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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruthi, great piece. This mahanthaji is too shrewd and the brothers shall have some real patience and composed mind to tackle him during the community meeting. May be sree can use Aleena now but not the video as of now. that shall be spared for future.
Since Sudhir silenced Sree, I just hope he is chewing some idea and that works out well. Now all my hopes are on the women folks and both Vindya & Renuka can use the help of thos eladies who have used Suman's worked sarees. Surely some open talks of women can do wonders at times and that can be used as a core ingredient now
Eagerly waiting for the next part dear. provide it soon. We can wait for best friend a bit longer but please concentrate on this one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Jaya I told right. Mahantji is not going to relent that easily. He knows how to play cards. Don't worry next part I am posting soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 44- The Long Night

Suman looked at her colored saree. She had come after bath. Water was tripping from her wet hair, but all that flashed in her mind was the last couple of minutes of their togetherness. She was not sure what she felt about it. Her mind was muddled, confused. Maybe she should get punished. Maybe she crossed the limits.

Sreedhar sat in his room, his head in his hands. Was he mad, did he lose his senses. How could he. What could be she feeling. She had come to protect him. Running, not thinking about any tradition, any social taboos, did he take advantage of the situation. His thoughts were interrupted by Sudhir who was standing on the door signalling him to come out.

Aleena and Gauthami were in their hotel room. They had called and briefed Shekhar on what they had done and observed. Shekhar said he will call back after discussing with their superiors. Shekhar was regarded a high performer already in the network. Even during college days he had anchored some small programmes in their network, He also did his internship there and they were pleased with him and now he was the permanent anchor of their 9:30 pm top rated programme " Maryada ya Bandhan" which discussed on social taboos, the realities, expert views. People watched and responded to it via telephone like anything. Even authorities had taken some actions based on it. Like the arrest of a man who raped a tribal girl. Aslyum to a girl who fled the house as she did not want to get married at the age of 12 etc..

The phone rang. Aleena took it putting it on speaker. It was Shekhar. "See I have talked to the superiors. See this is what I have been instructed at. Gauthami with all the spy cameras and video you immediately start from there. Aleena you wait there. We will have our mobile van sent for you. It will be hidden in the venue where this so called Kangaroo court is happening. You will have our camera man Prashant coming tomorrow with you to shoot the court proceedings without attracting attention. I don't think anyone is expecting us there. I am keeping 10 mins slot booked exclusively for you between 12pm-2pm tomorrow. Whatever the verdict, with video you are going to report directly from Jaipur. Based on what we get I am going to check if it can be the topic for " Maryada or Bandhan". This can be your big career break Aleena do it well."

" Shekhar Suman is at risk. Shouldn't we do something to help her. Talking about career at this point looks hollow for me. I am her friend Shekhar" told Aleena

" Aleena do you think Sreedhar is not breaking at this point. Do you think I am not breaking. Sreedhar was my roomie. We have studied together for 5 years though different batches. Do you think I am going voila over making a story out of his misery. Please understand if we really have to help Sreedhar Varma and Suman Varma tomorrow forget Aleena and Shekhar. Be there as Aleena Mathew Intern trainee of Amro News network and allow me to be Shekhar Shrivastava of anchor of Amro network's top rated programme. We have to do it Aleena. How much hard it is, we have to do it for them "

Aleena nodded and looked at Gauthami. She was already segregating things, packing each camera seperately. Delicately placing the video tape. Aleena knew Shekhar will examine all this and will have the foundation ready for the story so that once the live feed comes in, he is able to bargain with it for a place in his top rated programme.

Sudhir looked at Sreedhar. His brother's shoulders were drooped as if he had already accepted defeat. He held Sreedhar's shoulders. " Sree you want to fight right, you want to fight the tradition right. There is one way tomorrow for you to do it "

Sreedhar looked at his brother. There was a way. " Tell me Bhaiyya whatever it is I will do. But why didn't Papa or Tilak Bhaiyya talk about it"

" Sreedhar Papa didn't tell because he sees tradition the way his generation sees it. Woman has to pay the price. The alternate option doesn't go into their head as they don't think it is viable. It is a difficult option actually. But the way things have unfolded in our case you can go for it. You have the best chance. Coming to Tilak Bhaiyya he is so messed up. His failed love story I don't think will give him any clear sense of thought. "

" Tell me Bhaiyya what can I do. I will do anything. Anything for her sake "

" Sreedhar it is not about whether you will do it, problem is whether she will agree to it "

" Bhaiyya making her agree is my responsibility. You just tell what I supposed to do "

Sudhir told, when he finished they were tears in his eyes. But Sreedhar was calm and signalled his brother to be strong.

" Bhaiyya I want to speak to her "

" I will ask Vindhya" told Sudhir

" Vindhya Bhabi. What will you tell her "

" I don't have to tell anything. She knows. She had known from day one" told Sudhir silently as Sreedhar looked at his brother startled.

Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
deejagi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruthi, thanks its really fast. Yes Sree is confused and is repenting thinking he might have taken advantage of Suman by holding her wait and rolling over her. That shows the sanskar Maheshwariji gave him. And Tilak for sure will be ready to openly accept his marriage Anu if that can give way to Sree and Suman. Sudhir is all set to settle his little brother and sister for ever.
Hope they might ask for punishment for even Sreedhar as even he has touched Suman and both man & woman should have the same punishment. But for sure I don't want them to traditionally trap their parents to accept Suman & Sreedhar's pair.
I so want Aleena & Srikanth and Gauthami's hard ork pays by getting more acknowledgement from public and people should realize that no woman is bad or good omen but are human beings with feelings and they shall be treated as one and not as animals. It woul dbe better they trap Mahanthaji publicly and not just among their small community.
I just hope Tilak gives the final touch by revealing Mahanthaji's filthy hand in spoiling his and his wife Anushree's life for money.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@jaya if all you tell happen then I can close the story in next 2-3 parts😆😆. Also I am happy you have not seen anything more of Sreedhar's confusion 😆😆. First time I am able to hide something from you 😆😆
How can I close the story without bringing Sreedhar and Virender Rajput Suman's dad 😆😆 face to face.
If I had to make tradition accept Suman-Sreedhar, I don't need to write this long. The meeting Sreedhar just drag Suman to mandir and fill her maang and tell she protected him, so to protect her honor he is marrying her. Khatam. We can add some BGM too.
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Shruthi, I didn't want to reveal what I felt as I know you doesn't like that to be revealed openly before you write it in your post. So I brushed it away even when you had specifically mentioned her hair had covered both their faces 😉 and also about the posture 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god u have just given more suspense
shruthiravi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Jaya. I was really thinking how you could miss. 😆😆.
@Ria wait. 2 more parts major suspense will be opened and its aftermath.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 41:
I can't wait to see the plot and hat is going to happen 😉


Chapter 42:
The fun starts 😆
Suman is ⭐️
Pratap is intelligent, but Sreedhar is more 😉

Chapter 43:
Suman to be tried? 😲
Nice. I can't wait to see the suspense, and how the brothers tackle the situation.

Chapter 44:
Hmm. I like this 😉
I can't wait to see how this plays out, though I have a suspicion. I just want to see if my suspicion is right.

P.S. Do we get another update tonight? 😆
Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Shrutha Pratap doesn't understand haarkar jeethne wale of baazigar kehtai hai. And Sreedhar has lost his heart 😆😆.He is head over heels in love which is reciprocated in the other end. Pyaar kiya tho darna kya 😆😆

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