara's rule and not Sanskaar's 👏.

The whole thing was really a roller coaster to be honest. The whole push and pull was executed perfectly. They got so close to solving things but didn't as of course their emotions are so deeply engaged the hurt is too. First Swara's change of anger to make her see she was wrong was so well done and then wham! Sanskaar was angry and her accusations cut too deep. This again felt a masterful re-telling of the MU track from the show but so much better explained from Sanskaar's POV which the show had missed. The anguish from both at all times was so so strong, it made my heart ache 😭. I loved how determined Swara was too and how she went to the office and then followed to his house and the bonding with AP felt fantastic! Of course I got ominous chills from dear Ronnie 🤢- she will surely use the info about Swara in some nefarious way but hopefully our two will fight and win through as I so see them doing 😊. Oh Kunal is ⭐️⭐️ btw:)

But then we come to the end again and it was such a soothing balm, I am so glad that you didn't leave us hanging with that or my night would have been too restless 😊.

I have rambled enough but needless to say, I totally loved this and cannot wait for more. Kudos on a superlative chapter section!

Love always,

Shru x

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Res 😊

I think I already res'd a slot before, but this can be for a repeat post then. 😉

Rushing off to read. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#440

Lucky sweetheart 🤗🤗

Will un res above for a detailed comment when I get enough time from my lappie. But in meantime...what a stupendous chapter this was. Absolutely splendid, so many emotions there...immense hurt, angst, anger at being misled, anger at being misunderstood, and then, the uncanny, poignant soul connect between them, where Sanskaar could literally feel Swara's presence and thoughts...And finally, the blessed sweetness of reconciliation and restored friendship. 😳 (Of course it's more than mere friendship by now...but we'll wait for darlings to figure that out for themselves 😳😉)

Marvelous references to certain unforgettable moments from the serial, reinterpreted and placed expertly for this chapter. I loved it. 👏👏👏

Sanskaar, anguished and agitated, pinning Swara to make her listen to him, the way he immediately lets go when she quietly tells him "you're hurting me", the shock and dismay that he'd again caused her some amount of pain.

Sanskaar reacting in anguished rage at Swara's MU of him...was a lovely reinterpretation of the MU track on the show. So beautifully done. 👏

And later...that lovely sweet moment with Sunny boy and his handkerchief...the dialogue about Swara making and breaking her own rules...👏👏👏 brought back so many golden memories. 😊

Just loved AP, and the way you described her first meeting with Swara. And all the dialogues were superb, as always. They have this wonderful flow...

I just LOVED the fact that you made Swara think things through a bit, follow her heart, and decide to believe Sanskaar----the wonderful, good hearted person that he was. Even without him completing his explanation of his side of the story, about what had really happened. That really moved Sanskaar so deeply, at the church. A soul satisfying moment. 😳😊 And the elements of soul connect, with Sanskaar able to sense Swara's presence inside, was so deftly done. 👏

I will be back for a more detailed take, probably tomorrow. This made my weekend so special. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago