[FF] #YKAGH... pyaar ki iss rah par CH 74 PG-98 - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago
Cathy y u r not posting regularly ?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SelahJoy

Cathy y u r not posting regularly ?

hi selah
glad you decided to come back to the forum again
as for my irregularity
my hands are full with stuff from work and trying to keep up with blogs n other daily things
and when people don't take time to write a short review
it simply kills my enthusiasm to update regularly
it really hurts when it feels like no one appreciates the efforts that goes into all these things
just brought a new software for video editing so I can make better vm
and now I have to learn to use it as it has got so many tools which is crazy
made a new vm last night while trying to test this software
will share it this evening
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Originally posted by: sweetcathy29

hi selah

glad you decided to come back to the forum again
as for my irregularity
my hands are full with stuff from work and trying to keep up with blogs n other daily things
and when people don't take time to write a short review
it simply kills my enthusiasm to update regularly
it really hurts when it feels like no one appreciates the efforts that goes into all these things
just brought a new software for video editing so I can make better vm
and now I have to learn to use it as it has got so many tools which is crazy
made a new vm last night while trying to test this software
will share it this evening


ma to recent storyline se tang a gai thi but now excited ke rahul shot ho or manvi ko akal a jaye
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 50

Everytime their eyes meet, it is enough to keep them in same spot. As minutes start to pass by, the dove eyes stare from rahul makes maanvi blush and steal her eyes away from the eye lock.

Rahul pulled her closer "Jab bhi main tumhari taraf dekhta hoon to tum nazrein chura kar aise sharmane lagti ho jaise..." and leaves the sentence incomplete.

Maanvi looks up "Jaise?"

Rahul~ "Jaise ki iss duniya me aur kuch ho hi nahi sakta jo itna khubsurat aur itna pyara ho. Main kitna khush-kismet hoon jo tum meri jeewansangini ho."

Maanvi gives her cute smile again "Rahul... tum mujhe aise mat dekha karo."

Rahul pulls her closer "Kyun na dekhon? Apni biwi ko dekh raha hoon. Aur aise nahi to kaise dekha karoon?"

Maanvi could barely breath when rahul gets romantic like this. She tries to free herself but he would firm his grip around her. "Rahul please..." she whispered.

Rahul shakes his head in a no' and says "Pata hai maanvi, tum kuch aur kehti ho aur tumhari yeh ankhein kuch aur. Tum sharmati ho, nazarein chupati ho... par tumhari yahi nazarein mujhse tumhare dil ki har baat batati rehti hain."

Maanvi looks up again in his dove eyes "Kya batati rehti hain?"

Rahul~ "Yahi ki tumhe mera... tumhare pass aana... tumhari ankhoon mein dekhna... tumhe bahoon mein lena... tumhari dhadkano ko chedna... tumhe kitna acha lagta hai." Their conversations reduced to whispers. "Tum bhale hi shabdon mein kuch aur kaho, par tumhare dil mein wahi ehsaas, wahi khwaishein hai jo mere dil mein hai."

Just then dadi ji came and knocked on the door. "Maanvi puttar, rahul puttar... khana khane ke liye neeche aa jao. Sab neeche intezaar kar rahe hain."

Maanvi tried to get to door but rahul didn't let go of maanvi yet.

Maanvi~ "Rahul... kya kar rahe ho. Dadi ji agar ander aa gayi to?"

Rahul~ "To? To kuch nahi. Dadi hain wo meri, wo to aur kahengi ki pehle romance karlo phir jab fursat mile tab khana khane aa jaana."

Maanvi~ "Acha? Tumhe kaise pata ki wo kya kahengi?"

Rahul~ "Tumhe yaad nahi ki dadi kya kya karti rehti thi jab humari nayi nayi shadi hui thi? Hum dono ko saath mein akele time spend karne ko mile isliye dadi ne kaunsa idea nahi lagaya... bolo."

Maanvi remembered dadi ji planning honeymoon trip for them, then sending them by road when maanvi tried to avoid going on that trip... making them go on dinner date, and what not.

Dadi ji not getting any response from rahul or maanvi got little worried so she knocks on door again. "Rahul puttar... sab theek to hai na?"

Hearing the worried voice of dadi ji, maanvi says "Rahul chodo mujhe, dadi ji bula rahi hain. Agar humne door open nahi kiya to wo aur pareshan ho jayengi."

But rahul still didn't let her go. To that maanvi threatens him "Rahul chodo mujhe nahi to main dadi ji ko awaaz laga dungi. Phir hume apne aap pata chal jayega ki dadi ji kya kahengi."

Rahul~ "Acha! Blackmail karogi? Awaaz lagaogi dadi ko?"

Maanvi~ "Haan, lagaungi... Agar tumne mujhe abhi ke abhi nahi choda to."

They stare at each other for another moment before maanvi gently gets herself free from rahul's arms and opens the door. "Dadi ji, aiye na... ander aiye. Sab bilkul theek hai... koi bhi problem nahi hai." Maanvi told her.

