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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heya people i am back with yet another one shot on our yuvreen. Day before yesterday i was watching some web series and You Tube recomended me a series called Love Shots and i gave it a try. I saw one short story and just loved the concept and thought to pen it down on yuvreen.
Idea and concept is not mine but words and feelings are mine. Have tried to give it a yuvreen essence and i hope you guyz will like it.
Enough of my chapad chapad now u read and let me know how was it?

Love you my soulmate

"Mene kaha tha tumse right lo par tum kabhi meri baat sunte hi nahi" scolded suvreen.
"Achaa baba sorry agli baar se teri har baat manunga pakka wala promise" pouted yuvraj.
S: haaa agli baar as if hum agli baar yaha fir aayenge... (she said sarcastically)
And he just sat down on a near by rock feeling sad.
They were going to Pune to attain a conference on India's Next Top Model where yuvi was participating and suvi was his personal designer.
On highway she asked him to take right but he took left and now they have lost their way and sitting beside their car on a rock.
S: acha baba sorry ab sad feel mat karo jo ho gaya so gaya. Now smile and look at the bright side atleast we are together.
He smiled and pulled her and even she sat beside him on a rock.
Yuvi' phone started ringing again and this was for the fifth time alisha was calling him.
S: yeh alisha tumhe baar baar call kyun kar rahi hai agar tum phone nahi utha rahe to yeh muje bhi to call kar sakti.
Y: jealous
S :ofcourse not. Muje alisha se jealous hone ki koi jarurat nahi coz i know u r only mine and wo tumhe mujse kabhi nahi cheen sakti and ab ab to bilkul bhi nahi jab hum...
Y: jab hum shaadi ke bandhan me bandhne wale hai.
He completed her sent and gave her a side hug.
S: yuvraj
Y:hmmm
S: mumma papa bahut naraz honge na humse... hume is tarah
She hugged him and clutched his shirt tightly
Y: shhh kuch nahi hoga. I am sure waqt ke sath mumma papa is baat ko accept kar lenge.
S: pata hai mumma papa ne meri shaadi ko leke kai sapne dekhe the aur mene sab tod diye.
Y: tune nahi mene agar me teri life me na aata to shayad yeh sab kabhi nahi hota.
S: and i am glad ki tum meri life me aaye warna me is waqt is moment par tumhare sath kaise hoti.
He smiled at her and gave her a fore head kiss.
Their moments got disturbed with some vans coming on their way.
S: yuvraj wo log aagaye.
Y:hmmm
They stood up from the rock and moved aside giving space to them.
Holding hands... and looking at the scenario in front of the.
Y: i am sorry muje teri baat sun leni chaiye thi agar me right le leta to...
S: i am sorry muje tumse ladaai nahi karni chaiye thi agar me ladti nahi to tum sambhal lete after all mere cheeteh jo ho.
Y: haa sahi kaha tune agar tu na ladti to yeh sab hota hi nahi
S: haww kitne gande ho tum ab sara blame fir se mujpe daal diya...
Y: haaa to humesha tu hi to mujse ladti hai me kaha ladta hu...
S: acha to tum mujse nahi ladte... juthe muje na tumse baat hi nahi karni.
Y: dekh abhi bhi tu mujse lad rahi hai tuje is waqt bhi yaha mujse bas ladaai karni hai.. tu muje ladna kab band karegi
"Kabhi nahi... " came the voice and yuvreen again looked at the vans and saw her parents and friends crying on their dead bodies lying beside.
Annie: yeh dono ladna kabhi nahi band kar sakte...kitni baar kaha tha inse drive karte waqt ladaai mat kiya karo...
She broke down crying and rathi held her.
R: ro mat annie i am sure bhai aur guggal jis bhi duniya me honge khush honge ek dusre ke sath jo hai.
Yuvi again took suvi into her arms.
Mumma guggal: agle hafte shaadi thi inki... kitne khush the dono kitne sapne dekhe the...
She broke down crying
Puppa guggal: khush to dono ab bhi hai dekhiye lovely jee dono ke chehre ek ajeeb sa sukoon hai... dono ne bahut lamba intzaar kiya tha sath hone ke liye aaj unka wo intzaar khatam hua par is tarah...
Even he broke down crying.
Yuvreen were standing still and watching everything.
The ward boys took their bodies in ambulance and everyone left leaving behind yuvreen.
S: yuvraj yeh log khud ko sambhal lenge na...
Y: haa topper sambhal lenge tu tension mat le... aur waise bhi me ab bahut khush hu.
She looked at him confused
Y: ab tu sirf meri hai topper aur tera sara waqt bhi. Jeete jee na sahi marne ke baad hi sahi aakhir hum soul mates ban hi gaye.
She hugged him and whispered
"Love You My SoulMate"




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg. Such a unique story kdi! Awesome hai.
Do write more.
I am packd with exams. Tom I have maths and I was so irritatd doing trigonometry. This was a refreshment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian

Omg. Such a unique story kdi! Awesome hai.
Do write more.
I am packd with exams. Tom I have maths and I was so irritatd doing trigonometry. This was a refreshment.


Thanks a lot sahas glad u liked it.
All the best for tom exams and if u need any help in trigo ib me on fb ok.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's lovely krupa di. A very uniques story. Dil khush hogaya OS read karke. Indeed they are soul mates. Do dil ek jaan ^.^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yuvreenani

It's lovely krupa di. A very uniques story. Dil khush hogaya OS read karke. Indeed they are soul mates. Do dil ek jaan ^.^


Thank u andy jee
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg..the last part was unexpected..😉😃 But a twist is always to be expected in ur stories..😃
Really really well written..plz do write more when you feel inspired..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mizzle22

Omg..the last part was unexpected..😉😃 But a twist is always to be expected in ur stories..😃

Really really well written..plz do write more when you feel inspired..😊


Thank u thank u thank u
Glad u galz still like my writings.
Yep will write more if smthng so good comes to me again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!the last part was totally unexpected
Reading ur OS after long time
It was very unique
Really luved it 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivinianLaz

OMG!!the last part was totally unexpected
Reading ur OS after long time
It was very unique
Really luved it 👏


Thanks a lot laz
Glad u liked it 😊

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