Dadi ji~ "Sab theek hai to itni der kyun lagayi jawab dene me? Main to bas khana khane ke liye bulane ayi thi. Tujhe maloom hai na puttar ki tujhe apna jyada khayal rakhna hai. Chal maanvi puttar, tu neeche ja Sonali tera wait kar rahi hai."

Dadi ji sends maanvi ahead and waits till maanvi is out of earshot. She then walks up to rahul and stares at him.

Rahul notices the way she is looking and says "Dadi, main bhi neeche jaata hoon. Mom wait kar rahi hongi na. Aap bhi chaliye, phir aapko apki medicines bhi to leni hain."

Dadi ji~ "Kyun... kya chupa raha hai tu mujhse? Dekh, bahane to banana mat. Dadi hoon main teri. Mujhe maanvi ki surat dekh kar saaf pata chal gaya tha ki tu meri bachi ko pareshan kar raha tha. Hain ki nahi?"

Rahul~ "Acha wo tumhari bachi, aur main?"

Dadi ji~ "Tu bhi mera puttar hai par iss waqt tujhko maanvi ko pareshan karne ke bajaye uska khayal rakhna chahiye. Pata nahi ki itni si baat kab tere dimag me ghusegi?"

Rahul~ "O dadi, uska khayal hi to rakh raha tha jab aap aayi thi."

Dadi ji~ "Matlab?"

Rahul~ "Aap ka hi pota hoon main. Baki aap khud jaanti ho. Waise dadi, ek problem hai. Aur aapse acha to koi ho hi nahi sakta meri problem ko solve karne ke liye."

Dadi ji~ "Tujhse na, koi kaam theek se nahi ho sakta. Wo chod, chal bata kya problem hai teri."

Rahul~ "Dadi, main jab bhi maanvi ke saath time spend karne ki koshish karta hoon... kuch na kuch humesha ho jaata hai aur maanvi sharma kar bhag jati hai. Ab aap hi koi aisa full proof plan batao na ki main maanvi ke saath ek acha time spend kar sakoon."

Dadi is very happy to hear what rahul wishes so she tells him a good plan. Rahul is happy to hear the idea and decides to put it into action tomorrow as it is his birthday and it will be a great birthday gift for him to spend an uninterrupted quality time with maanvi.

Meanwhile downstairs, Sonali was discussing about rahul's birthday plans with maanvi. they decided to plan a surprise party with just closest family and friends but without letting rahul know. For sure by evening, raj, Shaleen and Nisha will be back as well. Payal added that to plan the party at the mansion itself, maanvi is the best person to keep rahul busy somewhere else while they do decoration and everything.

Maanvi wanted to do something special for rahul but on payal's repeated insisting, she decides to do something special for rahul away from sabarwal mansion.

Nikhil on lookout for rahul and dadi ji's arrival comes rushing in when he sees them coming down stairs. "Bhai aa rahe hain." he announced in a low voice and everyone stopped the discussion about party plans.

Rahul and dadi ji joined everyone at the table. There were quiet glances thrown around once a while as if it was a silent conversation to keep the secret from rahul. On any other day rahul would have easily picked it up that something is going on but he himself was busy making up plans of his own date with maanvi. His face would lighten up once a while when he would decide on something for his date, like the venue, theme, food, song...

Sonali notices it and asks "Rahul... yeh kya thodi thodi der me tum muskura rahe ho? Kya cha raha hai tumhare dimag me? Koi baat ho to hume bhi batao, hum bhi khush ho lenge."

Rahul noticed everyone looking at him. To avoid raising suspicion from maanvi he needed to come up with an excuse n' fast. "Kuch nahi, bas twinkle se apne songs se related kuch kaam karne ke liye kaha tha. New ideas hain to unko implement karne me mazaa ayega."

Payal knew instantly rahul is lying as she had talked to twinkle about an hour ago about rahul's birthday plans and she had mentioned not been able to get in touch with rahul for past 2 days. Payal decided to not say anything as it could lead to revealing all of their plans as well.

After dinner everyone retired to bed early as everyone had their own plans for rahul's birthday and maanvi was stuck with the responsibility to keep rahul unaware of the party at the mansion.

Next morning rahul wakes up and sees maanvi caressing her wet hairs in front of the mirror. She notices him and wishes him good morning. Rahul wishes her back and keep staring, hoping for her to wish him on his birthday. Maanvi wishes him happy birthday with a smile which came as a surprise as rahul was hoping for something more than just plain n' simple "happy birthday".

Rahul~ "Sirf happy birthday? Kitni boring ho yaar tum. Kuch naya to karti, yeh kya bas happy birthday keh diya."

Maanvi~ "Acha... jaise tum kuch bada special karte ho."

Rahul~ "O hello! Tumhare birthday par maine kya kya nahi kiya tha. Kitni khush thi tum."

Maanvi~ "Haan to? Kam se kam pehle tum thoda fresh ho jao, breakfast kar lo... Uss ke baad dekhte hain na ki kuch special karna hai ya nahi. Abhi neend se pure uthe bhi nahi ho aur bas special birthday gift chahiye. Jao pehle tum fresh ho jao, tab tak main tumhare liye breakfast ready karti hoon."

Rahul smiles and watches maanvi leave. He picks out some cloths and his towel and goes to freshen up. As he was getting ready, another mischief comes into his mind. As he listens for maanvi to come in with breakfast, he plans out his act. And soon maanvi comes in.

Rahul~ "Maanvi! Tum ho kya?"

Maanvi~ "Haan rahul, bolo?" as she places down the breakfast tray on the snacks table.

Rahul~ "Wo maanvi... wo main... apne kapde to le aaya par..."

Maanvi~ "Par? Kya hua rahul?"

Rahul~ "Wo main apni towel bhul gaya hoon. Please meri towel dedo."

Maanvi~ "Offo rahul, kya karte ho tum. Aise to tumhe thand lag jayegi. Itna sa bhi dhyan nahi rakh sakte na tum." She looks around for towel but couldn't find it, so she takes out a new towel to hand it to him. "Tumhari towel to nahi mil rahi, yeh ek nahi towel hai to tum wo lelo."

Rahul acts to not being able to grab the towel as he cannot see from behind the door until he could grab maanvi's hand. As soon as he grabs maanvi's hand, he pulls her inside and pins her down by the wall. At first maanvi closed her eyes shut thinking about the situation as rahul had asked for his towel. But when she felt the touch of cloths with her hands, she slowly opened her eyes.

Maanvi gasps as she comes to full realization of the way they both were standing. Her hands on his chest, feeling his hearbeat... his arms around her, pinning her to the wall, hardly few inches apart. A moment of eye lock and maanvi could only get these words out "Rahul... yeh kya kar rahe ho?"

Rahul keeps looking at her with an un-mistakable gleam in his eyes. He comes even closer to maanvi, barely an inch away as he replies "Aapna gift le raha hoon."

Those words were enough to make her heartbeats rise up but she didn't resist. As if he had just been granted permission, rahul smiled and moved one of his hand to gently caress her hairs, tracing down her jawline, slowly moving to her chin. He lifts her chin up. They both close their eyes as he tilts his head to give her a gentle kiss.

A breath taking moment that even the time wouldn't dare move.

Their moment interrupted when payal comes in looking for rahul to wish him happy birthday, and also for the reason that she wanted to give the birthday present before nikhil. Apparently Nikhil and payal had a bet over who gets to give the birthday present first. Payal has better chances to win this bet as Nikhil is not so good at being able to wake up early.

Payal~ "Rahul bhai? Aap kahan ho?"

Rahul fumbles and replies "Haan payal, main abhi ready ho raha hoon. Main ready ho kar tumse neeche hi milta hoon."

Payal looks around and is just about to leave when Sonali comes in looking for maanvi.

Sonali~ "Maanvi!"

Maanvi instinctively replies back "Ji mommy ji!"

Realizing what they both just did, rahul maanvi looks at each other fearing that this incident would become a teasing session soon for days to come.

Hearing maanvi reply from bathroom as well, payal is standing wide eyed and Sonali notices it. Payal tries to tell Sonali with signs that rahul maanvi are both inside bathroom, which makes them both burst with laugh to have caught rahul maanvi red-handed.


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Posted: 9 years ago
first of all a big congo for 50 th chapt ...hope u reach century soon!!!!
nd the ff part is supreb di!! you made my day..i once read aftr rahul bday on serial u said u planned some bathroom.romance nd really di it came out awesome nd whn they were caught at last😉...i knw u will make rahul's bday special unlike serial whre ravi fougt,..i m really waitng fr nxt part eagerly hope its soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updt.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Originally posted by: arjuhi-forever

first of all a big congo for 50 th chapt ...hope u reach century soon!!!!

nd the ff part is supreb di!! you made my day..i once read aftr rahul bday on serial u said u planned some bathroom.romance nd really di it came out awesome nd whn they were caught at last😉...i knw u will make rahul's bday special unlike serial whre ravi fougt,..i m really waitng fr nxt part eagerly hope its soon...

thank you dear
glad you liked it
yes I had planned two sets of bathroom romance
and other one is still waiting to be brought in the story
and yes this birthday will be special
as far I know in the coming chapters
I m heading towards sending nisha-shaleen away
neha will stay back as new addition to the story
and the truth of Mr. Khurana will be revealed to raj
we will see how that goes
🤓😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
i ll surely wait fr nxt nd i knw its gng to be good...😊😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi Cathy, Congo for 50. Such a nice FF. Esp the Bathroom romance. Waiting for more. Hope cvs take idea from u.
Very good work.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congraulation Cathy on ur half century
update was awesome especially last part

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